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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sakshhh
Verrry happy after reading ur new story . Thanks a lot for writing again

Thank you ...

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payal_diya

@payal_diya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Two days break from the forum and this is d welcome gift!!!!! Chickeee i love you bas.. Oh god. Where to start. The airport scene, car scene, griha pravesh, kitchen everything is just plain superb. Magic. Using phone so cant quote lines, but Manik reassuring hinself that Nandini is his now has touched my heart.
Girl you just cant stop continuing this! 😊

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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: payal_diya
Two days break from the forum and this is d welcome gift!!!!! Chickeee i love you bas.. Oh god. Where to start. The airport scene, car scene, griha pravesh, kitchen everything is just plain superb. Magic. Using phone so cant quote lines, but Manik reassuring hinself that Nandini is his now has touched my heart.
Girl you just cant stop continuing this! 😊

Lol!!

Yeah I'm as addicted as you guys ... So maybe I won't 😉

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Amita Patel

@KaShforever06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Amazing OS..

It felt so real..

P.s. You are an gifted writer.. You write so good that readers get lost in your writing.. Just keep writing

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

This os was such an amazingly beautiful surprise
Loved it to bits

I will get Pious (the true holder of this account and true MaNan shipper to read your FF and OS) she will have to let go of her oathe of not reading any MANan FFs then :)

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

you continued ..i am so happy right now.🥳

The update..loved it yar..it's just perfect..griha pravesh..N nandu cooking..😳

you write so well dear..N MaNan moments uff so hot😳

Manik showing their house to nandu..all moments so couplish so perfect😃

Please cont. na..i love your writting..

😃

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kresham

@kresham

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Let me give u a big hug...for this...Love u loads...dint even expect this cmg...but u stopped at edge ...arrr...But anyways... u r a darling Chickee...n i m a dumb that i dint even notice this post ...Thanks for the PM ...

I wud like to churaofy Dhustu's comment...

But serioulsy man i felt like having friends like this...this update made me go through every feeling that a girl can ever get her in her life...U r just awesome Chickee...i lack words or else i wud hv written a book for praising u ...

Love u bas boldiya🤗

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Serendipity2015

@Serendipity2015

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

A big Thank you to you Chickee for treating all of us to 'Happily ever after' & 'A new beginning', I for one thoroughly enjoyed myself reading them multiple times.

You creat magic with words, looking forward to many more of your writings. Hats off to you girl👏