Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 36

Originally posted by: manya_189

So adorable !!

Originally posted by: princypriya

u r story was too good

finally manan r together

i liked the frienship between 4 of them

they cn take any risk for sack of her happiness

plz make canya yar she deserve his love yar

i like the part when dhruv was telling the each word of abhi to him

the resoponesibilites of brother was good

continue soon

take care

Originally posted by: Smileygirl23

Hey don't be sad yaar! Ur story is too cute.. I want more of it, like how manan will be managing together and ofcourse cavya! Give that cabir a piece of mind.. Navya deserves his love and ya show some cute wala moments of manan ha! And and Manik ko thoda matured bana dena.. Varna woh phir se koyi gadbad kar dega.! He he
love
Ayisha

Originally posted by: ruchibagra

wowww...

aweeesssooommm 😉

Originally posted by: mounicareddyc

Awsme update,nd dnt worry abt da comments,i noe dey motivate u,bt trust me even tough we dnt leave big comments,im in aww wid ur writing,nd will b waiting fr ur next update ..

Chapter 13 (part 1)

Nandini hugs him tightly and was blushing with manik's words when suddenly their hug was broken by knock on door.Cabir was shouting from outside "manik,Nandini is here for long time,leave her for some time.We all are going for coffee,come outside ,waiting for you."Manik shouted from inside without opening the door "no,I don't want coffee this time,neither does Nandini,she is tired and already half sleep so go away and don't shout." Saying this manik winks at Nandini and both of them were laughing. Cabir said again "okay you big fat liar" and cabir went away by tapping so hard on floor.

Nandini laughed at cabir words and said "why u lied to him? We can go for coffee and I am not so much tired.Manik pulls Nandini towards him and both of them lie down on bed. remving her hair from face he said "but I don't want you to go and leave me".Nandini pushes her away and said "okay,I am going to change and wash my face and feet and you can also change now into night clothes.Manik roll his eyes and said "oh,night clothes ahh..So smart you are". Nandini hits him with pillow. Manik asked "why do you gonna wash your feet"? Nandini said "I did daily and then next is your work to do".And she left to washroom to change and manik was still playing on ipad.

After 20 minutes when Nandini was back she saw manik was still in same position with ipad on bed and he was playing games on it.Nandini throws the pillow at him and shouted why haven't you changed yet"? manik making baby face said "because you didn't take out night clothes for me". Nandini smiled and said "you are not baby and when I was not here you do it yourself".And she start opening the closet .Manik hugs her from back,kissing on her neck said "before sometimes I change ,sometimes I don't and sometimes I sleep without clothes but all what matters is now you are here to care for me". When Nandini open the closet she smiled and said "thank you manik",she saw manik has empty closet side for her.Manik said "you never have to say these words to me."Nandini then took out his clothes and give him to change and she jump on bed with phone.Suddenly she shouted "NOOO" when she saw manik was changing in front of her,he remove his shirt.Confused manik asked her "what,I always change over here and you are not stranger to me and I am not stranger to you".Nandini covers her eyes with pillow and slide under blanket when manik comes and pulls her out and said "I am done "and smiled at her.Nandini hits him and told next time he should go to washroom and then she told him to grab the body lotion.Manik with big smile on his face said "ohh ,you are going to give me body massage".Nandini laughed and said "no,you are going to apply lotion on my feet and this thing you will do daily". Manik makes an angry pout when Nandini pull his cheek and said "you want my ankles to go hard,you don't want your baby skin soft".Manik smiled and said "but then I should be getting goodnight kiss everyday". Nandini smiled and manik start applying lotion on his feet.Nandini apply her baby face cream and on hands when manik laughed and said "ohh,baby cream for my baby".Manik asked "you do all these things daily like every single night".Nandini nods and was busy in applying cream.

Both of them lied down.Nandini on left side as she can't sleep on right side. She opens manik arms and puts her head on his arm near his chest.Manik smiled and kissed on her forehead.

Manik said "okay,lets watch something now. Movie or some series.He plays vampire diaries season one and they guys start watching.Nandini was laying on manik arms and when some horror scene will come she will just hug him tightly and manik smile at her. After sometime manik said "Nandini,do you want see some movie or no".He waited but no response from her and when he rotate ipad light towards her face,smile just spread on his face.He just kisses on her cheek and eyes and capture the picture of her cute,adorable face which was looking like baby when she was sleeping.He put the ipad side and hug her back and went to sleep.

Morning dhruv was knocking on manik door continuously and Nandini in sleep was saying "no navya,I still want to sleep go away."But again after some time dhruv knocks again when Nandini jumped at bed and she was not able to think for 1 or 2 min where she is.When she opens her eyes fully and turn around and saw manik,she calm down herself .Dhruv was still out there knocking,when she opens the door and wishes him good morning.Dhruv wishes her back and said "sorry to disturb you guys but actually abhi and navya has been calling you since morning and you were not picking up the phone so they got worried and abhi called me to check on you and to tell you to call them back." Nandini said "shit,what time is it"? Dhruv smiled and said "it's already 11 in morning and you can call them back and we are going to get breakfast for all,so you guys can freshen up and also wake him up otherwise he will be sleeping like this".

Nandini smiled and nods and then close the door when dhruv left.She slowly crawl on bed and went into blanket and when she grabs her phone she was like "shit,they guys will kill me now".Her phone was on silent and In one hour there were 30 miss calls,20 messages from abhi and navya.She saw manik was til sleeping so she went dialed abhi number and in first he picks up the phone and shouts "where the hell were you? Are you safe and I told you not to put your phone on silent or switch off.Tell me are you alright."And abhi voice was shivering and he pass the phone to navya to ask her if everything is gud.Navya grabs the phone and put it on speaker and holds the abhi hand.Nandini said "I am sorry,I was sleeping and I didn't notice the time and I think manik put my phone on silent in night.I am perfectly fine."I was just tired may be that why I overslept.Navya please tell relax abhi and tell him I am ok.I am sorry.Navya turn off the speaker and said "Nandini you know it's just you who can relax him.We were so worried since morning when you were not picking up the call.Thats why in end we have to call dhruv."I know now you are with manik and we don't want you to disturb you again and again but you know he has to hear your voice once and when you didn't respond after one hour he panicked."

Nandini realizing her fault because she remembers "When she was in America and she called abhi to tell him about the night when aaryaman played with her,that time abhi didn't pick up the phone and after that she was on the verge of doing something with her when suddenly abhi just reached on time and hold her to as abhi got to know everything.She controls herself when abhi was with her and just relax and told abhi about everything."From that day whenever she will not pick abhi call for some time abhi would get panicked. Navya said " where were you lost."? Nandini didn't say anything "and said I will come in evening to see you both".Navya said ok and cuts the phone and turns back but abhi has already left for work without having breakfast.Navya texted Nandini "let's meet in afternoon and we will apply for some jobs and have lunch together with abhi.he left".Nandini replied "okay".

When she felt manik arm on her.Manik hugged her and said "morning baby".Nandini smiled at him and kissed him "good morning".He pulls Nandini again to his side and both of them were under blanket again.He garbs the ipad and click their selfie when anndini said "no,its all my messy hair".Mnaik smiled and said "no,I love it".Nandini said "okay now,wake up,its too late now.they guys went to pick up breakfast.fresh up". Manik opens his eyes and saw Nandini face and smiled.Mani said "with whom you were talking so early morning".Nandini said " you put my phone on silent last night".Mani kreplied "yeah,I thought,it might disturb you so I put it on silent".Nandini kisses him and said "baby,next time don't because abhi panicked,there were 30 miss calls".Manik said "shit,he will kill me now". Nandini smiled and said "no,he is not monster". Nandini leaves the bed and said "I am going to freshen up and then it's your turn".

Manik took the ipad and the pic he clicked last night and the one he clicked in morning,he moves them to folder named as " start of new journey with her.day 2".He go back to day one and smiled when he saw the pictures of his room he cleaned and the gifts he bought for her.

Nandini walks in and manik just lock the folder and keep ipad on side.Nandini said "go now,fresh up and give him towel".Manik walks to freshen up and Nandini clean up the bed and arrange it and start arranging her clothes,when alya knocks on the door and said to come outside as breakfast is there.

Dhruv,alya,cabir, manik and Nandini were having breakfast together when dhruv asked her "what she want to do today". Nandini smiled and said "that she is going with navya to apply for some jobs and then will have lunch with her". Manik looks towards her with open eyes as he didnt know anything about it when cabir shouts "ohh looks like someone will be left alone now".Dhruv smiled and said "Nandini give some your intelligence to both of these lazy guys so that they can also apply for some jobs".And Nandini and alya laughed hard whereas manik and cabir make face.

After breakfast alya and dhruv leave for work.Cabir went to his room leaving Nandini and manik in living room.Manik was sad that Nandini will be not with him for whole afternoon.Nandini holds his hand and said "ohh,I will try to come back early and you know we have to take responsibility for our self now that's why I want to do job.Moreover I can't stay all day ta home".Manik smiled and said "I know,its just I would miss you".Nandini pulls his cheeks and said "you and cabir also go and apply for some job.Now you got girlfriend to give her gifts and she winked at him".Manik pulls her close and said "yess boss" and said "I will drive you there".Nandini said "no,I will go myself,you guys go and apply for some jobs too".

Both of them get ready.Nandini texts navya to get ready as she will pick her up.Nandini hugs manik and said bye and promise she would be back early.Manik kisses her Nd let her go.

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