Manan~OS ~LOVE~part9pg33 (29th august)

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The door of her room gt closed,windows also gt closed,she was cryng hard for help,but nobody was there to help her
she start bangng her hands on d door
nandini:darwaza kholo,open d door
plsss darwaza kholo,kon toh tum? Tum mere samne kyu nhi aate ho

on d other side of door waz her sister anayta

Anayta:nandini,kya huwa?darwaza band kyu kiya
y r u crying?

Nandini:cryng,di woh w..wo.woh phirse aa gaya,door open hi nhi ho raha

anayta:baby calm down,kuch nhi hoga,chup ho jao phele,di haina idar,daro mat

nandini:di mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai,h..h..he will k.ii.kill me
woh mar Dale..dalega mujhe

Anayta:nandu hum yahin hai door k pass,tum darna mat

both sisters wr crying ,one inside d room near door n another outside d room

Anayta's p.O.V
nandu ko ye bar bar kon dikhta hai?ya phir ye uska vehm hai?
P.o.v ended

nandini n Anayta both fell asleep in same position

after sometym,nandini felt that she is in someone's arms,but thAt someone was not visible

nandini:leave me,leave me,kon ho tum?kya chahte ho?wat i hav done
plsss leave me,i beg u

aaa anayta diii,plsss help me

Anayta:w..wa..wat hapn nandini?r u ok?

Nandini:di plss save me

her arms gt turned around her back
nandini:aaa..aaa,its hurting,plsss leave my hands

after some tym nandini was on bed sleeping

it was like someone start singing in her room n wz playing piano

KYA USS GALI MEIN KHBI TERA JANA HUVA
JAHA SE GUZARNE KO GUZRA ZAMANA HUVA

nandini got scared,she placed her hands on her ear

nandini:nhi nhi nhi
she again start crying,plss mere sath aisa mat karo,kon ho tum?samne kyu nhi aate?aur mujhe humesha hurt kyu karte ho

she gt pinned with wall,she wanted to runaway,bt she cldn't,her arms gt locked,her head got lil twisted n d next moment she wz pushed towards d corner of d bed,her forhead start bleeding,she winced in pain,touchd her forehead n was shocked to see blood driping down her face

nandini:tum ek hi bar mein mujhe khatam kyu nhi karte?

D door n windows gt unlocked,
Anayta rushed into her room,she jus wraped her arms around her

Anayta:shhh kuch nhi huva,bas chup hojao

nandini:di,he will kill me,look wat he did to my forehead,its bleeding

Anayta: bleeding?? Nhi toh,u dont have any wound

nandini:di?cant u look?he pushd me,,,,,,she clutchd her hands,dont leave me di

Anayta:bt nandu u dont have any wound,look at mirror

nandini:di..dii mei..mein sach keh rahe hoon,abi there wz wound
wo..woh.mujhe mar dalega di
w..wo..woh mujhe mar dalega
woh mujhe mar dalega

Anayta:koi b nhi hai,koi tumhe kuch nhi karega
bas mera bacha,chup ho ja,kal hum doc k pass jayenge

nandini:woh mujhe mar dalega
woh mujhe mar dalega

she again stand infrnt of mirror,in order to check herself again
she wz shocked wen she saw mirror,there was a line written on it "TUM SIRF HUMARI HO"

nandini:di..dii.diii,look at this mirror,ispe kya likha hai?

anayta:nandini kya hogaya hai aapko,kuch b toh nhi hai mirror pe

nandini:anayta di,ispe likha hai,aap kyu nhi manti,mei..me.mein sach keh rahe hoon

Anayta:acha come here aur soo jao,kal kolg b jana haina?

Nandini rested her head on pillow n Anayta was caressing her hair


kon ho tum,kyu bar bar aa jate ho
mein kaha hoon?itna andera kyu hai?plss leave me,she tried to runaway but was pulled back,her arms gt locked again,she felt a breath on her neck
k..kon..kon hai?
She felt that someone hugd her tight
mujhe tumhare sath nhi aana,leave me
Nandini:lEave me,mujhe tumhare sath nhi aana

Anayta:wat hapn?phirse wahi dream?

Nandini was now hell scared,she was sweating,her body was tremblng

nandini:ye dream mujhe har raat kyu aata hai,di..di..di woh mujhe marega

Anayta:kuch nhi hoga nandu,ye tumhara vehm hai

nandini:di trust me,hum sach keh rahe hai

Next moRning ColG scEne

Sam:hi nandini

nandini:hi

sam:wat hapn?tumhara mood kyu off hai

nandini:um fyn

sam hugd her n she hugd him back,while huggng him,she felt someone grabd her neck,d grip was getting more n more tighter,her eyes grew wider,tears start formng in her eyes,she gt scared
she pushed sam away n she herself gt pinned with d pillar,

nandini: leave me,her eyes start turning into red,she start coughng hard
a glass of water came infront of her,she gt scared by seeing glass of water widout holding it anyone

she heard a tune in her ear
KYA USS GALI MEIN KHABI TERA JANA HUVA
JAHA SE GUZARNE KO GUZRA ZAMANA HUVA

NANDINI:kk.kk.kon ..ho.kon toh tum
she heard a soft yet scary Wisper in her left ear
um "MANIK" Ur MANIK




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Originally posted by: aavani

super natural love...!!!!!!

old love of centuries ago ,indeed super natural
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woww super natural I liked it plzzz change the title into ff
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Originally posted by: Natashaaa

woww super natural I liked it plzzz change the title into ff

nats i have further story but i cant write more coz i think majority of people had not liked this
i mean there are only 12 likes n few comments n as a writer u know likes n comments give crg to write more
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Creepy but different and interesting..
Do continue
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Wow...u always come up wid so diff and interesting concepts. First d royalty story n now dis. Continue soon if u can, love to read more of dis.
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Awesome concept ...Plz do continue :)
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Amazing concept ... i just love ur stories ..All r different n awesome. . Continue soon
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Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

nats i have further story but i cant write more coz i think majority of people had not liked this
i mean there are only 12 likes n few comments n as a writer u know likes n comments give crg to write more


don't think so much
just pen it
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Originally posted by: navk

Plz update soon

plzzz

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