!! MANAN ff !! selfish and selfless* ( LINK TO THREAD 2)

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MANAN FF
SELFISH AND SELFLESS.
By mishshergill

Heya readers,

I m hardcore fan of parth samthan and reaallyy obsessed of ky2 ...i love listening music and reading novels...and engineering

Sorry for earlier crap update...it was a mistake committed out of excitement...

I thought of writing for manan but I love the story line of the serial so much that I don't had heart to add my creativiting in it...because it itself has its own magic...But we really can predict a story for their future...so this is FF is going to be about 7 years later than the current serial story line...

The best thing about ky2 is

Parth samthaan
Manan magic
Bond shared by fab 5

It is going to be on similar line of my current Arshi FF...

Manik malhotra is owner of malhotra industries and have given up singing ( not really),

kabir and Navya are in living relationship with their cute daughter Jiya...( oh god its gonna be so much fun)..


Aliya and dhruv are completely deeply in love and have a son Nikhil ... ( Not married)

Mukti( oh I love her...she is insanely beautiful) is going to be an interesting character to know...has a dead hot lover aryamann...

Nandini and manik relationship is bit complicated to explain right now ...but u will definitely love it in FF

As ky2 is also based on music ...my every chapter will have a song or followed by a song dedicated to it...please do listen to song while reading u will surely enjoy it...

This story begins at point where all love stories end dripping with humour and romance.it encases the true means of friendship , it encases a youths thoughts on society she services in .


With bit of dark intense and mystery...and serves title

selfless and selfish...

So all the lovely fans of ky2 plz do let me know you agree with me or not...and let me know if u r interested in reading my work...and plz do decide its fate after few chapters...

Thanqu for reading it...do share your thought about it with me ...your criticism is more than welcome...silent readers plz do share your viewss
Stay happy stay bless ...

Index


Chapter 1- page 2
Chapter 2- page 4
chapter 3- page 6
chapter 4 - page 10
Chapter 5- page 14
Chapter 6- page 20
Chapter 7- page 25
chapter 8 - page 29
Chapter 9- page 34
chapter 10 - page 40
chapter 11- page 46
chapter 12- page 52

chapter 13- page 59
chapter 14- page 66
chapter 15 - page 74
chapter 16 - page 82
chapter 17- page 87
chapter 18- page 95
Chapter 19- page 104
Chapter 20- page 114
Chapter 21-page 122

Yipieee!!!! I finally got banner for my ff ... Credit goes to cute-aly
I am sure she would have been banging her head in the wall after talking to me...because I am damn choozeee!!!

THREAD 2

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4431013



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi misha am new my name is angela do continue your ff
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Hey misha.. I am Jasleen.. I haven't Ben on this forum for a long time but I have read many fan fictions but this one sound different yet interesting... please continue soon... Great start
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Congo girl 4 new story and wlcm to the forum its awesome man I liked it it's different and unique plzzz update soon
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welcome to the forum mish ...
I'm sneha...Congo for the new story...
interesting concept...
do continue soon...
waiting eagerly for the update...
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Interesting concept...
Continue soon...
Plz pm me when u update nxt...
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Eagerly waiting to read ur story :D !!
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Hello ky2 fans...sup?...thanqu for all your comments and support...thnqu sneha ,Natasha,Angela,humzy, jasleen, angel98 and many a_198 for all your comments and likes...I got so excited that I don't wish to keep my readers wait...so here is my first chapter

This chapter is basically written for you to understand the bond and kind of relationship shared by characters in ff

Oh I love charlie chauhan so much and I cant have enough of it so in this ff she is gonna play really a great role

Ch1: PARTY TIME

"Nandiniii !!!!! What have u done to yourself ,are u on drugs? "Asked mukti suspiciously

"Not again mukti...what happened to u why r u behaving wierdly??? " In a casual tone nandini said fully engrossed in her laptop

"Oh please, I know u r good at words...so just cut the crap and puck it out ...what's going on from last 1 month?...From the day I m back from London ...I feel like I am living with some workaholic depressed devdas version...u r not taking care of yourself...it really hurts ...last night when u fainted ..it took my breath away...you scared the hell out of me" said Mukti

Taking a deep breath and and plastering a smile on d face nandini said " Mukti..I am really sorry ...its nothing but just few deadlines and a lot of pending work...nothing else and I will not be careless with my Health now onwards ...I promise"

Nandini and Mukti shared a hearty hug
" so how was your concert ...I hope you enjoyed your vacation..."

"Oh Nandini...it was so much fun and the concert ...it was out of the world...and the crowd ...OH MY GODD...they all went insane ...it was so mindblowing...but I was need in office today urgently...so no party...but if it would have been a fab5 performance ... No matter what manik would not allow me to skip the success party ...and just for making me skip the party he would have turned my boss life hell..." Said mukti gigglingly... But it died at the guilty expression on Nandini's face...

After a few moment of silence nandini spoke looking aimlessly at front table

" you really miss fab5...you know what mukti...The very first thing I observe about u people was your friendship...your love for each other... Bond u shared was so beautiful and so pure...you guys were inseparable...and now because of me "

Nandini looked straight in mukti eyes. Her face was drenched with tears.She couldn't speak further
Mukti hugged Nandini tightly placing her chin over her head to support and console Nandini but coul
But couldn't stop herself from breaking down remembering her moments with fab5 . Both cried their heart out

"Nandini ... You were never at fault...it was our fate...stop blaming yourself for anything and everything in our lives...and we all are still friend"said mukti cupping Nandini's face

" whom are you tell this me or yourself you might be friend as individual but not friend as fab5 "said Nandini with painful laugh

"Oh shutup now...Go and get ready ...Cabir and Navya must be dropping here by any moment" said mukti tactfully changing the topic

"Why...where are we going?."

"We are going to a party ...sweetheart...I kept a dress in your wardrobe...get ready fast" Said mukti while getting back to her feet and walking to her room leaving Nandini in thoughts( Aiiappa thanx for adding another trouble in my messed up life...I do wanna go to any party ...but who even listens to me)and she went to her room to get dressed up.

Wearing a black gown which ends at her mid thigh wide metal drops and roughly curling up her hair she came out finding Cabir and navya with their jaw touching floor and mukti's grinning face made me conscious ...

"Wow someone's looking beautiful" exclaimed Navya

"Yes and hot too" said Cabir with wide eyes

"Oh thankyou cabir and Navya" said Nandini while giving them a friendly hug

"Ohky enough of praises for today ... Now shall we"said mukti
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"So where is my jiya Jaan..." Nandini asked while settling in car in the backseat with Navya and mukti at driving seat with cabir in front seat

"Oh she is at mom's place tonight...she wanted to have apple pie so she went there " said cabir

" but u could have bought here with u...i t would have been so much fun"

Three of them gave Nandini unbelievably look

"Oh no Nandini...actually u won't believe these dual madhubala collaboration has made my life hell...and I have to take all the tantrum they throw...."

"Really...we have made your life hell...ask him Nandini who makes me cook pancakes for countless number of time till the time he doesn't finds perfect...sometimes if look is perfect the taste is not good...if it tastes good then it is not in proper shape...sometimes texture is not good ...sometime it is over cooked from wrong side ...like srsly pancakes with wrong side...even sanjeev kapoor would not know wrong side of pancake" said Navya disgustedly

"Oh please you have to admit that you make teribble pancake" said cabir shaking his head

"And guys you know what my junior madhubala has beaten all the records of senior one... Yesterday me and navya got indulged in a heated argument where we were not able to decide which school should we get jiya admitted in... And suddenly jiya appeared ...I said that let's just ask jiya after all its her life ...and u know what she said " said cabir with unbelievable look
" 22 tak padhai, 25 pe naukri, 26 pe shaadi, 30 pe bachche, 60 pe retirement ... aur phir maut ka intezaar ... dhat aaisi ghisi piti life thodi jeena chahti hoon mein" said cabir mimicking jiya

Mukti and Nandini broke into fits of laughter...

"Seriously guys ...They both watch Bollywood movies every day and end up sleeping on couch...and I put this hippo and my angel back in bed...she has turned my jiya into pure drama Queen"

Cabir as his usual self went on with jiya- Navya tales when nandini went deep in her thoughts looking aimlessly towards sky
(Aiiappa...time really changes a man...I can't
Believe that they are same Navya and Cabir who fought like cats and dogs ever since they have laid their eyes on each other and now their life revolves around each other...they are not married ...they are connected to each other without any commitment, support each other without any expectation ... The purity and sincerity love they share is beyond and certified relationship... For people around it is complicated but for me it is most beautiful relation they share...)

Her train of thoughts were broken by Navya voice
"Listen cabir, one more word about my cooking I will ake sure you won't have teeth for your whole life to eat food..."
Nandini closed his eyes and let out a sigh with a smile
"few thing never change" mummering under her breath
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Within next half hour they reached at the entrance of club.

Mukti closed her eyes and let out a sigh of frustatution after seeing caller ID on her cellphone

"Nandini could u please park the car in parking lot while cabir and Navya will wait for you at reception with entry passes as cabir is member here... I will just be back after giving this jerk a piece of mind "

"Sure ...please don't be harsh on aryamann"said nandini while getting into driving seat
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Cabir Navya and Nandini entered the club

"Wow!!! Nice decor " nandini said examining the venue . the interiors was bedazzeled in an unusual pattern of golden monkeys , harking back to the unusual but somehow damm styilish

I realized that it was a masquerade and they were offered masks at the entrance

"Where has mukti gone...she should have returned by now" asked Navya.

"You don't have to worry about her ...worry about the caller who must be cursing his stars for rubbing mukti wrong side"

Nandini and cabir giggled imagining the sight.🥱🥱

"You guys carry on I will just be back with your drinks of course" saying this cabir went out of the sight

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"Navya we have to go at moms house right now..." Said worried cabir hurriedly

"Why what happened is everything alright" Navya asked placing her hand on cabirs arm

"Jiya is running high fever"

" Hey devi ma ... Protect my child..." Navya paniked
"cabir let's go..."Nandini said

"No Nandini you please stay here and inform mukti also about our sudden leave...we don't won't to spoil your night"

Before Nandini could open her mouth to argue further

"Please" said cabir and Navya with a helpless face so Nandini reluctantly agreed to them... Okay"

Nandini walked towards bar and ordered a soft drink for herself waiting for mukti to show up

Nandini started observing crowd around...suddenly there was a complete darkness around and she felt a hand slipping around her waist ...she jerked the hand and turned towards the owner of the hand which was going to be no longer his ...she saw a pair of hazel eyes which had held her eyes

"Manik"Nandini whispered looking string in his eyes
he took out a mask and put around her eye ...a slight touch of tip of his finger made her shiver...and in no time he took her hand in his and lead her to the dance floor and before she could realize he placed his hand around her waist and placed her hand on his shoulder ...and song played

Jo tere sang kaati raatein
Jiye jo haseen lamhe
Jo tere sang baati baatein
Bune jo haseen sapne
Woh toh hai ab bhi wohi, khade banke sawaali
Dekhe hain tera rasta, honthon pe leke shiqwa
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha
Ho o o..

Her heart missed a beat when she noticed his eyes full of emotions . she gulped and looked down and saw her fingers already entwined with his strongly but gently


Jo tere sang kaati raatein
Jiye jo haseen lamhe
Jo tere sang baati baatein
Bune jo haseen sapne
Woh toh hai ab bhi wohi, khade banke sawaali
Dekhe hain tera rasta, honthon pe leke shiqwa
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha
Ho o o..

There are sudden unsaid emotions in his eyes ...his touch ... His eyes ...all looked familiar ...which changed into anger

Manga jo chaaha jo dekha jo, mila wohi
Kaha jo socha jo kiya jo, huaa wohi
Ho maanga jo chaaha jo dekha jo, milaa wohi
Kaha jo socha jo kiya jo, huaa wohi
Raahon mein mujhko khushi, phoolon ke jaise mili
Honthon pe mere hansi, kaliyon ke jaise khili
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha
Ho o o..

He roughly pushed her away and she came crushing into his chest while looking into his eyes. Holding his shoulders, she firmly wrapped her arms around his neck while he pulled her closer with a sudden jerk, holding her from her waist. She could feel his uneven breath on my face...and his eyes as if questioning me...to which I don't have any answer

Mere hi isharon pe chale hai waqt bhi
Main hoon woh khiladi jisne sabko maat di
Haan, mere hi ishaaron pe chale hai waqt bhi
Main hoon woh khiladi jisne sabko maat di
Nahin hai mujhsa koi, maine jo mitti chhui
Haan woh bhi sona hui, jalta mujhse har koi
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha

"The game u left mid way will be ended by me"as husky sound of the man reaches her ear ...her heart heated at a faster rate.her face was flushed ...her body got stiff...her eyes still...he smirked watching the effect he still has on her

tere sang kaati raatein
Jiye jo haseen lamhe
Jo tere sang baati baatein
Bune jo haseen sapne
Woh toh hai ab bhi wohi , khade banke sawaali
Dekhe hain tera rasta, honthon pe leke shiqwa
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye, tod gaye, chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha..

Ho o o..

He twirled her around all of a sudden roughly and pushed her away still holding her hand. She gulped when her back touched his front this time when he pulled her closer. She closed her eyes and shivered with the feeling that he was so close to her while he inhaled the smell of her hair and moved toward her ear while making an intense eyelock

" welcome back you worst nightmare" he whispered

Pheww!!! So how was it...oh I m so excited to read your comment your view ... Plz do like comment and criticisms are more than welcome...
Com'on Silent readers you are not taxed for sharing your views or liking it...I don't get dreams about your views...you have to express it...I hope I get maximum genuine comment this time. ...I m so damn looking forward to read your views about it ... More great response I get from u ...more early I will update...

Stay happy stay blessed
Love u loadzz
Mishshergill
Edited by mishshergill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start...
I liked the friendship between mukti and nandini..
Cute nok jok between cavya and manan part was good..waiting for next part... :)
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Wow superb!! Continue soon :) !!

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