In her hope lies the light of his heart...

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MasakaliRani

@MasakaliRani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awww...this is so so beautiful...loved it...touches you...ek dum dil pe 😊

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: MasakaliRani
Awww...this is so so beautiful...loved it...touches you...ek dum dil pe 😊

Thank you shaaks... Dil se 😳

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charminggenie

@charminggenie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

MoonS- You are suppose to boss around and order me to read this , k, thats how it works.

But word with everything. He cannot see her lose because in her winning lies her happiness. She is his firefly who will struggle , fight the darkness and he will take to being her star- the one guiding her , supporting her,like a nortyh star. Together they will fight the darkness. For her hope, for his heart and for their love.

These words were brilliant- WRITE MORE .

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: charminggenie
MoonS- You are suppose to boss around and order me to read this , k, thats how it works.

But word with everything. He cannot see her lose because in her winning lies her happiness. She is his firefly who will struggle , fight the darkness and he will take to being her star- the one guiding her , supporting her,like a nortyh star. Together they will fight the darkness. For her hope, for his heart and for their love.

These words were brilliant- WRITE MORE .

Genie 🤗

They are perfection. As you once mentioned, their imperfections make them perfect for each other. They will always stand together,fight against all odds, for each other. They are each others safe haven...

Thank you😳 But nothing when compared to what you write.

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Aparajita

@apardh_ba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Apu🤗

Thank you😳Manan are beautiful that way!!! They can walk away but cant stay away. They will forever be tied together.

My writing is nothing when compared to yours okay!!! I can't spin a mystery to save my life.

u want to hear more praises toony. Then ok I just love the way you played with words. Keeping it so simple but tge deepth in ur words. Ah! I cant like seriously. Plz dont compare my gibberish to ur awesomeness.

U dont mind me calling u toony r8? Idk ur name but ata bhi hota toh bhi I will call u moony toony only. Keep writing.

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

u want to hear more praises toony. Then ok I just love the way you played with words. Keeping it so simple but tge deepth in ur words. Ah! I cant like seriously. Plz dont compare my gibberish to ur awesomeness.

U dont mind me calling u toony r8? Idk ur name but ata bhi hota toh bhi I will call u moony toony only. Keep writing.

Let me bask in the warmth of your praise

Gibberish??? I Love your FF!!! The efforts and time you put in to writing every character, draw the plot lines for every single chapter is commendable.

And Toony sounds cool!!! I dont mind at all 😊

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-KP-

@-KP-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

This was very beautiful written. :)

I loved this line "he was drawn to her like a moth to the fire" - this is so true. No matter how hard he tried, he could never stay away from her!!

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -KP-
This was very beautiful written. :)

I loved this line "he was drawn to her like a moth to the fire" - this is so true. No matter how hard he tried, he could never stay away from her!!

Thank you!!!

IKR!! They are tied together for eternity, for better or for worse by invisible chords of love.