Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
Not monday, its MaNan day!! By the way, cute update.. Luvd the scene of the trio in the office! How much close are they! And CaVya ka ek bhi scene nahi?
I hope ManBir gets job and be responsible. Varna problem ho jayegi! Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both the chapters were just awesome...
your story is attractive that it is pulling me towards it...
loved the bond between navya abhi and nandini.. such an emotional bond...
great going yar..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
So gud yrr... Cont soon :D
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hey simmi 😊 thanks fr updating... rlly njoyed 2 read ur update... i always admired the trio's bonding and hw they care fr each other too good :) manik i guess isnt crs of getting responsible still... surprise visit of navni 2 abhi's office was rlly good... the gyfts dat nandini gave 2 her bff were rlly nyc..so thoughtful of her...manan'sbonding iz getting stnger day by day
looking forward fr ur surprising updates ...tc ...lots of love😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for late update actually bohot barish ki bazase network ki problem thi
Both chapters are awesome and cute 👏👏

love it

continue soon

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Awww... how sweet Manik is...love it...
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amazing


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hehehe lol bichara manik 😃

tc ty for pm
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I feel they both r behaving so kidish

feel like something happing weired soon
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When you are going to update dear
Plzz update it we are waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Heloo my friends and readers. okay first here is big big sorry from my side to all of you for not updating so long.But reason is i got my hand injured that week and still i have to work without any day off for 2 weeks and after work i always crash on my bed tired.

But now i am better and i would try to post atleast 3 updates for you all. And guys i heard parth is leaving the show 😭😭😭and kyy is coming with season 2.

Leave all this and read and read and tel me you like the part and any thing you want me to add and delete some things from my story because as i have already told you that this is my real love story so all these things i wrote happened with me.Even i had best friend (aaina) and then cabir in my life (navjot) ,all of them are there.

Anyways enough of my talk.you guys enjoy and leave your lots of love for me .Okay.i am going to watch movie now.Love you alll😃.take care.

Chapter 13 (part 3)

Manik and Nandini were inside the blanket and playing with each other and Nandini was hugging her teddy bear which she got from abhi and navya.Manik was saying "why you bring it huh,now you gonna love him more not me".Nandini smiled and keep teddy bear on her side and said " yeah now he will be sleeping with us in same bed". Manik make angry pout and said "we will see it in night" and start playing with her again when dhruv knocked and tell them to come downstairs for dinner.

Nandini said "let's go now". Manik was not leaving her and pulling her back again in blanket. Nandini said in low voice "manik, sometimes I feel very bad that I don't know cooking and alya and dhruv they always cook for all of us." Manik smiled and said "it's okay,dhruv likes to cook and alya should at least cook for all,she is girlfriend of elder brother in family". Nandini remember when dhruv told her that manik and alya never shared a good bond with each other.So,she ask manik "if you don't mind sharing,why you kinds cold with alya sometimes". Manik smile was gone and he said "nothing much,I just don't like her much".

And after then they guys leave for dinner downstairs. All were enjoying food when Nandini said "alya,until I find some job,you will teach me cooking so that sometimes I can cook for us".Alya smiles and said "yeah sure,I would love to". Dhruv then asked her about job,Nandini replied "they just have to wait for response now".

After finishing dinner they all went for walk and have chit chat.Nandini notices alya is possessive of dhruv a lot.And she saw alya she talks with manik mom a lot,like ladies gossiping with each other and she was buttering up his mom like typical daughter in law do.Nandini was thinking she can't do like this because she is kind of person who can't butter up so much and she is shy to new persons and moreover she is straight forward girl.She was like I don't know I would mix up with manik mom dad or no,suddenly cabir comes from back and said "deep thinker ahh".Lost in thoughts Nandini didn't realized that she was walking alone as manik was talking to his mum on phone.Cabir asked again "so,what the topic for miss murthy deep thinking,share with us,maybe I can help". Nandini smiled and said "yeah,genius can help me but according to me,genius needs advice first". Cabir raised his eyebrows and asked "in what topic,me the great cabir needs advice". Nandini pats his head and said "you the great cabir needs advice in most important decision of your life that is love,but but you don't have to worry much because the great great Nandini is there to help you". Cabir laughs and said "yeah that I agree,I need love guru for myself".

Nandini turns around and saw manik is still talking to his mom.She signs manik that she is walking ahead with cabir.Cabir asked soi will ask you question first.Nandini nods.cabir said "so if me and navya will not be together so would it be difficult for you to talk with me and thinking I broke your best friend hurt".Nandini smiles and said "you are lucky I am changed and navya is too cool lady,otherwise if somebody broke my best friend heart,I would broke their face instantly."Cabir laughed and said "feisty girl".Nandini then said "see cabir I don't know about you much,but navya she is kind of girl who is very understanding,having patience and go with flows.She would not force you to stay with her or not give you troubles because she don't want any forced relationships.When I asked her that if I can talk with you regarding all this,she just said "straight no". Cabir listening to Nandini said " I like her lot as person but I don't know sometimes I always think I am not ready for relationship.I had this thought in my mind that I will not be independent after so much big responsibility". Nandini turns cabir head and said "looks towards manik,do you ever think that he is ready for my responsibility."Cabir laughed and said "no,never.i always still thinks one day he will mess up all this". Nandini smiled and said "its okay if we or he messed up,but I am still there with him to help him to grow ,to grow our relationship.I had never thought manik would be ready but you know what cabir, when you have someone besides you,who stands with you in your every moment of life,whether it is good ,bad; when you have someone who loves you lot next to you,your life becomes beautiful. You want to share single small life with them." Then she said "I am not saying all this to you so that you can go back to navya;if you want time take time;may be navya is not your destiny;may be you have some other girl in your life but I am just introducing you to other aspect of life".And if in future you and navya will not be together,don't worry,I am not gonna kill you".

Cabir hugs Nandini and said "nice ahh,manik is so lucky to have you in his life.You really love him lot,I hope he never do any mistake". Nandini smiled and said "its okay,if he do any mistake you are there to hit him for me".And both of them laughed. Cabir said "now you tell me what you were thinking before". Nandini said "nothing serious like you". And suddenly manik hugs Nandini from back and said "you are getting my secrets from cabir". Nandini in silent mode to tease manik, remove herself from his hug and said "yeah cabir told me some of your secrets when you guys come to Canada". Manik suddenly balnk face and looks to cabir, cabir said "sorry bro,she just pull out everything from me". Nandini said "manik, I love you so much,why you do this with me". Manik confused asked "what Nandini,cabir lied to you,you know I have share everything with you". Nandini said "no manik,the one secret that was between you and cabir,he told me about that also". Manik hangs his face down and said,sorry baby,I know I sound rude but I don't like your teddy bear sharing bed with us and sharing your love so I just told cabir to kidnap teddy one day".Saying this manik looks up and saw Nandini looking towards manik and cabir was standing with hands on your head and signs him "shit you are dead now". Manik was confused when Nandini comes close to him "So,you want my little baby to kidnapped ahh". Cabir said "manik,you just invite yourself to my room,I haven't tell Nandini anything but now you told her everything and she gonna kick you out".Manik shouted "what!! Shit man!!"

Nandini leaves from there and manik goes behind her.Leaving cabir alone in park,he grabs the phone and text navya "hey,how are you"?

Meanwhile Nandini just faking her anger leaves for room and put blanket on herself and turn to one side of bed hugging her teddy bear.Manik came and switch off the lights and just lay down next to Nandini.Nandini was not moving and she hides her face with blanket.Manik was just silently laying down thinking what to do now when suddenly he heard noise from Nandini side.He suddenly laughed when he saw Nandini was playing angry birds on phone and laughing.When manik removed blanket Nandini turns her head and said "what,I am still angry with you that why I am playing angry bird". Manik laughed and pulls her close to his chest and remove the phone from her hand and keep it on side and said "okay then if you are angry with me then let me give chance to ask for your forgiveness".Nandini blushed and try to push manik but manik force was lot then her strength. She said "it is cheating manik". Manik start kissing her on face and said " no,it is not".

Manik puts his lips on Nandini lips and start kissing her passionately and Nandini losing herself kisses manik back.

Otherside abhi and navya were having dinner and discussing Nandini gift.When navya phone got vibrated and she saw cabir message but she didn't reply. Abhi asked "late night who is texting you". Navya avoiding said "just some college friend". After dinner abhi starts talking on phone with mukti and navya went to her room and opens the message and thinking what to do now reply or reply not.

She just sits near balcony and thinking about her life that how since they were kids they always stick together no matter what. They guys were always there in happiness,sorrows every single moment of life they shared with each other.She never feel that she need anyone else in her life.But when sometimes she talk with cabir,it seems good to her.But she can't force him to be together and she is kind of girl that if she would go in relationship, that would be not just for some months or weeks; That would be her man of life relationship.

Lost in all thoughts,she message cabir "hey,I am good.U say how are you? Long time ahh"? and she drifted in sleep and her dreams.

So,one more thing.Wait and imagine what gonna happen between manik and nandini.I will you leave you guys waiting for that.roman😉😉😉ce would be continue in next part.So,stay tuned okk

Edited by simmii25 - 10 years ago

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