Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy plzz post nxt part yrr i m deadly waiting for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eagerly waiting for next part
Plzz post fast 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update soon next chapter
May be manik gone mad to know about nadu job but after that he love nadhu alot
I just pray for nandini
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Posted: 10 years ago

So, guys her eis next part.Sorry for late update as i was lot busy in job and sick😭😭..I hope you guys enjoy it. and pleaseee let me know about this part as it is really close to my heart.

Chapter 8(Part 2)

Nandini hugs manik so tightly and manik was enjoying and embracing her love so he just hold Nandini body in his arms.After she go near to his ears,puts kiss on his cheeks and said "Happy birthday baby,I love you so much". Manik smiled and replied "Thank you my life and I love you too.And it's my birthday so kiss on cheeks.Thats it."Nandini blushed and said "Just wait baby,this is just appetizer for you,start of your birthday evening."Both of them go to upstairs with dhruv,aLYa,mukti and abhi.So,dhruv announce that all can get ready as they are going to pub to celebrate.Nandini and navya showed them rooms to get ready and boys were sitting in living room.Manik texted cabir "Do something,I want to be with Nandini alone today."Cabir saw towards manik and replied "Whats for me then if I will get you and Nandini alone tonight.".Manik gives look to cabir and texted him back "Nothing,but if you will not do then you can what I can do and cabir."When suddenly dhruv said "Both of you are texting each other,Why so secret". Cabir said "Ask from manik". Manik was going to say something when abhi interrupts "So, manik what gift you got today".Manik signs thank you to abhi and replied "Still waiting for special gift and all other boys tease him when suddenly all of their were gazed at their ladies.Navya was wearing red dress with black blazer on it.And was wearing little makeup. Mukti was wearing black shorts with open hair And mascara on her eyes. Alya was wearing short pink dress with pink LV in her hand.And When all girls were coming and reach to their boys and suddenly Nandini she walk out of her room and manik eyes were popping and open mouth.Nandini was wearing red color dress with black color mix in it and her hair was open and straight.She was having just light black smoky eyes and was carrying her red prada black in her hand and red high heel jimmy choo.She was walking an dcabir said in manik ear "Close your mouth otherwise fly will enter and Nandini will not kiss you."Manik punch him in stomach and smile at Nandini.All of them praise Nandini and she was smiling at manik waitinf fo r his response.He smiled at her and all of them leave house holding hands.All were leaving when Nandini was locking the door ,manik hold his hands on her waist and plants kiss on her bare neck.Nandini just got shivered by touch of manik lips and close her eyes.Manik whispered you are looking beyond perfect today.Waiting for your gift.Nandini turn out,moves close to him and whisper "You said no gifts " and pushes him and said come now fast.Manik shouts "No,I want my gift today and I will get it for sure".Nandini texted somebody "All is done.We are coming shortly".

All of them went to club then.Dhruv has already book their table and everything.So,as soon they enter there was small cake in front of them.Manik blows the candle and cut the cake and first piece he served to Nandini .All were clicking pictures and then cabir and dhruv applied cake on manik face and Nandini were clicking the shots of manik face.Then they guys were having drinks except manik and Nandini becoz they still have their own party pending. All of them go for bowling then.Manik texted Nandini then "Still waiting for my gift ".Nandini replied "Keep waiting then".after 1 hours when all were fully drunk,they all decided to go to hotel and sleep now.Manik got big smile thinking now it's alone time with Nandini.Abhi and nav thinking now it's alone time with Nandini.Manik and Nandini drive them to hotel. After that Nandini said manik now let me drive.Manik excitedly "Yeah gift time now". Instead Nandini drove to their home.Manik was like making puppy face "Home". And then winks "Ohh only you and me alone in home.intresting."Nandini smiled at his thoughts and said "Common now let's go upstairs. And close your eyes.".Nandini was holding manik hand and let him follow her to upstairs.She let manik sit and she changed herself into shorts and small top and wear flats now.And then took manik to balcony and let him open his eyes.As soon he open his eyes he was like "wowww Nandini,its my perfect birthday today."In balcony Nandini has set up small table and chair and wine on table wid all candles in their balcony,stars shining on them.In front of balcony there was billboard and she paid somebody to write down on billboard "Happy birthday to love of my life."And there was small cake in front of them.Manik just hugged her and said "You make my day perfect.Thank you so much."Then she make him cut the cake and she was just taking all small moments in her camera.Both of them then lie down on back and start having drinks and was looking at stars when Nandini grabs her gift from back and place on it manik chest.Manik suddenly adjust himself and was like "Woww so many gifts,I like the way my night is going".Like baby he was opening the gift and Nandini clicked the picture of him and as soon he opens he shouts "Omg Nandini ipad.How you know i need this."He kisses her forehead and said "Thnx".Nandini was happy that all her hardwork was worthwhile.Then suddenly said "But why you spend so much money.Tell me."Now but first thing thing I am also having gift for you.He was talking with her and moving his hand into nag and he notice there was letter in it.So, he stopped talking and open the letter and as soon he start reading he become silent and he was reading it all of things both of them struggle,each day they survived without each other.The way Nandini described it.He just got heavy heart and eyes while reading and when he turn it back and was at last part that was about job he looks at Nandini and then again continue reading and when he finish it.He open his mouth to shout but then he remembers all efforts and control anger and said "Nandini you lied to me,was you out of your mind, I know about your like your parents give to you.I knew how you was princess in your home and how sensitive you was and you did job for this gift.All along for 1 month you lied to me even when I was here.Navya too.Both of you.Manik was saying all this with heavy voice and suddenly he turn his face and got tears on his face.Nandini said "Manik let me click your sad picture first."Manik said In high voice "Nandini shut up.You give your body so much pain.I don't need that need which costs me your life."Nandini then hold manik face in her hands and remove his tears and said "This gift is with my money,my love.I want to do it for you.If you were at my place,I know you would do the same thing for me."I know I lied to you because I know you would never allow me to do job and my health Is perfect now.".Manik then asked her "So,you quit job now right. And don't lie this time."Nandini nods that she quits now.Manik said "This gift will always be with me forever,it would always remind me how much loving and caring my girl is".Nandini then asked "Where is my gift now"?

Manik said in low voice "Yeah I am thinking whether to give it or no.Nandini got angrier and stood up and when she was about to go ,manik holds her hand and grab from her waist and pull her clos tot him that their bodies were close to each other.Manik said "Have I ever told you all the happiness you bring to me,have I ever told you all that you mean the world to me.Just in case if I haven't I want to tell you that you are the best thing ever happened to me.I want us to last.I don't want to have amazing couple of months and then it all be over in flash.No matter what we run into and no matter how hard things get,I want us to be stick together.And don't ever get jealous.No one like no other single girl out in world can replace you ever in my life."

Nandini was having tear in her eyes ,she was going to saying something when manik placed his finger on her mouth,she close her eyes and he turn his hand back and he grabbed and slipped a diamond promise ring in her ring finger and kiss on her fore head and whisper "I want you to be mine forever.I love you".

Hope you will like it..

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Harbinger thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
This is my first ever comment on ffs.. Being the silent reader just couldn't control anymore.. It's just amazing n wonderful.. Keep it going.. Awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome superb update can't wait for next part continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update...
Loved it.
Continue soon.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww
just beautiful n most romantic
birthday surprise
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Harbinger

This is my first ever comment on ffs.. Being the silent reader just couldn't control anymore.. It's just amazing n wonderful.. Keep it going.. Awesome

Thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
woww...wonderful update i jus loved it..ur a such an amazing writer..i love this ff u penned it beautifully..plss try to update regularly..continue soon

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