LOVE K LIE KUCH BHI KREGA update-pg145, NO COMMENTS pls - Page 68

Unres...lollipop u updated after almost a day..

I

LOVED

IT...

NAVYA N CABIR

AWESOME...

AS ALWAYS CUPID ROLE

hahahahahahahaha...

song was toh kya kahe

amazing...

n last but not least

manik Malhotra kahin

v romance kr skta h

hahahahahahahaaa

frst scnd n thrd person

N A N D I N I

awww...sssooo ccuuuttteee

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for amazing update...👏😉

hey candy dear...!!!

awesome update sweetie pie...!!!
loved each character a lot...
beautifully penned...my most favorite part was the song sequence and the last manan scene behind the stage...amazing...brilliant work dear
song was so perfect for the sequence...aliya ,dhruv,manik ,nandini ...their confused feelings,pain ,tensions etc etc was visible during the song sequence...
loved cabir a lot...such an awesome personality...love him a lot
so...continue asap
take care



coming to my favorite parts from this update...SCENE - 6 AND SCENE 7 WAS MY MOST FAVORITE PART...each sentence was beautiful..so i am not quoting it her...again...😆😆😆


Scene 1 -

Manik was walking to and fro being restless .. Cabir who was watching him from the last few minutes took out his phone and started making his video.. Manik saw that and freaked " it's not funny Cabir.."
Cabir burst into laughter and after composing himself said " oh really.! Okay if u can't wait for tomorrow morning then call her." And he yawned..
Manik annoyingly " call pe?? " . He sighed and nodded his head saying " tu nhi samjhega Cabir.. Go and sleep.." .
Cabir yawned again and said " hmm and u count the stars.. Gnt" a

Scene 3

Aaliya annoyingly "mukti..! He is someone's bf.. And I was dancing with him like that "
Mukti smirked and said " Aryamann is not Nandini's bf.. And Manik and Nandini have become friends.. "Aaliya surprisingly "what?"
Mukti " yes. U were right about Manik and nan.."
Suddenly Aaliya cut her in middle saying " Aryamann is not her bf.?"
Mukti and Cabir were surprised . Mukti " aaliya.. Manik and Nandini have become friends.. Ain't u surprised? Don't u think u were right about them. kuch to.."
Cabir " leave it.. Manik Nandini friends hain ya nahi .. Is se zyada important hai k ab Aaliya Manik just friends hain"
Mukti was surprised. Aaliya " he is right mukti..".
Mukti sighed and said " cool.. "
Suddenly Cabir playfully " waise Aaliyaa.. what were u telling Aryamann when u guys were dancing?"

Scene 5

Neyonika fumed " Manik.. It has always been a GIVE AND TAKE relation between us.. I have covered all ur mistakes till date.. So this time also... u have to listen to me.."

Manik hated this famous dialogue of Neyonika" give and take" . He was hurt like always but hiding his pain with a smirk he said " What if I.. stop doing mistakes Neyonika.. "

Neyonika laughed sarcastically and said " Manik.. kitna easily keh dia .. But don't u think something is missing.." She took a pause and said " Ur confidence !"

And Manik's smile vanished with that. He was cursing his fate thinking that he is neyonika's son, her own blood..
Neyonika "I think u r not confident enough to say this line.. U can't stop doing deals with me bcz u can't stop doing mistakes.. Go and get a little confident first ."

Originally posted by: candy1990

Toshu. U r too cute..
Will edit this post to give my feedback on ur feedbacksss and comments.. Will pm u whenever I edit this post

if m cute...then ur as sweet as a candyyy;)
ok...i've finished reading ur update..now will unres on pg 93...my cmnt will b b4 ur first half of thiz update...hehee

lovely update

Awesome update

Candyyy...sorry...cant cmnt now:((...net has started working super slow!! Will cmnt pakka 2mrrw mornin...
Chapter was awsmmm!!! Loved evry bit of it!!
Baki ka kal milega...chal bye love ya tc gunnyt

Awesome

Nice update.
Liked Nandini calmed manik.
Continue soon

Hehe candy meri jaan itna late!!!
U know mein kab se wait kar rahi thi... baar baar phn khol kar check kar rahi thi for ur update...
Coming to update...
It was fabulous...
Manik nandini aaryaman alya soha navya mukti sab the is update mein but I always loved cabira the cupid most first manik ke satg teasing tgen nandini ke sath raghav ko bahana banana to stay wih them... I love the way u potray his character...
Coming to the song it was perfect for the situation... manik is hurt by nyo's words and nandini the healer gets to know everything without saying anything... thats called TRUE LOVE... and the way u show alya and dhruv POV that was amazing... both have to realise what they feel for their respective partners...
And last scene was my fav... the way nandu give the solution to him...
And the way he said that he trust her more than himself... amazingly awesome...
And haan try to use my song also... vaise suna tune vo song???
And mein toh puchna hi bhul gayi are u a punjabi???
Chal tere pm ka wait kar rahi hu...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE U BOHAT SALA...
UR AARU...