Tangled Up With U! Ch15: page 40 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
hmmm
short but meaningful
update worth reading
waiting for shaadi
update soon
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Wow! Srsly u alys managed to give short updates...


Please update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Wow! Srsly u alys managed to give short updates...


Please update soon..


Well was that a taunt? Lol! I m sorry and true Igot art of giving small updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
The story is very nice n unique.. Doing a great job dear.. Keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing update but manik is so rude to nandu i knw time will heal everything keep writing
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good part :) i liked it a lot continue soon !
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Chapter 10




Guys I m sorry I m not able to keep MaNan now far. So skipping everything direct to shadi! Well I never saw any kind of marriage so it's just my imagination.



I walked out of washroom. I had been crying from last two days. India made me really sensitive. U know why? Yesterday was our Sangeet and we had lots of fun. Even I danced. But I can't just find Manik anywhere. What's happening. I Don know what to do. Is he going to avoid me whole life? God he need to understand we r going to live together. I know I m gonna loose my freedom today itself but honestly I m scared all abt our relationship. I never thought of soo awkward relationship. I always fond lovely relationship in my dreams. Yeah I dreamt about everything. That how am I going to be popular how am I going to be good person. How am I go into handle my little family which will be most happy. I wondered everything. But nothing is gonna be same. Nothing.
I walked to my bedroom in my blouse and lehanga. My make up is done. I can't imagine I can look good in traditional piece. Well I can't tell false statement. I do look good. I smiled a little trying and practicing how to do so. I putted my heavy dupatta on my head. My cousins walked in. I remained silent. They all were gossiping. Some were appreciating me but I was avoiding everyone by just nodding or smiling.
My mom entered with large grin on her face. "They are here" she said and everyone exclaimed happiness but I just signed. Everyone left my bedroom for giving my mom and me some time. She came and sat near me.

"I know nandu it's not Ur choice. But I believe that u r gonna belive and trust in our choice. He is a nice guy.u need to help him to go correct path. U have to be always there for him. Even he is bad to u but u will always be good towards him. I don't really know what is his attitude. But I believe he is a good guy. I just want u to be happy always. "she said kissing my forehead. I kept silence while she just stared me.
" If u want me happy stop this marriage please " I pleaded.
" u know we can't do that " she said
" But, I can't... Please I will run away from here " said making her eyes widened. Good Nandini I never thought of anything like this. Never.
" U r kidding right? "she asked.
" Mom I can " I said proudly.
" U won't. "she said and walked out locking my door. Well do u know what I can!
I walked towards my windows and opened it. I grabbed sheets and tied them and firmly threw them down. I know I can fracture my leg and everything by this stupid idea but still I will do for my future. I grabbed my lehanga and started climbing down. I reached down after hard work and stood here thinking what next? Store room. I went to the room near backyard and sat there. I know I won't be allowed to walk with front door so let them find me when they will be frustated then I will go.
I opened door and sat there. Webs and spiders were visible but I just want to stay.

(Manik's pov)
We walked inside house garden where the function was. I m angry and nervous for everything. I know I have to marry her somehow. I want to stage and pura started. After getting sweaty and all I felt to do pee. I asked and went for washroom. I fond two voice talking. I kept my ears close.
"She is not there" woman said.
"But where is she then? " the men voice asked.
" What we will tell manik? "the woman asked. Manik? Why they will tell me!
" God! Nandini where r u.? "the man signed frustated. Wait. What? Nandini. Where is she? Gone? But where?
I decided to show my face to them I walked and fond them as Nandini parents.
" Where is nandini?"I asked them
"MA... Annik... Vo.. " uncle shuttered.
" Where is Nandini? "I asked raising my voice.
" We honestly don't know. She ran away " uncle Saud.
" God! Let's find her"i said frustratingly. One of my part was happy that she left but another part was anger. My dad's reputation will be no more cause of her bullshit. I ran to backyard. Near every bushes. One tree en there is store room
I shd check. I opened the room. It's was quite dark. I robbed mobile from my pocket and switched the torch
I walked to every corner and lastly behind door. There I fond one figure. I looked closely and it was nandini shutting her eyes forcefully as if she can escape.
"Nandini "I harshly wishpered. She lifted her head up finding me. Her eyes got wide open.

(Nandini's pov)
When I heard door opening I hugged myself tighter and sat behind the door. After sometime someone said my name and my eyes opened finding Manik? The one whom I never expected.
"Why u ran away? "he yelled
" Manik we dint wanted this so.. "I said shivering With frightening.
" Get up and back to mandap "he said Taki my arms harshly. I winced at his action.
" Manik I can walk " I said
" U can but u wont" he said gripping it more tightly. It started paining. He tool me to my room somehow escaping from everyone's eyes. He opened the door and pushed me harshly.
"Be here " he said with his teeth and walked out.
I stayed here shocked. After sometime door opened revealing mom and dad.
" Nandi why u did that? "mom cried I remained silent. She is asking as if she don't know. She is spoiling my life.
" bol na kuch " she said politely again.
" Come downstairs " my dad said harshly and walked out. I swear I m never going to talk to any of them. My mother putted some ebasdrop on my eyes and then she and my cousins made me down to the garden. There was manik and everyone waiting for me to come. I walked upstairs with blank expression.

The function started we were asked to put the flower neck to each other and I did with same blank expression. I smiled forcefully for pictures. We were asked to pose which I did keeping stone on my heart. After a these drama we were asked to join in mandap. I changed my cloth in simple red still heavy sare. I walked there sitting next to manik. Firstly pandit jee asked us to hold each other's hand and swear some mantras. Then pray for some second and then do some rituals. Then we were asked to get up and to do pheras. First 3 were done by me walking first and then last 3 for manik to walk first. Last one we stepped together. I never looked in his eyes. I forced my face to be blank. I was asked to sit down and manik putted sindoor on my head.he putted mangalsutra around my neck and that's when one tear slip down. I was done WI my freedom. Back to prison. I let my tears spill down. I breathed in as if inviting new phrase to come



AN:
I know compareto rest of updates it ddoesn't look well. Well I was not writing is part with all my heart. But I promise not part will be amazing and I will put all my writing skills.
Hope u guys loved the scnee.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice yaar and plzz update the next part soon and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update dear,
don't worry it was nice .
Keep it up and update the next part asap .
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Posted: 10 years ago
I didnt understand why is he being so unreasonable? :3

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