LOVE K LIE KUCH BHI KREGA update-pg145, NO COMMENTS pls - Page 58

Wow that was great
I hope Nandini doesn't regret
Continue soon

Love the way they made up, very unique... and the dancing romantic...hope they talk this through at some point.

Fabulous update
Loved it
Update the next part soon

omg!omg!!omg!!!! super duper update yr...u jus rocked it...
u described whole manan scene very beautifully...jus loved it...
yipppeee m so happy...
thanks for the manan special update...u knw wot ur amazing writer...the way u write is outstanding...must say u blessed with writing skill...keep it up...plsss update soon dea... cant wait so long...desperately waiting for next part 👏 👍🏼

OMG ...best chapter till now
i really loved it...u penned it
good job dr..
thanx for the pm
take care...

Originally posted by: Rachu14

Awesome update.

Loved the way you have penned the scenes, the ambiance, the luminosity of the lights and surrounding. Had a laugh reading how his why's lined up? As soon as I saw u have updated, I literally created an ambience in my room to read your update. Dark room, no noise, no disturbance and cool breeze of fan. I thought "Aaj toh iloveyous" ho jayega. But will wait for the next chapter to read there feelings expressed verbally. I like the way you create different scenes as if watching on tv. I still can't get the jungle scene out of my mind. Every time I read your update, I go back to the jungle scene and read it once again coz that's when it all started.

I don't know from where u are but if you know ekta kapoor, I must say most of the writers in this ky2 forum have become ekta kapoor part2. Love to keep there audiences on cliff hanger.

Plz don't mind my comment. It's definately a compliment it means we are hooked.

Ab itni tarif kardi, now it's your turn. Plz tadpana mat and update soon.

Couldn't stop myself from quoting ur comment.. I am taking ur feedback as a compliment.. Ur feedback is so unique.. U created an atmosphere?? Hehhee. Like seriously.. Yaar m overwhelmed.. And I am from India , delhi.. That directly points that I know ekta Kapoor.. But if the chapter ended on a cliff hanger?? Hehhe. No.. I wanted the KISS to be an everlasting one.. Lol.
Yaarrr.. Love ur comment.. But y do u give guest appearance??
Would love to hear more from u.. Heheh..
Love u girl..

Originally posted by: HTA111

omg excellent superb beautiful amazing update

she was totally jealous she couldn't bear him with any girl now as she loves him too much and she realized it too

he was pacing outside like crazy dint know what is wrong with his nandu and she was so angry at him she started yelling as he was continuously asking questions

he picked her up as he wants to know what she feels about him as he wants to confess his love to her what if she wants to accept it or not

wow manan moments were mind blowing the way he was not letting her go but why she dint let him complete maybe coz she knows it

now what will aryaman do when he finds out that the girl whom he loves is in love with someone else and what will manik do as he will not leave nandu as he really dont like him close to her

continue soon cant wait for next part

Heheh.. Love ur feedbacks my super duper analyst.
U said it all.. So I shuld shut my mouth..
Thanku thanku so much.. Love u.
Stay blessed

wow..!!!
manan kissed..!!!
luvd de way ew penned manan romanc.
"NO WORDS.UM SPEECHLESS."
he he. 🤣

It was superb ..
Thanks for the pm ..
Do comtinue soon

oh God...!!!

And Nandini's heart drop with that.. She thought "does he knows it all?". She shivered like anything.. Manik was feeling her shivers.. He whispered " What if I know the biggest secret of ur life.." .

Nandini uttered " Manik.. Please stop.." being nervous.. and closed her eyes.. Manik was breathing heavily . She was feeling his warm breath on her face.. Manik again whispered in her ear " don't u want to know the biggest secret of my life?" This made Nandini open her eyes.. She looked at him with her moist red eyes.

Manik was intensely gazing in her eyes. He uttered " I.. (pause).. I .. Love.. (pause).. " . He gulped his saliva and Nandini held her breath.. Manik opened his mouth to say the most important word just then Nandini put her hand on his lips..