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Posted: 10 years ago
when u gonna update.. itss been a quite long time.. n I missed ur story very much.. plsss do fast ..n update.. plsss.. waiting.. I hope u do fast...plsss... :-( :-( :-( :-( :-(
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 9

as the sun rays were falling on my face,I start rubbing my eyes, I stretched out my arms n find that manik was lying besides me on his stomach,his one hand was around my tummy,a smile crept on my face,as if we wr husband wife sleeping with each other,
husband wife???? r u crazy nandini? like seriously husband wife?? kuch b...
but this feeling...! ahhh I pretty much like this feeling
I was ruffling his hair ,wr he was sleeping like a small kid,suddenly I felt a fast wave like wind near my left ear,but I didn't paid much attention towards this n was continuously ruffling his hair.he was smiling in his sleep
again I felt a fast wave of wind ,as if someone walked past with the speed of light

kk...ko..kon hai? I whispered in low tone

end of nanDini's p.o.v
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3rd person p.o.v

nandini some how managed to utter those words,"ko..ko..kon hai"
sweat was clearly visible on her forehead, wr her one hand frozed in his hair

NANDINI," someone whispered in her ear"

nandini was sweating more after hearing this scary voice

NYC NAME NANNDIINII," again unknown voice scared her to death"
and within next moment,she grabbed manik's neck
manik softly opnd his eyes n gave a smile to her,wr she gave him an evil grin

gud morning,"manik whispered softly" without sensing anything

GUD MORNING," nandini replied with stern look"

manik: so wat r u up to?

as nandini was still clutching his neck

nandini: I want to kill ur love

manik: that's impossible,now leave my neck...,look u r seducing me *manik winked at her*

nandini didn't left his neck

manik jerked off her hands as he felt lil uncomfortable, for d first time manik was feeling uncomfortable by nandini's touch
he touched her forehead,"nandini tum theek hona"
nandini jus nodded her head

manik was playing piano n nandini was watching him,while manik closed his eyes,nandini twisted her own arm badly,she cried out in pain,manik immediately ran towards her

what's wrong with u nandini,ye kya kar rahe ho?,"manik said to her"

nandini twisting her arms more,"kyu,tum b toh yehi mere sath karte ho"

manik was shocked now after listening this
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manik's p.o.v
nandini ko toh mere bare mein kuch b pata nhi tha,aur ye achanak kya kar rahe hai? wats wrong with her?

p.o.v ended

nandini twisted her head n manik was now hell shocked ,he sensed that its not nandini,someone z doing all this

manik hugged her tight," hua kya hai nandini"

"leave me manik" nandini start struggling
leave me manik,leave me manik,she start pushing him away,wr manik was making his grip more strong

manik: kon ho tum? kya chahiye nandini se

nandini: leave me

manik: if u gave her a single scratch,trust me I will never spare u,who so ever u r

nandini start crying," leave me manik,its hurting

manik worriedly left her n nandini start laughing

u r so naive manik,nandini ka natak karne p chod diya
bohut pyaar karte hona issai,ab dekhna iske sath mein kya karunga

manik shouted on top of his lungs,"don't u dare to harm her ,jus leave her

a strong force pushed her n she was pushed towards manik

manik hugged her,"nandini kuch nhi hoga,mein hoona,tumhara manik yahi hai,don't cry"

nandini was crying,her eyes wr closed n she was sobbing in his chest

nandini: m..ma..manik,bohut dard ho raha


manik: nandini,bas...bas mera bacha,mein sab theek karunga

nandini: m..m...manik,my whole b..b..body z aching inside
m..m...manik um dying inside

manik patted her back," shhh kuch nhi hoga"

manik was continuously patting her back n suddenly he felt her body z loose
her eyes wr closed,head falling freely on his arm

Nandini,nandini,open ur ur eyes


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I know this z chotu sa update,but I swear I m not feeling well
Edited by Ainahbarbie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyy...y r u not updating?plss dea update soon...cant wait so long...eagely waiting for ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

res res res res 😉 😳

huhhuhu...pupupupu...nununu🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

heyy...y r u not updating?plss dea update soon...cant wait so long...eagely waiting for ur update

updated 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

huhhuhu...pupupupu...nununu🤣

lululu tututu gugugu
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow aina
aata majhi satakli
🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa

wow aina
aata majhi satakli
🤣

🤣 🤣
I don't have any idea abt this update 😔
feeling disconnected from story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

🤣 🤣
I don't have any idea abt this update 😔
feeling disconnected from story



y?? I was joking yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you
SooO much for
updating this story
I was waiting for it
So long
But today update Is
Very nice😛😛😛
Plzzz tell me when you
are going to update royal?

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