We Are Destined To Love - MaNan FF- note on last page 18..plz read it - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

No yr dnt make aliya fall for manik yr

Already tk nd soha exist
Nice update
Cont soon



Thanks..aliya Manik ke lie paregi yaa nehin ye baad mein hi jaan paogi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ndcdance


res..

soon to be unres.. :p


Kya kahoon tujhe?😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Poor Dhruv and Nandhu.. hope some better news for them both in the next update- terrific job here though.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Poor Dhruv and Nandhu.. hope some better news for them both in the next update- terrific job here though.


Thanks for ur comment..
L try to gv better news..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
going to update it in sometime..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: adita

going to update it in sometime..



that's an awesome news...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
PART - 9


Next day
Nandini wanted to clear her feelings for Manik. She decided to talk to him. She was trying to get opportunity but failed to talk to him in college.
After college all of them decided to go to Maniks home for practice at 6.



Maniks home
Manik reached home and found his meethi ma working like a robot. "What happened ma? Why r u working like this?"

Just then someone said from behind, " Because I am back."

He turned and saw his dadi Kokila Modi. He got happy and went to touch her feet. "live long". "but Manik, I didn't expected this from u. ur ma, meri bahu, kept everything neat and clean. Despite of being her son, how ur home is dirty?"

Manik knew that his dadi was like this only. She was strict, cleanliness freak. So he didn't reply.

"dadi, u came alone? Dadu didn't came with u?"

" kyun? Sirf main kafi nehi hoon?"

" no, I didn't mean that. Just asking."

"no, none came with me. I ll live here till ur dad is back from London"

Their conversation ended there. Its 5.50. The bell rings. Dadi goes to open the door. She is shocked to see 2 girls and 2 boys who are Nandu, Cabir, Dhruv and Aliya.

"Who are u? and What are u doing here?"

All got afraid to see her angry mood. "Actualy we are Maniks friend. Is it Maniks home?' Nandini asked.

"you are my pota s friends? Ase ajeeb dost kab se banana lagi woh?"

Just then Manik came downstair to check who has come. He was shocked to see them. He knew they came for practice, but forgot to tell dadi.

" Dadi.. They are here my college friends. They came here for practice. Sorry, I knw its an odd time, but we don't have any other time as Competition is just after 18 days"he just said it in one go.

"Its ok. But when u started Singing? Its good that u understood ur talent. By the way, make sure that they don't create much chaos" saying she left.

"aree Manik, tu itna shant hai, teri dadi itni gussewali kyun hai?" asked Cabir feeling relaxed after she left.

"Guys she is strict, but kind hearted. Please don't mind"

"its ok. Now lets go for practicing" said Nandu to end the topic.


Next day practice at Maniks home

"Yaar Nandu, don't u think that we shouldn't have come here again? This time gussewali dadi humari jaan le lenge?"said Cabir. They were at outside of Maniks home.

"Cabir, tum larki o ki tarah itni over react kyun kar rahe ho? Manik ki dadi thori shakt hai, par dil ki bare hi acche hai." Said Navya.

"Madhubalaji, kis angle se she seemed good to u? yesterday she made me destroy my hair style. I took half an hour to set my hair."

"adhe ghante laga ke Bandar ban ne ki koi zarorat thi kya? Aaj kal ke no jawano ko aur koi kam nehi hai kya?" said a voice opening the door.

Cabir was baffled. But this time he didn't need to reply. Someone else replied fro behind."Hello hi bye bye. How could u accuse my vanja? Style is needed. See me. Hum itni beautiful hai, humare vanja acche nehi dikhenge toh kaise hoga"

"Mami, aap toh market jane bali thi. Toh yahan kya kar rahe hai?" asked Cabir.

"Hello hi bye bye, koi mere vanje ko Bandar kahe ga, and I ll stay mum. By the way, what this Madhubala doing with u?"


"do u want to come inside or go back?" asked kokila dadi.

"no, we are coming."said Nandini.

All went inside. Manorama mami also tried to go but dadi said, "Why u are coming? I don't like uninvited guests." Saying so she shut the door on mamis face. "Why u are standing here? Go and start ur avyash."

All rushed to Maniks room. Aliya was ahead and Manik was coming out. So they didn't see each other and a bang.

Next moment Aliya was on Manik on the floor...



Precap: Aliya and Nandu are sitting on terrace. Suddenly Aliya says, "Nandu, I think I am in love."
"What? With whom?"Nandini asked shockingly.
"I ll tell u the day before our performance."Aliya said.




Sorry for late update. But I ll be this late from now. So guys.. how is it? Please comment and don't forget to hit like.and yeah what do u think about Kokila Modi and Manorama mamis entry? Should I continue with this?

AND THIS PART IS DEDICATED TO ..Mellifluous.. FOR HER SUPERB RESULT.. CONGRATS DEAR...
Edited by adita - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
awesome sweety
loved it
precap...oho!!!!!
pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
awesome di..!!
loved it..!!!
waiting for more..!!!
aaliya will reveal..!!!
update soon..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
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will unres after reading all updates

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