short story MaNan Epilogue 81

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urbabie

@urbabie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Finally manik found his star!!
It was shooo cute when he hugged her <3
so aryamann is a good bacha !
nd that car wala scene .. when nandu is listening to his heartbeats .. is way too adorable <3 <3

For pandit .. Do something fab5 style ;D
Its been a while .. Would love to see fab 5 torturing him .. ! And ur a great writer so I know you'll make that awesome blossom ^_^

It was lovely!
update soon :))

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Awesome

awesome

awesome! !!!!

Loved it

Specially the knock knock wala dialogue

P.s. let Mukti and Cabir torture pandit and Cabir should definately post it on his YouTube wala channel

I know evil me!

But cmon pandit deserves it...

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harshitha2398

@harshitha2398

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Aww such cutie pie she is...

Super cute...

the way she hid herself on Manik's chest was super cute...

Cuteness overloasded

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Si finally, u brought aryamaan into story, waiting to see how u unfoldhis character, i have no idea, wat to do with this pandit,butjust throw him out of the story, waiting eagerly for next part.

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

wow wat a cute update

loved it

very nicely written

cont soon

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

"Manik he "she pointed at Pandit " he is the one on whom i puke " she jump out of car and hold his shirt "Manik come fast see i caught him , hit him and throw from here "she pointed at the hill "no no "she naughtily smiled " Cabir will make his video " she winked "we will put you in ganda wala garbage with bhaboo " she smiled and raised her hand for high five with Manik