TRUE LOVE NEVER BE SEPERATED (PART 50 a&b POSTED ON PG 75&76)

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IT'S A STORY ON TRUE LOVE WHICH NEVER BE SEPERATED EVEN BY DESTINY😊😛😉



PART:1

A fine morning a small boy running on the road with a bunch of yellow roses and came near to the house and ran into house, and climbs up and enter into a room. There he found empty bed so, he looks around the room. A voice come and says u already late, so, the boy turns back and a small girl comes near to him and again said that even this time u didn't wished me first.

Boy: it's late because i went to buy the flowers for u, but remember at any cost in future i will wish u first

A LADY : Ohhh! my poor little Manik don't worry , now come to break fast and i made all ur favourite food pari

Pari: thank you MOM.

Both Manik and Pari comes to near the dining table, The boy handovers the flowers to that girl and wishes her happy birthday

After finishing the breakfast he waives bye to her and left to his house
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Suddenly a boy (Manik) wakes up with a call and attends it ... ok sure i will be there at at within 30 mins, by saying this he came out from bed and thinks it is a dream and went to fresh up and came out and drives his car to college
all his friends (Mukti, Dhruv, Cabir) are waiting for him at the canteen

he came at sit beside his friends and asks what's the matter and where is Alya

cabir: Manik oh! Alya wan't to go to U.S.
Manik: but why?
Mukti: Don't know
Manik: How do u know?
Dhruv: She messaged

Manik tooks his phone from pocket and see the msgs and tell them that she didn't send to me

Cabir : but she sent for all of three
Manik: then what about me why she didn't messaged me
Dhruv: come on buddy we will go and talk with her.
Mukti: ok let's go

By this all of them arrived at Alya's house But maid said that she had left
So. all of them with sad faces came out but before enter into a car dhruv remembers something and went back to alya's house by seenig dhruv all other's follow him

Dhruv: manik see this it's a locket which alya kept with her always it means she didn't went
By seeing that Cabir calls to Alya, they hear phone ring from the room so , they follow the noise and went to the room, But they didn't noticed Alya there
so, they came down

Mukti: where is Alya?
Maid: She had left
Cabir : where?
Maid : I don't know?
Dhruv : but her phone is at home?
Maid: I think she forgot but why all are u so tensed, she will return after some time
Cabir: Whattt?
Maid: yes, she went out she will be back and even she had flight at night
Manik: so, she is going at night
ok then guys will wait for her here only and after she comes we will talk with her

Alya comes back to house and shee sees fab 4 and gets shock
Alya: U all are here
Mukti: Oh! that we came to help u in packing that u are going to U.S. so, we thought to help u
Alya: Fine but i packed it
Manik: Why are u going to U.S. suddenly
Alya keeps silent
Cabir: why are u silent?
Manik lost his temper and shouted on her
Manik: Alya what the problem is with u? why are u not telling anything

tears rolled down from Alya
Mank : Wait are u leaving india because of me??

By this question all looked at manik shockingly!!!
Manik in anger Alya tell are u leaving because of me
Alya nodded her head in yes

All are shocked and Manik in anger goes away from there




I WILL CONINUE SOON WITH NEXT PART UPTO THEN PLS SHARE UR OPINION ON STORY BY COMMENT





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OS: realisation of luv


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Posted: 10 years ago
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i like your story please continue soon and when you update pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mysterious..
does manik loves aliya????
kah do ki yeh jhut hai...
bt i thnk he ignored her love thts y she is leaving...
plsss yaar continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is this pari OUR nandu?
Alia you cant just leave the country because of a guy
Besides he isnt your but nandus

Keep updating and pm if possible 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i just love it
plz contiun e
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start do continue soon anusha as i dont kno yr name
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next part will be posted at tomarrow
so, until then keep commenting 😊😛😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here is the next part😊😛


PART:2

At Manik's house
Manik is tuning his Guitar suddenly he feels someone kept hand on his shoulder
he turns back and he sees a girl and his eyes are completely full of tears

Then suddenly he sees his phone is ringing but he doesn't pick it then Cabir comes to his room and sat behind him
Cabir: Bro What's the matter ?
Manik: Cabir pls leave me alone
Dhruv: No buddy tell me what happend between u and alya
Manik: Nothing
Cabir: Then why is she leaving India

Suddenly Cabir's phone rings It's Mukti
Mukti: Cabir come fast to city hospital
Cabir : Why???? What happend
Mukti: Alya Fainted
Cabir: What??

By hearing all the three rushed to hospital
Cabir: Is Alya fine
Mukti : Yes but she is still in unconscious
then doctor comes out
Manik: What happend Doctor?
Doctor: She is alright but she fainted due to stress, she can come into conscious within 10 mins

By hearing this all are rushed into the room
After sometime Alya comes into conscious

Alya: am sorry guys
Mukti: Why are u living India??
Manik: guys pls can u go outside I want to talk with her
Cabir: But what happend manik why are u upset
Manik doesn't reply
Cabir speak up manik
Alya: I will tell u cabir , that I... I...
Mukti: What you ...
Alya: I proposed Manik
Cabir: What???? How it is possible????
Alya: But he rejected me
Mukti: why are u shoked cabir?
Cabir: Oh! it becauses manik doesn't love any one
Dhruv: What's wrong with U manik???
Manik: Don't think high... cabir told like that because I don't want to give place to anyone in my life
because already that place was taken by pari , my angel
By listening it all are shocked
By telling this he left from hospital

Mukti: Who is this Pari??????





Pls do the comments and share ur opinions on this story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaapeee my predictions was ryt...
Manik rejected that's y she was leaving. .
Aub hum sabki pari kab aayegi. ? Nandu angel show up fast. . Manik and we need u...


Good going dear. But one request. . PLEASE WANT LITTLELONGER UPDATE.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its beautiful...!!!
like manik...we all r waiting for pari...!!!!!
pls update soon...take care

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