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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

thanx dear😊
only comination of my own thoughts
this z not comibation of anyone
i had neither watched pyaar ki kahaani nor fanaah


ohh but it seems the same... weise I dont mind even till u r updating... ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part6

nandini's p.o.v
i dont understand y d hell wr anayta di shouting on me,and why wr she saying that thr z no one n um not hugging anyone? Kya usne manik ko nhi dekha? God y z anayta di behaving like this

P.O.V ended

nandini picked some clothes n gt dressed up quickly as she was already late for college,anayta again came in her room

Anayta:nandu jaldi karu,kolg k liye late ho raha hai

nandini:di bas two mins

CoLLege Scene

Nandini's p.o.v
i was walking in d lawn of kolg,i felt a soft touch on my hand n wen i turned my head i saw manik was holding my hand n walking along with me,he smiled at me n i smiled back,ahhh his smile?? Anyone can die for his smile,such a cute smile,he was looking breathtaking in white shirt and blue jeans
we wr contineously walking wen my frnds came,they wr hugging n kissing me n i was abt to introduce them with manik,i turned my head and didnt fnd him anywr,i was confused? I dont knw wat was going on,my eyes wr searching him here n there,but someone was still holding my hand,my gaze again shifted towards my hand,i didnt find anyone hand holding mine,but i felt d same touch on my hand,i was now again scared,scared of that ghoost

p.o.v ended

3rd person p.o.v

nandini was contineously staring at her hand,manik was holding her but she was not able to see him,she was scared,sweet was clearly visible on her forehead,tears wr forming in her eyes,her body was shivering,she was not able to utter a single word
her frnds mukti,aliya n navya wr shocked to see her shivering like this

Mukti:nandini r u ok?

Nandini: pointng towards her hand,wooh...w..woh

alya:r u ok?

Mm.mmer.mera hath ,"nandini stammered"

meanwhile her hand gt freed,she start moving her hand
mera hath theek hogaya,its free,its free,th..theek hogaya "nandini stammered again"

mukti:nandini,aaj mere ghar p party hai,so time p aana,at sharp 8:00p.m

aliya:yeh,we will enjoy

nandini:i will try to come,if anayta di allowed me

navya:u dont worry abt that,we had already toked to her

nandini:hmm

nandini's room (7:30 p.m)
nandini was getting ready for party,she wore a royal blue backless gown,blue high heels,she was looking beautiful
nandini's p.o.v
strange aaj manik mere room mein aaya hi nhi,at least mein ussai puchti ki mein kaisi lag rahe hoon,Kolg toh aaya tha,phir ussi tym gayab hua,God knows woh kaha hota hai? Mystery boy hnhh
Goshh nandu,why r u thinking abt manik ? And why r u blushing like a stupid
Blush?did i jus say Blush?nandu r u insane? Like seriously blush?cabir proposed me 100 tyms,but i never blushed

oh God its 07:40p.m,mukti will kill me

she start driving her car n gt biggest shock of her life,manik was sitting in front seat,next to her

nandini:tum? Tum andar kaisai aayai?

Tum party mein nhi jaoge,"manik said in cold tone"

nandini:wat?r u crazy?hnh i will go

manik:nandini humne kaha na nhi jaoge mtlb nahi jaoge

nandini:mein jaonge mtlb jaonge,aaj humare frnd ka b'day hai,u jus get out of my car,get out

manik twisted her arm back,"gussa mat dilao"

nandini:leave my hand,its hurting
aur ab tumhe itni fikar kyu horahe hai,where wz u since morning? Hnh? Wen that bloody ghost holded my hand,i was shivering,i was scared,wr wz u that time?and who r u to stop me from going anywr?

Manik stepped out of d car

nandini:he z jus impossible,why cant he behave like a normal guy? Hnhh mystery guy?wat does he think of himself?isstym b bina bataye chala gaya?
Bina bataye??urghhh i was rude with him,its me who told him to get out of my car?
Now wats bothering me?
I was rude with him,kyunki since morning se woh mere sath nhi tha

meanwhile nandini reached n parked her car
cabir was waiting for her near parking area

cabir wrapped his arms around her back n nandini huggd him back

cabir:hi beautiful,why u late?

Nandini:umm nothing,jus fought with a fr...

Cabir:fr?

Nandini:i mean with ur frnd anayta di

cabir:awww meri jaan,always ready to fight,

nandini:lets go inside

"NANDINI"nandini heard her name ,she turned her head

nandini's p.o.v
its like someone z calling me,is my name dis much sweet?d way i heard my name,its was soo soft n sweet,but why dd i felt a deep pain in this voice?who z calling me? And why this much pain in this voice?

P.o.v ended
cabir:wat hapn

nandini:cabir,kisi ne mujhe bulaya,tumne b sunna?

Cabir:nhi toh,

nandini:hmm ok,lets go

3rd person p.o.v
everyone was enjoying d party,nandini was with cabir and both wr dancing on dancing floor,it was a couple dance
nandini was feeling little uncomfortable

nandini:cabir,um feeling lil uncomfortable

cabir:why? Wat hapn beautiful? R u ok?

Nandini:i dont knw cabir,but i feel like someone is watching us,i can feel his gaze,his intensity,

cabir:his??who is this now?

Nandini:i dont knw cabir,bas i dont wana dance

cabir:as u wish?but this "His" z disturbng me,nandu u knw na how much i love u?

Nandini:cabir plss

cabir: k beautiful,topic closed,happy now?

Nandini:hmm

precap:angry manik hurting nandu badly
and night romance
Edited by Ainahbarbie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated
read n enjoy
and ignore mistakes
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww Annaaa u r back Love u my cochopie
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

awww Annaaa u r back Love u my cochopie

love u too
not feeling well 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manik is the ghost? Right?
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww u finally updated...
welcome back my Barbie...
awesome update...
pre cap is exiting...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hua kya tmhe sweety bimar ho mtlb study krte krte ye hal hai ya actually bimar ho apna dhyan rakhna...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Manik is the ghost? Right?

yes dear
i had already mentioned that
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aminahin

hua kya tmhe sweety bimar ho mtlb study krte krte ye hal hai ya actually bimar ho apna dhyan rakhna...

yeh i will

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