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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sara babes u wrote this. And I had no idea. Not fair.

Every single time I recall that scene it brought tears in my eyes. What to do I am an emotional fool.
As much as I want to kill manik for saying those words to nandu. I know I dont have to kill him. Bcoz the boy died thousand times when he utterred those cruel words to her.

Magnificent.

Keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: chair1992

I was anrgy with manik for his sacrifice but reading this made me feel bad for him

You should definitly write more



Aww that is really really sweet😳 Thank you so much🤗
Everyone was really angry at him, hated him. But many forgot or did not realise how much it must have hurt him to say all that.😳 I am glad it changed your mind😳

Originally posted by: -Yami-

This was really beautiful sara I had tears during musicana seeing both of them go through such pain and ur words got all those memories back well written
And please keep writing u r not gone stop okay ⭐️




Thank you so so much😳🤗
Really really appreciate it😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13


Thank you dear😳🤗



Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Sara babes u wrote this. And I had no idea. Not fair.

Every single time I recall that scene it brought tears in my eyes. What to do I am an emotional fool.
As much as I want to kill manik for saying those words to nandu. I know I dont have to kill him. Bcoz the boy died thousand times when he utterred those cruel words to her.

Magnificent.

Keep writing.



Hehe😳
Brings tears to my eyes as well. At that point, everyone hated Manik, but it hurt him, killed him to say all that to her. He had to control his tears and continue with the facade.

Thank you so much Apu😳🤗
Really appreciate it😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Sara...I don't know why you were so worried about writing it. You have captured Manik's internal angst and vocalised it perfectly with your words. You have allowed us to go inside Manik's head.
Beautiful.
Edited by AnomanderRake - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
oh my shy princess..u wrote such a bful post..how did i miss it..
loved how u explained manik's emotions...🤗

took me back to musicana days
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooow Shy Princess...gud :) please dont be shy..write more Sara🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so beautifully put my lovely Sara!
And how true

Manik was so numb and hurt and angry by his own actions..as if one sees oneself from outside..and he saw in each tear that fell from her eyes the reflection of that boy he was not.
His monster image had been shattered by this girl and he was desperately trying to piece it together as much as he could, using her tears and his words...and yet, it could never be..the cracks would appear as soon as she cried, got hurt, even the thought of her with anyone else was enough...the gentlest touch of her hand, her bite marks..just the way she said his name...it was enough for that image to break down, as surely as she did.

' I know Nandini, I suffered the same'

he said that.. and he did too..not in the same way, but with an added guilt. My God, the monster wanted to be her hero, but ended up becoming a selfish friend instead :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

oh my shy princess..u wrote such a bful post..how did i miss it..

loved how u explained manik's emotions...🤗

took me back to musicana days



Miss Changi, thank you😳🤗 Thanks a lot. Really really appreciate it😳
It was on the second page nah that is why you missed it. So I don't blame you😳😆


Originally posted by: mamathasridhar

Wooow Shy Princess...gud :) please dont be shy..write more Sara🤗



Thank you MS😳🤗
Thanks a lot😳 Really appreciate it😳
Hehe. Will try😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

so beautifully put my lovely Sara!

And how true

Manik was so numb and hurt and angry by his own actions..as if one sees oneself from outside..and he saw in each tear that fell from her eyes the reflection of that boy he was not.
His monster image had been shattered by this girl and he was desperately trying to piece it together as much as he could, using her tears and his words...and yet, it could never be..the cracks would appear as soon as she cried, got hurt, even the thought of her with anyone else was enough...the gentlest touch of her hand, her bite marks..just the way she said his name...it was enough for that image to break down, as surely as she did.

' I know Nandini, I suffered the same'

he said that.. and he did too..not in the same way, but with an added guilt. My God, the monster wanted to be her hero, but ended up becoming a selfish friend instead :(



Geet thank you so much😳🤗

@Bold: Your words man!

Really appreciate it😳

Yeah. He had an added guilt. While she was breaking as well. Not knowing how to react. The one person she loved, even her fireflies glowed for them and yet he was crushing her heart😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Sigh...baby, we'll kill each other with feels..hahaha
I know..he totally crushed her heart, and with hers, his own...but poor baby, i remember the times she would just start crying by his mere thought...

remember the store room
where he goes

'kaise roku tumhare yeh aasu?'

:((((

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