LOVE K LIE KUCH BHI KREGA update-pg145, NO COMMENTS pls

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guys i am writing a new ss/ ff on manan.. It depends on ur responses if it turns out to be an FF or a SS...
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edited - hey those who are reading it for the first time.. Let me tell u that u guys gonna love it.. My story doesn't require introduction of characters.. This story is losely based on ky2 .. It is a complete package of every emotion.. Some people are loving it to the core.. Thats all I want to say.. And pls do comment, do appreciate my story.. Ur feedbacks are important.. One more imp thing .. My story is a musical journey so please whenever u find any song written, just stop there and get the song first.. Lyrics and music is well synchronised with lines of story.. Playing songs alongsidw will be awesome..


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chapter 1

scene1-------(manik's place)-----------------


.Knock knock... Knock knock..
Inside the room -"Ahhh..who's this .?? Why u banging the door so hard.."
Outside the room - " Manik .. Thank God ..thank God ..u r alive.. "

Manik - " cabir.. Kya h,,sone de muje."
Cabir-" sone dun.. Aur waha wo phoolan jeet jae?"

Manik -" shit ... Main uske bare me kaise bhul gya..shit shit.."

And suddenly he jumped off from his bed and opened the door for cabir.,
Cabir-" wow Manik... seriously u are too much,. Why were you not picking ur phone and how could u forget that today we have to..."
Before he could complete his sentence Manik interrupted.

Manik-" listen,cabir.. I don't have time for your lecture han.. Tu college k lie nikal .i'll see u there and yes don't reveal the plan to anyone else until ..."
Cabir- "wait wait wai man.. Main kyu jaun.. I'll go with u only "
Manik with a smirk -" kyu Tu phoolan se dar gya kya"

Cabir - " main kyu daruga manik.mera darna bnta hi nahi h but m suprised k Tu kyu ni dara.."
Manik -" cabir .. U really think so k muje is phoolan se darne ki zaroorat h?"
Cabir - " no no.. not at all..afterall you are the Manik Malhotra"
Manik- "yes .. Today is the night cabir ..aj that phoolan will get to know who has she messed up with..<div>
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so guys do comment.. Like dislikes ,eggs ,joote chappal, tomato sab kuch welcum h... Will try to update it soon..
INDEX
[DIV]CHAPTER 1,2 ---- pg 1
CHAPTER 3 ---- pg 2
CHAPTER 4 ---- pg 3
CHAPTER 5 ---- pg 4
CHAPTER 6 ---- pg 5
CHAPTER 7 ---- pg 6
CHAPTER 8 ---- pg 7
CHAPTER 9 ---- pg 10
CHAPTER 10 ---- pg 12
CHAPTER 11 ---- pg 13
CHAPTER 12 ---- pg 16
CHAPTER 13 ---- pg 18
CHAPTER 14 ---- pg 20
CHAPTER 15 ---- pg 24 (special update)
CHAPTER 16 ---- pg 28
CHAPTER 17 ---- pg 31
CHAPTER 18 ---- pg 35
CHAPTER 19 ---- pg 40
CHAPTER 20 ---- pg 41(special update)
CHAPTER 21 ---- pg 47
CHAPTER 22 ---- pg 53
CHAPTER 23 ---- pg 59 ( manan walk- special update)
CHAPTER 24 ---- pg 66
Thank u note pg 71 (must read)
CHAPTER 25 ---- pg 72(party time
CHAPTER 25 B ------ pg 73 (party time))
CHAPTER 26 ---- pg 77,78 ( unsaid confession - special update)
CHAPTER 27 ---- pg 84,85
CHAPTER 28 ---- pg 93,94
CHAPTER 29 ---- pg 102
CHAPTER 30 ---- pg 109
CHAPTER 31 ---- pg 116 (beach romance- special update) [DIV]CHAPTER 32 ---- pg 126

CHAPTER 33 ---- pg 135
CHAPTER 34---- pg 142
Do NOT COMMENT Note
CHAPTER 35- pg 144
Chapter 36 - pg 145
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start and i think you should continue . Im guessing that phulaan is maybe nandini ?
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Ummm keep guessing.. Well of course .. She is our Nandu only.. But dont you think she is so cute ..how can one call her that.." phoolan"".. Kya mystery hai???
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chapter 2
scene 1 --*-- music wing corridor-***---*
Manik and cabir reached the college but indeed they were late because Manik had some plans of his own for "phoolan" and he had to do some arrangement before he could meet his group " fab 5"..
Manik -" Dude ..u go ..everyone is waiting.. I'll just come"
Cabir -" okay.. But fast Han..we haven't prepared a single line... Melody kb bnegi and song ..song to i guess ..."
Before he could complete Manik with a smirk says " cabir... You know what... we can do that later but abhi its time for some action".
Cabir -" see ..do whatever you want but rote rote mere pas mat aana.."
Manik making strange faces and raising his left eyebrow a bit asked" what? Rote? Like seriously.. Kaun roya cabir and when".
Cabir -" Tu bhul gyaa.., haha.. seriously Manik.. Wo punch itna jaldi.. Aur wo us raat k bare me to abhi kisi ko pta hi nhi ..."
Manik-" stop it cabir .. That's a secret.. U have promised not to tell this to anyone. ,not even fab 5.. I guess you remember that"
Cabir while trying to stop his smile says -" hmmm.. I remember..okay you go.. But jaldi aana.. I cant handle mukti aur uske questions"
Scene2
*------*--- college canteen---*------*

Nandini to herself " ahh... Aaiiiappa.. Main kuch zyada hi superwomen bn gai..maine Kyu Manik ko challenge kia. Bahar se to i am showing k everything is fine...k m very bold ,strong .but wo monkey wo monster wo ...ahhh..us raat ko ..us raat to u saved me aaiiappa.. Aur us monkey ko lga k main bahut smart Hun..but u to know naa k maine kuch kia hi nahi tha .. Please kuch aisa kro na k wo challenge bhul Jae".
Meanwhile Manik had entered the canteen and saw her talking to herself ..
Manik to himself -" is she mad or something ..ye khud se baat Kr rhi h.. But she is so ... So tensed... Yes .. I think i am already a winner.. Wait a minute..manik u think.?? Think.. No no no.. Indeed ..indeed .. I am a winner... Wait and watch nandu dear ... Today is the night.. I will definitely show u the rightful way and your right place.."
Nandini saw Manik and changed her expressions.. She was giving strange looks to him.. On the other hand Manik with a smirk left the canteen..
Nandini again making a bechara sa face said to herself " he was looking so confident.. Aisa kya hua jo iska confidence itna boost ho gya.. Aaiiyyooo... Pls aaiiiappa not this time Han.. Bas ek baar muje is monster se bacha lo... Please".
Scene 3 *--- Fab 5 in the practice room--
Mukti while tuning her guitar -" Manik.. What do u think Nandini kitne points se haregi.. .."
And everyone laughed out except Manik and cabir..

Mukti" yaaa ..i mean she is so dumb.. What the hell was she thinking ..wo Fab 5 se jeetegi.. Hum se., man .. She has gone crazy..and uska wo confidence i just don't understand k aisa Hua kya h jo wo itna confidence itna boost ho gya h".

Cabir laughed and while giving a i-know-the-reason-behind-this wala look to manik said " hahah..ya mukti..even u was thinking k aisa Hua kya k wo to itna bold behave Kr rhi h.."

Manik giving an angry look to cabir said - " stop it guys ..we should focus on our music.. And we shouldn't forget that that bloody pandit is always biased towards classical singers..and he is the only one who's gonna judge us.. So please focus.."

All agreed with Manik and started practicing...
Manik to himself -" ab tak to kaam ho gya hoga.. Lemme check"
And with that he made a call and asked" hello... Ya kya status h.. ." and with his signature smirk he said " well done.." and kept the phone.

Manik to himself -" and the countdown begins"

Scene 4-*----college canteen---*--*
Nandini siting with navya and Harshad..

Nandini -" guys.. are you confident enough k we will win?.. I mean Manik and his group ..they are performing together for the past many years. .and we,.. Hum logo ka to group abhi hi.."
Harshad -" hey stop it Nandini.. Don't think much.. we have practiced a lot.. You just relax."

Nandini -" but Harshad"

Harshad-" Nandiiiniii relax...please." he blinked his eyes and put his hand over her for assurance..

While Nandini and Harshad were having this conversation navya was just constantly watching Harshad with a stupid smile on her face..

This trance of her was broken by Harshad only.. Harshad " navya are u also feeling the same ?"
Navya with a blush -" kaisa?"
Harshad -" tum smile kyu Kr rhi ho"
Navya realised that she was acting like a fool ..she changed her expressions and said -" wo wo harshadji hum abhi aate hain".
Suddenly Harshad held her by her hand and said " are navya ruko na.. Kaha ja rhi ho"

Navya looked at her hand and was lost in her thoughts where Harshad was on his knees and was singing a song for her " abhi na jao chod k , k dil abhi bhara nhi" ..

Navya blushed and said "bhara nhi?"

Harshad "what?"
Both nandini and Harshad were confused with her expressions and behavior..

Nandini to herself " ye ho kya rha h..ek to i am so nervous..upar se ye dono.. Why they are not serious.. Aaiiiappa help".
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hmmm tell me how was it... Negative positive all comments are welcome.. As I said earlier joote
chappal tomato potato eggs..sb welcome..
and one more thing yaar I am totally new.. I even dont know the rules of forum.. Typing style bhi nhi.. Do message me gar koi suggestion ho..

Edited by candy1990 - 10 years ago
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😊 @ Humzy ..thanku...thanku.. But I cant see much responses .. Ummm😭... Confused should I continue or not.. Have written third part but wont post it jab tk replies nhi aate.. Positive b chalege ..negative wale PM kr do.. Lol
Edited by candy1990 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: candy1990

😊 @ Humzy ..thanku...thanku.. But I cant see much responses .. Ummm😭... Confused should I continue or not.. Have written third part but wont post it jab tk replies nhi aate.. Positive b chalege ..negative wale PM kr do.. Lol

do continue 👍🏼
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HEY ITS SOO GUD I LIKED IT WELCM TO FORUM DEAR PLZZ CONTINUE SOON M WAITING
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note : this is only for u guys natashaaa , acaia , musicaltie, tasnimanika7, apps33, Humzy, palchinn ,nara26, lavi1612, sahana8, sushmitha.s.. Thanks for ur likes.. Plss plss PM me.. Buddy me..
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Chapter 3
Scene 1 *--- college auditorium"--*--

Fab 5 and NH3 on the either sides of back stage giving stern looks to each other..

Cabir -" guys muje is AC wale thande thande cool cool Audi me b kisi k thobde pe paseene kyu dikh rhe hain?"

Fab 5 laughed.. mukti gave a hi-five to cabir.

Harshad -" cabir u know what.. today I am in a superb mood so main tere sath lad k mood kharab nhi krna chahta.."

Manik-" oh really harshhhaaadjjjii"

And with that Fab 5 again laughed out loud.. navya made an angry face and said " raakshas h ye poora" .

Meanwhile panditji came and said" ye kya ho rha h yaha pe., kaun kitna smart h wo to thodi der me pta chal jaegaa.. Lets not waste time., NH3 u guys take your positions.".

Nandini-" sir hum..we will be performing first ..but kal tak to u said k hum logo ko baad me perform krrr..."

Manik -" ahhh.. I think u guys are losing your confindence..."

Pandit looking at nandini-" Nandini you are a well trained singer.. I mean NH3 tum sb.,i have seen you guys performing.. U guys are no less than anyone." and with that he gave a now-you-shut-up look to manik..

Cabir -" tune note kia ye pandit tere sath kuch zyada hi ..."

Manik -" let it be cabir.. Aj k baad uska muh b band ho jaega"..

Manik was msging someone and cabir asked " kya hua ..what about your super plan? Where is she? Dont tell me k ye plan b fail ho gya us raat ki tarah.." and somehow cabir controlled himself from laughing..

Manik angrily looked at cabir and said -" not again cabir.. Why the hell are you mentioning that night again and again.. Mana kia na tujhe"..

Cabir made a serious face and said -" aree I was toh asking k what is the status of your plan .. Kya hua?"

Manik replied being irritated -" I dont know .. Jise kaam krne ko kaha tha wo call nhi le rha.. Damn it... I hope she is here soon .. "

Cabir raising his both eyebrows asked " what if she could not make it today ...then??"

Manik smirks -" hmm.. Dont worry we are Fab5 .. We never lose"
Cabir -" dude . I know that.. But the thing is that ... That pandit... He always keep on ranting about classical music and his stupid ways of teaching,his students and specially Nandini.. I hope wo..."

Manik-" cabir relax.. Although he is the judge for the performance but he has to stay here for long... Wo biased nahi ho skta.. I never wanted him to give a chance islie to ye sb kia...but damn. Where is she..."
Scene 2 *---* stage *-----*-------*------*

NH3 with their instruments on the stage..

Everyone welcomed them with a huge applause.. Just then neyonika came and sit besides pandit.. Manik had an eye contact with her but he took his eyes off her face being irritated.

NH3 was about to start meanwhile nandini's eyes met with manik... He was smiling at her.. Again that strange weird smile.. " I cant take it anymore ..he is trying to make me feel nervous ..but no .. Not today atleast.. " Nandini thought..
She took a deep breath and somehow manages to calm herself down.. And signaled her group that she is ready.. .so did navya do... Once they all were ready Nandini changed her expression and looked at manik .. She was full of confidence .. Manik was now a bit pissed off..

Nandini was ready with her harmonium ..harshad with his guitar ..navya on keyboard and Shahid on tabla..
And Harshad and Shahid started singing
" Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe."

Manik who was not paying attention to their performance and was continuously trying to call someone was taken aback and his mouth remain opened for a while when he listened Nandini singing..

Nandini " Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi"

Manik was like is she that melodious .. Itna sweet to kbhi sound nhi kia isne .. Seriously phoolan..

Harshad & Shahid " Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe."

Nandini with her eyes closed" Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab gayi
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi"

Manik forgot about the call he was trying to make and he was speechless..cabir tried to talk " dude call ho gyaa kkkyy".. But manik asked him to stay quite with his expressions.. Cabir in his thoughts" oh yaa manik ..they are our opponents and you are... "..
Nandini was enjoying her own singing "Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Dhadkane hain surmayi
Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab gayi
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi"

Manik was so lost in her voice..he didnt even realise his phone was ringing... He was thinking " she sings from the bottom of her heart.. as if she is alone , no one is around. Her eyes are closed and she is feeling each and every word of the song.. I can see that.. how happy is she .. I never knew that she is just like me.. I love music and so does she.. I have passion for music and she is just so lost in her own world.. And what I was trying to do... I shouldnt have called her amms here... " suddendly he came out of his thoughts as he heard everyone clapping for NH3...
Everyone was short of words...they were so mesmerised by the song.. How well it went , that could be easily seen on the face of listeners..
Aaliya - " I always knew bhai is awesome but I never knew Nandini sings so well.. Bhai must have had to practice a lot for this song.. Its a tough song and semi classical too.. Hmm... But we are no less..what say guys.."

Cabir and manik in unison -" hmmm"

Mukti - " what hmm.. Cabir tu to hopeless behave kr rha h kai din se but manik tu..tujhe kya hua..ye hmm kya tha.."

Dhruv-" buddy kya hua.. Is everthing okay ? Tu performance ko leke kbhi tensed nhi dikha"

Manik was not tensed but he was still looking at Nandini, her smile and innocent face..

Manik to himself -" manik behave.. Kya kr rha h.. Ye kya h ..what m I thinking..and Why m I thinking about that phoolan.. We have to perform and for that I need to focus.. Ahhh.. But its good k uski amms nhi aai."
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Hmmm so this was the third chapter... I know song Harshad type nhi h.. But kaam chala lo plsss.. And yes if you people want me to continue to lemme know naa.. Not much replies How wud I get to know if I should continue or not..
Feel free to share your views.. PM hi kr do... And yes sorry for mistakes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update plz do continue soon
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love k lye sala kuch v karega...
dear dont loose hope so earlier... update 3 4 parts then dekhna u will get huge response...let them give some tym to resist this awesome ff dear...

mast interesting and suspense wala update..

ps- wase what happened in that night???😉 😉

update soon...

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