TRUE LOVE NEVER BE SEPERATED (PART 50 a&b POSTED ON PG 75&76) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
hi it is a good concept. do continue soon and please pm me when you update:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
nandu ko kab pata chalega????????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Amazing update..
I hope MaNan will soon get to know..
Please PM me when you update..
Continue Soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
HERE IS NEXT PART😃😃😃



Part:8

Nandini cuts the call and look around but she didn't noticed manik so, she went to his room and she gets shocked by seeing Manik as he is sleeping on his bed
So, she goes and wake him but he didn't woke so, she left the room with a smile by seeing him as he is sleeping like a small baby
In musicroom nandini is thinking about lyrics and suddenly she listens phone is ringing but it's manik so, she thinks not to disturb manik and attends the call
Cabir: Bro where are u ?
Nandini: Cabir it's nandini.
Cabir: where is manik? why his mobile is with u?
Nandini: Actually we are practicing in manik's house for competition but at middle i got call from my chachi after that i didn't saw him so, i went to his room in search I saw him sleeping so, i attended the call as phone is in music room
Cabir: It's ok
If he wakes tell him that we will come there at evening
Nandini: ok

After cut the call cabir laughs loudly
Mukti: are u amd?
Cabir: Manik is sleeping as he tired by preparing for song
Alya & Dhruv in unison: What?????
All are laughing
Mukti: Manik is practicing
Cabir : Ya with Nandini
Alya fumes by listening it

At evening
Cabir, Mukti, alya and dhruv reached manik's house
Nandini: Hi guys
Cabir: Where is Manik
Nandini: He is still sleepig

suddenly Manik comes down in sleepy mode
Manik: Gud mrng guys what happend that u came here early in the morning
Dhruv: It's not morning
Manik: Then what it's mid night
Mukti: see the time it's evening 6.30 not morning 6.30
Manik looks at them confusionly
All are laughing by seeing it
Manik: Stop it guys
U nandini why didn't u wake me up
Nandini: I came to wake up u but u didn't listened me

Cabir: ok guys we will do party now
Manik: No, yar we are preparing song
Nandini: don't worry I completed the lyrics we will tune it tomarrow in college
Manik: When ?
Nandini: While u sleeping
ok then bye guys chachi will be waiting for me
Manik: Wait u can go after party
I will drop u
Nandini: No, Manik
Cabir and dhruv also requested her to stay so, she accepts

Manik opens the bottle and pours it on all of them but nandini feels uncomfortable
Cabir: what happend nandini?
Nandini: I don't drink
All are in unision: What?????
Nandini: Ya guys I don't like drinking
just i will come by cleaning my self
Manik: wait i will show u washroom
Nandini nods


Edited by anusha3003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Amazing update 😃
Loved it 😛
continue soon...
thnx 4 the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
hey
read ur ff in one go nd loved it..
amazingly wriitten u penned it beautifully..
nd u leave me in suspence why nandu is shocked to see maniks room..?
pls update fast nd if possible pm me also...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
A cliffhanger!
Plz update jaldi se
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
HERE IS NEXT UPDATE

Part:9

Nandini cleaning herself in washroom and comes outside
Manik handovers her a towel and comes close to her and asks so, u doesn't drink it's strange
Nandini: What is in strange in it
Manik : nothing ok, then where is lyrics
Nandini gives his copy to him and manik about to see it but cabir calls them to come fast
Manik : i will see it later

Manik and nandini comes down
after they came down all are celebrating party and cabir handovers a juice to nandini

After sometime Nandini excuses to leave
Cabir: Wait for some time
Nandini: Chachi will be waiting
Manik: I will drop u so, wait for some more time
Nandin: ok

So, after some time all are left except nandini and cabir
Manik: I will drop u both let's go
Cabir: No I won't come with u I need to talk with u
Manik: Ok stay here I will drop nandini and come back
Manik and Nandini in car both are silent suddenly nandini sees kulfi and shouted

Manik: what happened?
Nandini: i want kulfi
Manik: road side foods are not healthy
Nandini: manik i want
so, manik goes and bought one for her
Nandini: for u?
Manik: I don't eat, let's go
Nandini having icecream and in her own world by tasting it
suddenly a dog came between so, manik applies break
but by this sudden break nandini losses her control and falls on him and her lips touched to manik
both look in embrassement and look othersides

Manik: nandini what u did see my shirt was spoiled
Nandini: fault is ur's u applied sudden break
Manik: if any one apply break they will fall front not towards side
Nandini keeps silent and calls him Angry bird
Manik: what did u called?
Nandini: Angry bird
Manik smiles by listening it then they reached nandini's house
so, nandini waives him bye and goes inside

Manik came back to his house but cabir is still waiting him
Manik: Cabir are u still waiting for me
Cabir : I want to talk with u bro
Manik: tell yar
Cabir: What is going between u and nandini
Manik was shocked with his question
Manik:What?????
Cabir: don't act




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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
cabira ki aakho se kuch bhi nahi chupta!
nice chapter

is there something special in the lyrics written by nandu which would remind manik of pari?

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Love it
continues soon
Nd pm me when you update 👏

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