A New Beginning: an OS

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

I knew it...I knew it...everyone said its ending..BUT i knew it was not!! And just as I said before that the epilogue was just a prologue...which indeed became true...that was the prologue for this ' A New Beginning'...

https://i1282.photobucket.com/albums/a530/indranirobbins/episode%20189/9_zps671a247b.jpg

And what a scene you hv picked Chicks...this is such a special moment for any girl ...And 100 marks to my sona munda Manik for this thoughtful gesture and arranging this griha pravesh just to see nandini smiling...because physical attractions are common but mental connections are rare...and Manik and Nandini's bond is so much more than physical..its emotional and spiritual...😭😭

I know they were travelling and not wearing indian dresses but I can't help but imagine them in traditional attire..the pics dont go with the OS but still yea dill mange more..

Happy Manik:

Happy Nandini:

I dont know why..out of everything...this part just squeezed my heart

"She was actually here in his house. She was real. He still could not believe that they were married and that she was his. He had come into the kitchen again and to make sure that she was really here. That he was not dreaming up all of this."

My poor baby Manik still can't believe Nandini is his finally...God has finally given him the happiness he deserves...he is still a scared little boy at his heart...afraid all his happiness is just a ruse...he needs assurance that yes its not a dream ...Nandini is finally his...He is happy ..and no one is going to take away his happiness again

And the kitchen scene...Uff uff uff ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🤢🤢🤢🤢

I have to thank you Chicks for this wonderful OS...I pray and hope there will be lots more to come in future...

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Edited by dushturain - 10 years ago

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saudade

@saudade

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Posted: 10 years ago

Long time lurker and a huge fan of your writing. Let me just say, you just made my morning. I had this huge smile on my face as soon as i saw your fic. I still do. 😳

You girl have mad talent. 🤗⭐️😳

Manan. ☺️ enough said.

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Chickee

@Chickee

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saudade
Long time lurker and a huge fan of your writing. Let me just say, you just made my morning. I had this huge smile on my face as soon as i saw your fic. I still do. 😳
You girl have mad talent. 🤗⭐️😳

Manan. ☺️ enough said.

Thank you so much ... 🤗

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh my god! This was so good! Pls continue it.. MAKE IT A FF!!! OS isn't fair when u have penned it like this! God how much love and passion! I could sense jusr by reading it! You are such an amazing writer!
Keep up the good work! :*

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Riya

@ZayaFever

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

This was just☺️

Your a very talented writer. Can't wait to read the SS if this was the sequel.

Do write more on manan😊

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missviolet

@missviolet

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

res

i know i have not unreserved on that one too but i will soon pakka and im really sorry

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MKrayZee

@MKrayZee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

YOU WROTE AGAIN?!

I love your writing. Like. I love it. You are so good!!!

This was amazing. I wanted to ask why you never included them in your epilogue but you went and wrote a whole OS on them. Thank you.

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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189
Oh my god! This was so good! Pls continue it.. MAKE IT A FF!!! OS isn't fair when u have penned it like this! God how much love and passion! I could sense jusr by reading it! You are such an amazing writer!
Keep up the good work! :*

oops ... dushtu warned me this would happen when I shared this thought with her ... we were actually discussing scenes that we would like to see in KYY and this idea came up of the cooking thinggy and this OS just stemmed from there...

but, i may write some more ... or even may not ... so just keep a look out i suppose!!!

thanks for your lovely comments!!

🤗

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Nitz

@nits_viratholic

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

So, first things first...we are converting this OS to SS and then FF...right? 😆

Now, when all are here..why not make an album with all of them? Navya is a Bollywood singer..Nandu is obvio the best and FAB 5 tashan.. And that way they could re-live their college memories.. my mind is stuck on the same idea since I read this OS 😆 (Please do consider)

and...do I even need to tell you again that how amazingly you have written this and what a talented writer you...I could literally picturise it all while reading .. 😃👏

Keep writing more and more and more.. 😆

Edited by nits_viratholic - 10 years ago