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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

i dont talk to strangers


kamini 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
I thought you'll update this too as you updated royals please update everyday the story line is so addicting :)
Pleaaass update soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

I need patience like Manik does ;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
wow i must i am hating and loving this manik at the same time
scary yet powerful and completely different
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Jst read all parts..it's interesting
Plz continue soon n pm me too plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Part5
NanDini's p.o.v
i was sleeping peacefully on my king sized bed,i heard birds wr chripping,so i guessd that it was morning n d rays of light wr falling on my face,i placed my teddy bear on my face n slept again
suddenly i felt that someone removed my teddy from my face n was caressing my hair n cheeks
his fingers wr giving me soft warms touch in my hair,a smile crept on my face,it was sweet,soft touch,i had never felt like that before,he start caressing my cheeks,i wish time yehi p stop hota,it was an Amazing feeling,i shifted my side so that i can feel this touch on another side also
wen i turned my back,i felt his breath near my neck,i guess he was behind me,
i again turned n opend my eyes,and it was d world's best view,Manik was infront of me with a beautiful smile,
i dont knw wat hapn to me wen ever i see him,i forgt to ask him,where do he live n how he always enter in my room
he was smiling at me,so i smiled back,i was rubbing my eyes
he leaned down n brought his lips near my ear,giving me goose bumps n current,again these butterflies start dancing in my stomach
he whispered in my ear "Gud morning"
i replied back "good morning" in sleepy voice
he tugged my hair strand behind my ear,i dont knw wen i touched his hand and kissed them

"TUM THEEK HO" he asked me?
While he was asking me,i was staring n smiling at him like an idiot

i was not able to control ,so i jus wraped my arms around his neck n he wraped his arms around my waist,i was still feeling sleeping,i rested my head in crook of his neck

he again asked me"TUM THEEK HO NA"

i jus replied with "hmmm"
P.O.V ended

3rd Person P.o.v
nandini hugd him n he hugd her back,she rested her head in crook of his neck,he was again n again asking her abt her health n nandini was jus replying in "hmm",she was still feeling feeling as it was clear from her eyes n laziness

Manik whispered softly "r u feeling sleepy?"

nandini again answered "Hmm"

he caressd her hair by one hand n her back by another hand

"nandini tum theek ho na?dard to nhi horaha hai?" he asked her with concern

Nandini:nhi

Manik:why r u doing hmm hmm?r u angry with me?

Nandini:yeh,kal raat tum kyu nhi aaye mere pass,i was waiting for u

"i was with u n i will b always" he replied back
after hugging eachother for hours,finally they broke hug,nandini was checking her closet n he was jus mesmerzing her beauty

nandini came out of washroom n didnt fnd manik anywr,she start panickng as this whole house haunts her from past few days coz of ghoost who always scare her n d ghoost z none other than manik

she start screaming "manikkk maniikk,kaho ho tum?kaha chale gaye?plss wapis aajao,mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai"

he patted on her shoulder n without wasting time,she jus threw herself in his arms n start crying
nandini: t..tu tum kaha chale ..ja..jate ho?agr Woh phirse se itni dair aaya hota? Toh?

"Shhh mein yahin hoon,tumhare pass,kahin nhi gaya tha mein,stop crying" wiping her tears

she again hugd him tight so that he wont leave her again,he placed his arms around her waist n start caressing her back,manik felt that zip of her top is open,so he start caressing her skin n zipped up her top

nandini was blushing ,her cheeks wr red

Nandini:w..wo.woh actually my right arm is hurting,isliye mein zip close nhi kar payi

"i Did'nt saw anything"he whispered in her soft sliky wet hair

Nandini:thanku

"kyunki mein ne sab kuch dekh liya hai" he whisperd with smrik

nandini:i want to hug u like this forever,pls mujhe chod k mat jaya karo

Manik:HUm HUMESHA TUMHARE SATH HI HOTE HAI

nandini was infont of dressing table,she was tryng to make her hair but her arms wr hurting

"Ouch,its hurting like anything" nandini whispered silently

Manik ran towards her,"give me this hair brush,i will make ur hair"

Nandini: start laughing,hahaha u will make my hair?how?i mean kaha se seekha hai

manik:u jus sit on this chair,i will make ur hair,he wz brushing her hair,nandini was resting her head on back of chair n her eyes wr closed
he tied her hair in a bun n was waiting for her comment

manik:NANDINII

she didnt responded coz she again dozed off,it was becoz of his touch,his touch gives her relief n peace but sometimes his touches hurts her

he smiled at her innocent face,he lifted her in his arms n she wraped her arms around his neck in her sleep
he placed her on bed n was abt to go,but he didnt coz her grip around his neck was very tight,so he also fall on her,he softly unlocked her hands around his neck,covered her in a soft blanket
she again opend her eyes
"DONT GO MANIK"he will kill me other wise

he patted her back"BUT HE LOVES U"
she hugd him,both wr hugging each other,manik was kissing on her soft neck n nandini closed her eyes,caressig his hair my her hand,pushing him more n more close

BANGGG,
nanduuu wat r u doing?Anayta screamed out
ye kya kar rahi ho?

Nandini:di,ye manik hai,um jus hugging him

Anayta:stop it nandu,u r not hugging anyone,yaha koi b nhi hai,kya kar rahe ho?
Edited by Ainahbarbie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Combination of ur thoughts and pyaar ki yeh ik kahani and fanaah... awsome man plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Gulabo12345

Combination of ur thoughts and pyaar ki yeh ik kahani and fanaah... awsome man plz update soon

thanx dear😊
only comination of my own thoughts
this z not comibation of anyone
i had neither watched pyaar ki kahaani nor fanaah
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Wow
toh manik sirf nandu ko dikhta hai interesting..
I loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
haaan hum sab watsapp chor kr aaa gaye tere update parne ke liye lol

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