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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 11

DARK AND LITTLE MATURE.PLEASE DON'T READ IF U DON'T WANT TO.





It was time to bid goodbye to my family members who spoiled my life.Everyone came and hugged me but I was lsightly standing their not responding.My mom cried more seeing this and my father never tried consoling me.Laslt it was my friend's turn.Ella came and hugged me and then I hugged her back.I cried on the shoulder of Navya's and Steve's they both are my best friends.
I left my life at my home and walked to the car.


We sat there silently.While I looked out of the window Manik drived to car faster as possible.Is he trying to make me scared but now i don't have any feelings left why to be scary?I know we r going to hotel for our first night.But for world war 3 i guess.

At last the car stopped and Manik walked out living me inside.He grabbed our small bags from the dunk and waited for me to come out.I slowly came out with ymheavy lehangha.I feel so life less.I walked inside following him.


Finally we reached our room.Which was small cottage with garden and a room with small drawing area and wahroom.
I went inside in the room and sat oppsite the mirro seeing the vernimone at my parted hairs and then new necklace which indicates that I m married.welcome to new life.I slowly started unclasping my necklace and then my tikka.As i was about to open my earning which was driving my ears crazy.manik held my hand and pulled me.WHich made a little cut in my ears.I felt liquid at my ears.I winced as I realized it was blood.

I looked up to Manik with my briming eyes.His eyes were dark and angry.

"U find it fum marrying me and just being silent?"I shouted.I shutted my eyes with fear.Today I just left my courage at home and I don't have any power to argue.
"Speak up"He yelled tighting his grip at my arms.I would hate to have the bruise at my upper arm.I need to wear something hideous yesterday.


"Fine!Let's start our First night.What say?"He said with smirk flowing on hsi mouth.


I fond my ears paining with the cut and his words.
"I don't want to"I said a lowering my gaze to stop my tears.I m surprised with new Nandini who is scared.I m broken!!
"But I want babes"He said and picked me up in hsi arms.I struggled going out of his hold.

"Plaese I don't want to"I said lower in my voice.I m too tired of fighting with everyone.DiD anyone knows I din't ate anything frm yesterday?It was some kind of PUJA and when I was allowed to eat my hunger vanished seeing my cold life.
He softly kept me on the bed and lied next to me.He ruffled my hair with hsi hand which felt absoulty dirt and rough now.He is forcing me.He bought his face near mine.But I turned around.He growned


"Okahe then starting from back would be fun"He said and gasped.No please I don't have any strength.He undid my dori from back which make my blose loose.He opene one button from my back and touched with his hand which were still rough for me.I breathed in.I m seriously not loving this.I would have loved f it would have been my choic but not like this.



"Manik Please...Don't Do this"I cried and he putted wet kiss on my back.
"Sweetheart.Now we r toghether.MARRIED"He said and I cried little more with his "Married" Choice of word

"Manik...Please...Why r u doing this?"I asked when he putted more wet kisses and ucliped my bra.


"WHy???WHy??U f**king was cheating on me and WHy??"He yelled and i looked around fingin him jumping oof the bed.I slowly cliped my bra and blouse and looked shocked at his
remark.Cheating?And me?
"Cheating?"I asked


"Yeah u did.U DID"He shouted throwing everything.
"Manik please calm down.Listen to me."I said lowly loosing all my strength.I walked to him trying to stop him from throwing everything.

But as I touched his arms he oushed me and I felt back on the dressing table.My lehangha tore with the open drawer and my hand literally cl;osed in it.I yelled loudly in pain.Tears were visible in my eyes.But he was not at all affected.I some how opened drawer and fond my red fingers.I m not able to move them.I cried in pain.And my leahngha is torn making my whole leg visble from my thighs.Then manik noticed me and came and looked at me.
"Can U please call doctor?"I asked still crying.
He walked to grab his mobile but i stopped again.
"Manik leave it!!Can u just help me stand up?"I asked and he nodded.He came to me made me stood up.He looked at my torn lehangha and then down where the blood was visible.I looked at my feet whcih was covered with bloods.I din't thought or felt any pain cause the pain in my fingers was more than them.
I slowly wALKED to the drawing area in my bloody feets.I took my bag and walked to the washrrom and as I locked it I cried hard.NOW only I was abused by my husband.I cried aloud.I know he can hear but that doesn't matter.I walked to the tub and cleaned my bloody feet.I fond small pieces of glss there.I cleaned and then softly massaged my fingers and fond it's moving i think it is just factured and not broken.I wore my night dress.And walked out.I saw the dirty room again and Manik laying on the bed seeing the ceiling.He find me cheating.I dont care what he think.

I walked to drawing area and fond small First aid BOX.I took bandaid and rolled it under my feet and then putted some cream on my ear.I putted some of spray on my fingers to avoid pain.I walked inside room and started clenaing the mess he did.

I knwo we r going to pay for all thses to hotel but sitll the workers may be suffereing doing this and mtey may be questioning abt all these.i kept the lamp and fixed it.I fond Manik staring me.I ignored and cleaned rest.

I broomed all the glasses and cleaned the mat.I did everything and walked back to the room.


"I m sleeping in drawing space if u don't have problem"I said and waited for answer.But he never gave me .I signed and walked to the cupboard and grabbed the blanket and putted them on the floor.If he get nagry after i sleep there.No way IO m going to sleep with him.I will rather sleep at floor.I lied on the floor and covered myself with blanket and tried to sleep. But it never came.




I know it's quite dark.But knestly I love writing DARK!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I PROMISE MAIN YE STORY READ KARUNGI...TILL THE END...BUT U HAVE TO ASSURE ME THAT...TUM MANAN KO NEHI MILAOGI...ITNA SAB KUCH HONE KI BAD V AGAR YE DONO MILE TO SURELY NANDINI HAVE NO SELF RESPECT
SOORY IF I HURT ANYONE BUT ITS TOTALLY MY POV
CONT SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well done dear,
continue soon .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Though it may be dark..but you can't showcase nandini like that..if you want to make manik bad you can at least make nandini stronger..

After this no girl can respect him..

sorry if I hurted you but that's all I can say..

your way of putting thoughts is good..but only you have to make nandini stronger...

Thanks for pm :)

do continue with a bright view :)
n3gn thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update and plzz clear all the misunderstanding between manik and nandni soon and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update...but there's no looking back from here...manik has been an ass and she shdnt forgive him EVER now

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a nice update but please give us some romantic scene between manan we are waiting for that please
waiting for your next update
And please clear the misunderstanding between manam and make them together again
and don't forget the romantic scenes
Keep writing and all the best
shaanmaan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
wow i m just speechless
it was too dark update

continue soon
unnatishukla241 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
I knw it's dark but i love it
Awesome chapter
Plzz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
y did he say that nandini cheated
y manik is being a jerk
nandini ..its punch tym

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