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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story yr...plz don't stop writing... bhale he new story start krna kuc new...bt manan pe story likna mt band krna..
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"Manik if you say i can call my friend at station , at this hour while driving people listen radio may be we can find her " Cabir said :"if he is a nice guy , he may contact "

"do what ever you want to do , i want Nandini back " he said

"ok" Cabir dialed a number



In car

" i am so thirsty " she picked up the bottle

"No " he grab from her hand and throw it out side " because of this you are behaving like this"
"wait i will tell Manik " she beat him no his shoulder . he angrily look at her she sit straight "what is this smell " he made face

" i " she look away

"you puke " he sprayed on her the perfume .she smell herself

"you use same as Manik" she said

" Manik again " he said

"i want to listen music" Nandini on the radio

"stop it " he held her arm

"ahhh" she screamed on top of her voice he stop the car

"what happened ?" he look at her arm it has turn all red "why you didn't told me before ?" he took out first aid box

"no " she pull her arm away

"show me trust me it will be fine " he said

"why i trust you ? i dont trust anyone accept Manik " she said , he gave up

" you want to go to Manik right ? " he asked

"yes " she nod

" then let me apply this ? if you will not have pain i can drive " he said " you listen music "

"okay" she said and offer his arm

"what has bitten you?" he applied

"listener a space student is missing from high way , she is wearing white dress " the DJ said

He look at her

" you and Manik study in Space ?" he asked her

"yes how you know ?" she asked

" oh God " he took out his cell Nandini snatch from him

"give me i will call Manik" she said

"see what you have done ?" he said as it fall down next to her seat

"what i did?" she made face and said

"let me get it and call station " he lean forward



The highway was deserted

"if he force Nandini" Manik heart skip beat

" stop the car "he shouted " see Nandini " he jump out of the car

"what the hell is that guy doing ?" Cabir said as he find him lean over her "hurry "

"Maink will kill him ?" Dhurv too get down and both cross the road


Manik knocked hard on the window ,the guy sit straight and look at out

"Manik" Nandini said she pull his sleeve " he is Manik " she said he opened the window she pull out her arms ,he hug her "what the hell was you doing with her?" Manik said as he pull her out of window Dhruv and Cabir too reached there

"she broke my cell i was searching its piece to call the radio station " he said

"Nandini you are fine " he cupped her face and asked ,she nod

"did he missed behave with you " he asked her, the guy walked out of the car

" yes bolo bolo should i tell Manik ?" she tried to reach him from other side

" no please no" he said and made scary face

"okay Manik he was okay ,i told him your number but he didn't called " she said

"you said Manik number is 1234 , how to call that?" he said

"Manik your number " she tried to think

"you are crying Manik?" she asked him as she wipe tear

"no "he hug her in his arms

"Thanks God finally your,miss sun shine found you in last 30 mins she had taken your name over 100 times"

" i am not miss sun shine i am shining star" she said

' sorry sorry i forgot" he hold his ear

" okay " she shakes her head

"show me your arm " Manik look at her arm

" it is okay " she said

"where you find her ?" Cabir asked her , he told them everything

"Thanks bro " Cabir said

" no i will not accept the thanks like this ? i am really tried she told me about Manik's farmhouse . if i get space there to sleep " he said

They look at each other

"what is your name ?" Dhruv asked him

"Aryaman"he said

"are they always like this ?" he whispered and asked Cabir point at Manik and Nandini she was whispering and he was listening

"yes "Cabir hide his smile

"who was that guy who kidnapped her ?" he asked

"it is a long story we will tell you , you follow us" Cabir said

"sure " he said

"what are you hiding show me ?" she said as they seated ,he opened his fist

"My clip ,you found it " she said ,he kissed her head " i knew you will find it " she smiled "awww" she tried to remember

"what" he asked her

"Manik you know Pandit ?" she said and placed her hand on her lips

"what ?" he removed her hand and kissed it and asked

"i will not tell you " she said " no no you will kill him "she shakes her head

"what to do with this Pandit ?" Cabir asked

"you know i puke on pandit ?" she said and giggle

"really" Manik said

"yes that is why he left me ? " she said and winked

"you naughty pie " he kissed her head

"knock knock " she knocked on his heart "who is there ?" she asked

" Nandini Murthy " Manik said

"that is me "she said

"you stay here " he said and she peep in his shirt and placed her hear head over his heart again


"Now i got why you have fallen for her " Cabir look at them in back view mirror and said

"shhh he is listening " Manik whispered she smiled and hide herself in his arm he hug her and run his fingers in her hairs to make her sleep




What to do with Pandit ? any suggestion pm me or leave your comments here

i didn't drag the track

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaaay at last finally manik found his star shining star Nandu back
That guy seems positive glad he took Nandu from that creepo pandit
it was heart touching how manik hugged Nandu finishing her right alright
Awesome update
So new entry is Aryaman..nice
so he is also going along with them
Cuties Nandu manik withering and listening
Haha loved the way Nandu told manik about her vomiting in pandit and giggling
Awww it was so adorable manik and drunk Nandu moment in car
Loved how she was listening to his heart beats
Fantabulous well written
can't wait for their farmhouse trip
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
BEAT HIM BLACK AND BLUE IN FAB 5 STYLE...
AND SURELY ONE XTRA PUNCH FROM NANDU...

ITS REALLY LATE WE HAVE NT SEEN PREVIOUS DAY'S BULLY CONFIDENT IN TORTURE FAB 5... I REALLY WANT THAT PANDIT TO GET KICK PUNCHES TORTURES IN FAB 5 STYLE..


NOW THE UPDATE... naddiya aapu kya khake likhne baithti ho that itnaaa payara update deti ho????

i really wish k last part ki tarha yeh v kyy churale frm ur ss.

superb... nandu u r damm cute man...

"knock knock " she knocked on his heart "who is there ?" she asked 😊

" Nandini Murthy " Manik said 😳

"that is meee "she said 😎

"you stay here " he said and she peep in his shirt and placed her hear head over his heart again 😳 😳 😳


hayeee... allah... i will surely die one day itne mithash se...




Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
u wrote it very nicely
every line manikk really true love
nandu hiding behind his jacket very nice😊
i luvd de funny part of aryaman and nandu...hope dis type something happen in ky2 with new charecter😆😆
rs idea is good
drunk nandu is soo adorable😛
i hope after gng to farmhouse of manik there will be funny moments b/w manan nd aryaman nd fab5

just one thing about pandit...amm's should not beleive in pandit anymore that's it


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Posted: 10 years ago
Ur ff is super nice and the last part was just so amazingly perfect the way u wrote about nandini was so cute I could actually imagine the whole thing happening waiting for the nxt part plz update soon and keep up the fantastic work
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh my god oh my god naddiya r u a writer or what ???i mean really do u even know rum kitna accha likhti ho u penned nandini's love n blubbering so beautifully omg like seriously yaar 1st whn she told new guy batadu bolo bolo thn talking with nandini u know pandit n in reply manik kissed her awww thn she tlod i puke on him n thats why he left n manik tolding her naughty pie n the most blissful moment knock knock whos there manik said nandini murthy n nandini said its me n manik said u live here aaawww tna cute moment tha i feel like m watching thm infront of my eyes i love u love u love u bas its an outstanding update cont soon
oh u ask suggestions i read everyone telling beaten black n blue by fab5 itna drag karne ki jarurat kya hai ek kam karo car crash karwa do wahi pe mar jaye bloody nikamma kahika...gggrrr
plz plz cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was vwrry cute... manik reaction was awsum n nandani was acting so cutely...
Pandit should be thrown off d cliff...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww ...read all updates together...this is reallly super cute
pl update next parts sooon

-Mini
Edited by mydiva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww..!!!
Hahaha poor Aryaman "Manik..Manik..Manik..."
Glad u didn't drag the track..
And throw that pandit in to the dirty gutter..hahaha

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