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@mishshergill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: Excel00703
Omg its so awesome do pm please I am in love with your story

Thnx radhika...

Will surely pm u...

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sehrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

I loved it

Manan are crazy yrr

Poor cabir... A cupid yr

Cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishshergill

Thnx a lot for your comments...its getting harder for me to digest so much...will be updating soon...thanx a lot for your words...
Luv u sweetie ..😃😳

U deserve the appreciation dear just get comfortable with this now😆...love u too dear keep doing amazing work😃😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome continue soon loved them

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thanx aloadzzz guys for your comments.. So her comes the next chapter...

Sorry for errors in advance...network problem..so couldn't edit it...

A big sowwieee!!!!

CHAPTER 13- LETS CELEBRATE

"Listen! They are on their way ...you know what you have to do..." Called aliya to Aryamann.

"Please Aliya, I really love to see myself everyday in one piece...and who doesn't love there legs...manik will kill me for this" pleaded Aryamann

"If you love your legs dearly then you are to do this...otherwise before manik, we are gonna make sure you never have babies of your own" warned aliya and cut the call brutally leaving horrified and sacred Aryamann on the other side.

Aryamann paced along the corridor outside the flat.

" Mukti , I love you...I can do anything for you" he mimicried himself of few hours ago. " love my foot...here one mistake!...I will be deported to heaven with great dignity...either by manik...if not ...then by this cazy gang... Help me god" blabbered Aryamann out of panic and nervousness.

He immediately straightened himself , stood there like a gentleman to welcome his own grave as manik and nandini arrived and walked towards cabir's flat.

He took a deep breath and started

"Good evening sir, good evening mam, can I have your names please" said Aryamann professionally.

Nandini's eyes widened , seeing Aryamann as a bouncer there and by having as if he has been doing this work since ages...

"Aryamann "" said nandini with narrow eyes , trying to figure the situation out but was cut immediately by Aryamann..

" yes mam...you guessed it right...this is Aryamann khuranna..." Signaling towards his batch at his shirts pocket to already frustrated manik. And pleaded nandini through his eyes to not yo speak .

"Ohky... Its Manik malhotra " said manik furiously and started to walk towards the flat fully prepared to ripe Cabir's head off but was interrupted by Aryamann again.

"Yes!" Manik nearly yelled out of irritation by continuous nagging of that bloody bouncer.

"Sir sorry! but this part is for couples only" stammered Aryamann being sacred of manik " and you left your date outside"

What the heck is that...

SHE. IS. NOT. MY. DATE" saidanik coming dangerously close to Aryamann which made him partially faint out of fear and anxiety.

"Sorry to burst your bubble but I am not dying to be your date even" snapped nandini fumingly on manik's face, grabbing manik's attention.

"Feeling are mutual ! Missy" snapped manik coldly.

"But seeing your attire, any one can say that either you are couple" said Aryamann taking in both their expressions as manik and nandini gave a whatever look with attitude "or siblings"

"NO!!!!" manik and nandini screamed in union with most horrified expressions in the world, looking at each other with impossible look. Aryamann chewed his inner cheeks to stop himself from laughing like a manic.

"Sir you are in black tuxedo with hot pink pocket square and mam is in black and hot pink saree...such a colour contrasts can be decided by couples or SIBLINGS" said Aryamann mockingly with naughty smile with soon lasted by dead glare from manik.

"WE CAN BE ANYTHING BUT NOT SIBLING...SO

SHUT THE BLOODY f**k UP!!!!" manik yelled at top of his voice followed by Aryamann sacred to suffer from hearing aid after tonight.

Nandini bit her lips to stop herself from laughing at the scene in front of her.

"Yes sir!! ...sure sir!!! " Aryamann said like an obedient child says after getting good scoldings.

Manik walked towards the flat alone but not before giving a last glare to Aryamann.

"Shit... Hell no...if he goes inside alone...then that crazy gang is not gonna leave me...if I stop him again ... Then he is gonna eat me alive..." Panicked Aryamann. He rushed towards manik and stood between the gate and manik

And started faking tears.

"Sir!!! I have a family to feed sir...i will be homeless sir...Please sir... My job will be at stake... Sir please u have to go in with a fate only...sir please I have follow the orders..."

Manik closed his eyes in frustration and sighed heavenwords ' can this night get any worse'

Really

"Really... Is it that worse...I thought you are enjoying every bit of night with your nandini"

"SHUT UP" manik yelled to his idotic overactive brain cells, seeing scared faces around him he realized that he spoke it aloud.

"Who gave you the orders" manik asked coldly.

Aryamann relax after hearing manik's tone and replied "Muk"" his eyes widened as he realised what he is going to say...how can he put his ladylove in dangerzone . He hurriedly changed his statment and said what ever name came to his mind "Muk" na...CABIR"

Manik's blood boiled hearing cabirs name ( cabir , you yourself lavishly welcomed your grave to your house tonight )

Nandini's eyes widened in amusement hearing cabir's name ( no one can save you from monsters wrath tonight ...good luck buddy ... Hope to see you soon in one piece)

Manik kept calling Cabir constantly which was not being answered added to his anger.

He turned towards nandini and said "come! Let's go"

"Go! Go where" said nandini in confusing.

"Unfortunately, I have to date you tonight" said manik

"Oh please!!! If you are the last guy left on the planet to date...I would love to fall of the planet than being your date" snapped nandini

(Shut up nandini...what the heck are you saying)brain screamed

"Feelings are mutual, sweetheart... Even worse" snapped manik back.

(Lier lied!! Pants on fire...) His brain screamed.

"Ohky... We can behave like civilian for a night... Can we?" Said manik

"Yes... But being your date is not added in me being civilised"

"Ohky, as mere acquaintances... "Said manik signalling her towards her arm.

"Cool" said nandini, slipping her hand around his bicep as it is perfectly made to be their. And walked towards cabirs flat.

"10 on 10 !!!! Perfect" said Aryamann out of glee, thanking his stars for saving him

Handsome face from being ragged and his body from being dismentled.

Manik and nandini entered the flat. Everyone's eyes were on the couple in awe. Some threw dragger at nandini for being date of THE MANIK MALHOTRA...

They both walked elegantly but manik's eyes were searching for his target tonight- our dearest CABIRAA.

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"This is 58th call by manik...why do I feel like my existence on this planet is decreasing by every passing call" said Cabir seriously which made others break in fits of laughter.

"Com'on Cabir...we have to go outside ...everyone is waiting for the host of party"

Said aliya.

"I would prefer heading towards grave yard than going and facing manik"said Cabir sitting with a cushion in his lap.

"We have performance to do...so don't be a spoil sport dude" said mukti.

"No!!! I better be a spoilsport then getting spoiled forever"

Said Cabir tossing his cellphone.

Then people say i am madhubala" said Navya mockingly.

"You don't need to be sarcastic ...ohky ! Fine ...I am coming...but you all r gonna save me from manik"said Cabir like a kid.

"Of course kiddo!!! I will save you " said cabir's daughter , jiya ...making every one laugh and Cabir bend down and kissed jiya...

"Aye aye captain" said Cabir heading outside.

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Nandini felt a huge smile tugging her. Trying to reign in her smile, she made her way precariously to the near sofa to sit down for a while and rest her feet. These heels were killing her already.

Cursing the idiot who invented the concept of heels and made her life all the more difficult, she was halfway across when she tripped over the carpet and found herself falling. She closed her eyes in anticipation as she waited for contact with the hard floor and the pain that would shoot afterwards.

Strong, muscular but surprisingly gentle arms wound around her waist, stopping her fall and holding her there firmly. She slowly opened her eyes to find Manik's face closer than she had expected and her breathing hitched. She looked into his intense eyes only to find her reflection shining back at her in those intense orbs.

She was mentally admiring his sharp nose, his perfect lips and his strong chiseled jaw when without warning; he hoisted her upright with a jerk and moved away, running a hand through his hair, looking clearly frustrated.

"Why you have to wear heels if you can't even manage to walk few steps on your own?? He almost snapped.

"What?" She asked, still disoriented as a result of their proximity.

"Heels ... Miss Murthy .The way you stumble around makes me think you have a walking disability." He gritted out, trying hard to get her kohl-lined brown eyes and her delectable lips out from his mind. Only he knew how he had stopped himself from kissing her right there and then.He couldn't afford to make such a big slip as that.

And now he was snapping at her to get his aggravation out. He didn't even know if he was more annoyed at her or at himself. He hated the effect she had on him.

"Its not my fault that your friend got me 5 inches heel and forced me to wear them too" nandini retorted angrily

Before manik could say something further lights went off and music started...

Hey listen baby (baby)
I'll do anything for you (you)
Nah I'm just joking (joking)
I even go to the moon for you
So tu ho ja meri ready (ready)
Na I won't wait anymore
I just wanna party (hard) like a animal

Cabir started singing and twirled nanvya around and danced with her. Nandini smiled at them while maniks jaw fell seeing Navya and Cabir together.

I see her dancing
Lagdi outstanding
No love or passion
For you all this was a Fashion
Pretty blue rang di vi jeans
Ton neele rang di kameej
Sadda dil kar gyi tu freeze
Saanu lagni Dutch Police

Spootlight changes to aliya and dhruv.where dhruv rapped and danced with aliya on the tunes with a bright smile on his face and twirled her around to exit the stage.

Let's Celebrate
Let's Celebrate this moment
Moment moment moment
Let's Instagram this
Let's Instagram this moment
Moment moment moment
I just wanna live this moment
Moment moment moment
All the time..
Shake your body
Shake that body
Shake your body
Celebrate
Shake the body
Shake that body
Shake the body
Till it drop

Both the couples cavya and dhriya danced together and did the signature step. Everyone hootted and audience went crazy seeing them dancing...nandini too hooted which made manik to scrunch his ears.

"Slow woman...I don't want to suffer from hearing aid ...typical tapori" snapped manik in anger.

"Oh really ... You yourself were more than willing to date the TAPOORIE...now bear the consequences" Retorted nandini

" you""

"Shut up ... And let me concentrate" nandini cit him off brutally

They call me the mood-mechanic
Tenu fix kara automatic
Ajj kal bade wannabe rappers
Afsos di gal I'm the baddest
Je ho gayi tu meri jaan
Tera ban jaa main Superman
Tenu fikar di kar na load
I feel like one man

Tu lagni puri viagra
Tere moves bade ne kamaal de
Tere lachhe varge baal ne
Saade dil nikal gayi jaan ve

It became most shocking scene of the evening as he saw mukti and the freaking bouncer according to him Aryamann dancing in most friendly and flawless way.nandini smiled as she was enjoying manik's expressions ashe saw Aryamann.

Ho jaaye * *
Har lamha naya ho jaaye
Let's Celebrate
Let's Celebrate this moment
Moment moment moment
Let's Instagram this
Let's Instagram this moment
Moment moment moment
I just wanna live this moment
Moment moment moment

Every one came on thefloor and did signature step together .

Superman now take it slow
Can you stop the time
Ki ho gaya mainu can't describe
I just wanna stay in this moment
Moment moment moment (All the time)

Navya dragged nandini to the floor as all the girls were dancing on the song seductively, So did nandini . manik went crazy seeing her dancing as if dancing to seduce him. He moaned at the thought.

Shake your body
Shake that body
Shake your body
Celebrate
Shake the body
Shake that body
Shake the body
Till it drop (x2)

Manik was dragged too to floor by dhruv and they all did signature step together. And then danced to the fullest as if no one is seeing them. They took a selfie with fab5, Navya and nandini...

Let's Celebrate
Let's Celebrate this moment
Moment moment moment
Let's Instagram this
Let's Instagram this moment
moment moment moment
I just wanna live in this moment
moment moment moment

While dancingthe saw mukti approaching with a trolley containing cake. Everyone was surprised as the cake contained the same selfie on the top which they took few minutes ago.

Mukti lite up the candle and said " let's celebrate the years of togetherness... Happy birthday sweetheart"

Nandini eyes filled up at such a sweet gesture by all of them.

"That awesome mukti ... Thankyou so much guys ..." Said nandini.

"Oh you don't have to thank us ... Credit goes to manik... Cakes idea was his..."

Shock would be understatement for nandini at that point of time...she looked straight into his eyes.

"You did it" nandini whispered with brimming eyes.

Manik gestured her by closing her eyes lightly placed his hand over hers make her cut the cake. While everyone send silent prayers for happiness of the couple.

See I got a bit longer update in one day only for you...

Please do comment ( lambaa...lambaa...) Short comments will not be excepted...

Maximun comments and likes...otherwise no update any soon..

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lavina1612

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Awesome and amazing update...

Aryaman manik and nandini was superb...hahaha...

Whole update was fab yar...

Last scene was best...

Thanks for long update...

Continue soon :)

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Kuushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Awesome update..aryaman for mukti had to face monster...loved the dance and the cake with their selfie is a nice surprise but more than that manik planning it is the biggest surprise..manan holding hands and cutting cake is beautiful nandini will never forget this birthday..but did manik let go of his anger bcoz of the past or is it that he got carried away in the moment ...waiting eagerly for the next chapter...please continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

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tania shahid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#408

that was 1 of the best chap...
i can't believe that manik did all this... it's quite shocking but still i loved it
lots of huggies..
TANIA

Edited by tano.mano - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: tano.mano
that was 1 of the best chap...
i can't believe that manik did all this... it's quite shocking but still i loved it
lots of huggies..
TANIA

Thnx tanya...

Everything is happening for a reason...

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Username padhlo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: Kuushi
Awesome update..aryaman for mukti had to face monster...loved the dance and the cake with their selfie is a nice surprise but more than that manik planning it is the biggest surprise..manan holding hands and cutting cake is beautiful nandini will never forget this birthday..but did manik let go of his anger bcoz of the past or is it that he got carried away in the moment ...waiting eagerly for the next chapter...please continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

Thnx a loadss khushi...

Ofcouse not sweetie ... Manik doesnot do anything without any reason...that's all I can say...