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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie

yes dear
i had already mentioned that


yah..but this part confused me a little.. so thats why confirming
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Posted: 10 years ago
I jst saw ur dis ff ...nice concept evrythng iz perfect bt ...one complain u used my name as nandini elder sister its ol bt be careful agar manik ne anayta di bola ...toh i will ...jump in PaNi
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey plzzz update it na yr...this is so much interesting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz yaaar update naa... 😭
aur kitna wait karuu 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww this story is soo amazing i love it..update it soon waitin...btw manik is a ghost r8??but wat happnd to him why did he die??
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..just awsm story...plsss update soon ...eagerly waiting for next part...i jus loved it...cont. soon dea
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 7

nandini'z p.o.v

I was dancing with cabir,my mind was still with manik n our fight, I felt that not only me n cabir wr dancing,thr wz someone else also behind me,I turned my head n didn't find anyone,now I knw its that ghost who want to kill me,my body start sweating,I felt pair of hand wrapped around my belly,wr my hand wr wrappd around cabir's neck n his hands wr on my waist,it was like I was trapped between two persons,I start shivering,after few moments I start suffocating as I was sandwiched between two bodies,one was visible cabir n another that ghost,I felt his lips touching my bare back n shoulder, touch was familiar as if it was manik,I whispered manik n d next moment d grip around my belly gt more tight,I was now hell scared,scared to death,I left d dance floor as I was not feeling good now
I was sitting near counter n ordered a drink for me,but wen I took glass in my hand,next moment it was broken into pieces on d floor n my hand was not hurt at all, I tried this few tyms by odereing drink again n again,and every glass wz broken

after couple of mins cabir came n asked me,wthr um feeling ok or not,I simply nodded,he took my hand in his Hands and after that I don't know anything

p.o.v ended


3rd person p.o.v

wen cabir touched her hand,her eye colour start changing,her body lang was changing,she was behaving like a boy,yes manik entered in her body,her eyes becm blood red

Leave my hand cabir "she said in male voice"

cabir: wats wrong with ur voice? r u trying to scare me?

I said leave my hand" she again said in male voice"

and d next moment she grabed his neck n pushed him to nearby wall n left d hall

she came to parking area n start driving her car
car scene~~~

he wax still inside her body n she was crying in pain n next moment she was laughing like anything

nandini: plss leave me,its hurting

nandini in male voice which is actually manik: u r hurting me more n I will give u punishment for this

nandini: plsss mujhe Jane do,I don't even know u,if my manik will come to knw abt all this,he won't leave u

hearing this he jerked her body n nandini was free now
she start drivin her car fast

Nandini 's room scene ~~

she ran into her room n locked it,n start screaming, manik mm,,mmanik,manik kaha ho tum

he came n slided his arms around her waist n rested his chin on her shoulder,she turned back n hugged him tight ,she hides her face in his chest

WO..woo.woh he again came,he..he.z hurting me,he will kill me " nandini stammered in his chest"

he won't do anything,he loves u,but wen u start hurting him,he hurts u back,he can't see u with anyone else " manik replied back ,kissing her hair"

I was only with cabir,he loves me,my chachi want me to marry him

this was enough for manik ,he disappeared n again entered in her body,he was stretching her body sometimes long n sometimes short,moving her arms to n fro n thr she was lying on floor,crying in pain,he was twisting her feet forward and backward, walking in reverse direction on tip toes

pls pls leave my body,um dieng with pain ? why don't u kill me ? it will b better for me,pls jus kill Me,mujhe iss dard se azaad karo,she start crying n blood drop wr escaping from her eyes n. after this she fainted,lying on cold floor


manik lifted her in his arms n placed her on bed,start wiping her blood from her face,he little bit lifted her n embarced her in his arms

manik: u forced me to do all this,I don't want to hurt u,but y don't u understand that u r mine,tum sirf meri ho,do u even knw mujhe kitna dard hota hai tumhe dard Dene se, tum sirf manik ki nandini ho,

he caress her feet n kissed her thr,he kissed her toes,he kissed her arms,and start kissing her neck,



next part is on d way
don't miss to hit d like button n leave ur comments
Edited by Ainahbarbie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh so waiting for ur update on this one :D yayyy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for ur update. Update soon if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
part7 updated
read n enjoy

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Syed ainah

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