In her hope lies the light of his heart...

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"Have I really forgiven her???", He contemplated.

He had promised the devil of the darkness that he would freeze the flames of her love for eternity. Never to let her glow melt these frozen flames of his love again.

But who was he kidding?? He was drawn to her like a moth to a fire. He could never live without her. For her presence has left an imprint on his soul. An imprint so unlike the deep, ugly scars of his past. This mark of her innocence, her kindness, her hope, her positivity. This stamp of her love ,so unique, so her, sparkling like a star amidst the myriad of his scars.

The glow of her victory had yet again doused the darkened shadows of his hate, melting his frozen heart into a puddle of love. Their true love which lights up her fireflies. Her fireflies- the source of her hope, the reason behind her smile. That smile which is now all his to treasure.

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This is a random piece I wrote sometime back. Not proof read. So forgive me for the grammatical errors and the absurd adjectives used. Feel free to critique 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Someonr has truly told love heals ad see how beautifully nandini healed him...they r absolutely in sync with each other...their idiosyncrasies... Understanding each other...giving space...they nowhere look as kids bt mature ppl who will nurture their relation sans ego...

Nice post dear...continue writing...
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Originally posted by: neelakshi.swain

Someonr has truly told love heals ad see how beautifully nandini healed him...they r absolutely in sync with each other...their idiosyncrasies... Understanding each other...giving space...they nowhere look as kids bt mature ppl who will nurture their relation sans ego...

Nice post dear...continue writing...


Thank you for the kind words 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, amazin post dear ! 👏
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Originally posted by: Zoya_09

Wow, amazin post dear ! 👏


Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Moony tonny its so so so beautiful.
Esp-
"He had promised the devil of
the darkness that he would
freeze the flames of her love for
eternity. Never to let her glow
melt these frozen flames of his
love again.
But who was he kidding"

I loved these lines. U write so beautifully. Plz write more. Very beautiful. And so true.
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Moony tonny its so so so beautiful.
Esp-
"He had promised the devil of
the darkness that he would
freeze the flames of her love for
eternity. Never to let her glow
melt these frozen flames of his
love again.
But who was he kidding"

I loved these lines. U write so beautifully. Plz write more. Very beautiful. And so true.


Apu🤗

Thank you 😳 Manan are beautiful that way!!! They can walk away but cant stay away. They will forever be tied together.

My writing is nothing when compared to yours okay!!! I can't spin a mystery to save my life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Your post, every word is a beauty in itself, each line stirred my heartstrings like MaNan's poignancy did today.

They make even the darkness glow on them, fireflies and stars be their symbols of all things sanguine but its really them as one which forms the shinning halo ushering them out of the shadows always.

Keep writing, your post was love ❤️
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Originally posted by: -Sahar-


Your post, every word is a beauty in itself, each line stirred my heartstrings like MaNan's poignancy did today.

They make even the darkness glow on them, fireflies and stars be their symbols of all things sanguine but its really them as one which forms the shinning halo ushering them out of the shadows always.

Keep writing, your post was love ❤️


IKR!!! Its not the stars or the fireflies, its their pure, unadulterated love that outshines everything. Its them, their love that gives the reason for the stars to shine and fireflies to glow.
And today's scene

Thank you and I'm glad you liked it 😳

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