We Are Destined To Love - MaNan FF- note on last page 18..plz read it - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART - 8


At Nandini's Home
" its already 7:30. Where r u two? U know Manik and Navya has already reached here half an hour ago. Come fast otherwise don't come." Saying so Nandini cut the call.


"guys wait for a little. Those morons are on their way. I am going to bring coffee. Tell about ur choice" , Nandini said.


" I don't drink coffee. I just have tea with milk and two spoonful of sugar." Navya said.


"ok, u ll get ur tea with sugar and milk. What about u Manik?"


"I have no problem with any kind of coffee. Just 1 spoon sugar."


"accha, all ll get ur respective drink. I ll just come." Saying so Nandini went to kitchen. Aliya, Manik and Navya were talking with each other.



At the kitchen

[COLOR= GREEN]Nandini could not find tea leaves. She knew that they had it as Amms had tea and Amms just went yesterday. So she went to her chachi and got to know that chachi had kept it on the top shelve.


She again came back and tried to reach to tea leaves standing on a stool. After trying for some time she was succeed to hold the tea leaves jar.


Just then someone called her from behind. She turned to see who was it and also moved her hand.


Next moment they could find each other covered with flour. "Manik ke bacche, whats ur problem? What v u done?"


"Sorry I didn't do it with intention. I just came here to help u, as u areso late"


"mene explanation chaha kya. Why r u eating my brains?'


Just then aliya came to see why they were late. She saw in that state and started laughing. "accha, so hasi aa rahi hai bohot." Said Nandini making an angry face.


"u 2 r looking aged people. Good evening dada dadi" said Aliya.


"ohh... so ye raha mera blessing..." saying she poured the remained flour on Aliya. "Now u r looking 70s"


"Nanduuu..." Aliya was about to throw more flour but Nandini escaped from there. Then she turned and said, "Manik, let me show u d way of washroom."


Aliya and Manik were about to go when Cabir and Dhruv came. Navya also came.


"aree Aliya, Manik kya hua?" asked Madhubala.

"Madhubalaji, dekh nehi rahe ho kya hua? Baise, Aliya, yeh flour kya filmi style pe gira?"


"What???" Manik Aliya shouted in unison.


" Don't get so hyper. Hum sab tere bhi dost hai. Sab share kar sakti ho," said Cabir.


Manik was totally embarrassed. and Aliya was angry. To add spice in this situation Navya asked"why this Cabir is saying like this? What v u two done?' asked Navya Innocently.


" Nothing" saying so Aliya went from there. Cabir showed Manik the way of washroom. But this full conversation has made 1 person sad. He was standing and burning out of jealousy.[/COLOR]


After the Practice, Cabir, Dhruv and Nandu went to terrace. Suddenly Cabir asked "is Aliya in love?"


"What" , this time Dhruv and Nandini said in unison.


" aree, with Manik. As I m noticing this since many days that these 2 r always together. And this Manik, he never talks much with any of us. But he is a chirping bird with Aliya."


" but if she was in love then she would v told me, why would she hide this from her sister?"


" maybe she still didn't realize" said Cabir, " oh, Nandu.. I need to go yaar. Mom is alone home"


"ok..Bye"


"bye" said Cabir giving her a side hug. "Dhruv, chal.."


"hmmm.."said Dhruv lost in another world. He was thinking about Manik and Aliya. He loved Aliya but it was known to none. Aliya also had no idea about his feeling. "is Cabir right? Does Aliya love Manik?but what about me. How ll I leave widout her?


" dhruv, chal. Kaha khoya hai tu?" said Cabir breaking Dhruvs own thought.

"haa, chal. Bye Nandu"


The 2 left Nandini alone in the terrace. She gazed at the stars. But her mind was still thinking about Cabirs word. " I should b happy that my Aliya is falling for someone. But why my heart is aching?"...



Sorry guys for this late update. Was confused so wasn't able to write. Please.. do commenting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
poor nandu and dhruv...!!!!
update was superb...!!!
thanks a lot for the pm
update next part asap...take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: aavani

poor nandu and dhruv...!!!!
update was superb...!!!
thanks a lot for the pm
update next part asap...take care



Thank u apu..

Will try to update fast..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
poor nandu and dhruv...!!!!
update was superb...!!!
cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Manan_Ananya

poor nandu and dhruv...!!!!
update was superb...!!!

cont soon..



Thank u..ll try to continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Awsm part adita!!!
Loved it!!
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
wonderful part adita...!!!!!!
loved it...!!!!!
u penned it beautifully...!!!!!
plz continue soon this time ...!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: nimarious

wonderful part adita...!!!!!!
loved it...!!!!!
u penned it beautifully...!!!!!
plz continue soon this time ...!!!!
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Thanks yaar..will obviously update the part as soon as i can..
Posted: 10 years ago
#79
res..
soon to be unres.. :p
di Abhi kehna..😆
awesome update...
Lol...the flour scene...
update soon.. !!😛
the flour
Edited by ndcdance - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
No yr dnt make aliya fall for manik yr
Already tk nd soha exist
Nice update
Cont soon

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