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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

aww... did I tell you Nandini and Cabir together are loved by Pious and Me alike!!!

you didn't just gave me Nandini's relation with all but specifically a special bond between my favourite pairing!!!!

thanks so much for that :)

i also love cabir and nandu s bonding...thank u so much...that u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
So chweet and cute one..
Loved cabini bonding...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
this this was really cute
i think i can guess what their favoirte place is
wear they met the first time ( bus stop )

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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww so cute manan...u write really well yaar...n pls update next part soon...n pls pls pls dont end this ss so soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Plz post d next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetarchie

Plz post d next part soon

ya dr will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was really cute dea...😊
Wen u r going to update nxt part plsss continue soon
If possible pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pls update soon...cant wait any more now😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 7 B

Yes finally we reached...the lakeside.we love this place...beauty of nature at its peak... reflection of moon in water, stars twinkling in the sky, fireflies glowing all over there...i cudnt stop my self and ran towards the lake,my hands were open,as if I cud fly high

Manik: nandu ...dheere...baby...(.he came running behind me)

Me: (I turned back) aree vaah kya hua aaj bada pyaar aa raha hain baby nd all ahh!!

Manik:wat ?tumhe kisne baby bulaya?(he kept his hand on my belly)I was talking abt my baby

Me: oh really?

Manik: ya ...if u wanna run then ok...but keep my baby here she must be tired

Me: achaaa she???

Manik: so wat? (Saying this he sat down on the bench)

Me: so abhi se decide kar liya.( I too joined him)

Manik: ya, I knw it's a baby doll

Me: no.my chota monster

Manik:no baby doll

Me: no manik...chottu monster

Manik: acha lets wait nd watch

Me: ok then

(Manik was intending to keep his head in my lap,then pulled himself back)

Me: kya hua?

Manik:voh baby ko kuch...

Me: ( oh ayippa!! hw caring he is) no manik baby ko kuch nahi hoga ...(I made him rest his head in my lap)

(He entwined his fingers with mine ,and turned his face towards lake)

Me: kya hua manik?

Manik: nandini...voh.

Me: bolo manik...mein hoon na tumhare saath

Manik: mujhe dar lag raha hain

Me: wat ?darr?? par kyun?

Manik:tum jaanti ho na mere parents kaise thein? Unhone mujhe kabhi pyaar nahi kiya?they were all behind money,they even didnt care whether I was dead or alive and I ...i hate them...

Me: its ok maanik .voh sab purani baatein yeh.ab yeh sab mat socho...

Manik: nandu...mujhe dar lag raha hain ki,kya mere bacche bhi mujhe hate karenge ,kya mein unhe voh pura pyaar nehi de paaunga jo voh deserve karte hain,kya unhe mein...

Me: ( I kept my fingers on his lip) sshhh manik yeh tum kya keh rahe ho...

Manik: mujhe...

Me: aisa kuch nahi hoga.why will they hate u wen ll b the world's best dad (I started ruffling his hair by my fingers I knw this will make him relaxed)..manik tum tumhare parents jaise nahi ho,tumhe sirf pyaar karna ata hain ,rishton ko sambhaalana aata hain,just see agar chutki keliye tum itne favorite ban sakte ho tho tum humre bachoon ki socho.hw madly u will love them,agar tum ek best boyfriend ban sakte ho ,ek bst husband ban sakte ho ,ek best friend ban sakte ho then ek achee dad kyun nahi?if u can luv me this much,then hw deeply u r goona luv a part of me nd u together... I leaned towards his forehead and kissed him

Manik: are u sure?

Me:200%

Manik: thnk u nandu...(he kissed my hands)...ys I will luv them,mein unhe iss world ki poori happiness doonga...nt me alone ..hum

Me: hum...

Manik: hameshaa...

(I just smiled ..and looking towards the) lake

Me: manik...i wish ki tumhe ek beti jaroor mile...

Manik: kyun? suddenly?

Me: pata hain manik mein apni dad ki favorite thi,aur rishab mumma ka,jabi hum khelte thein na mein aur dad ek team bante thein,he gave me all the love,he made me feel like a princess ladkiyaan hamesha papa ki ladli hoti hain,aur un dono ka rishta sabse wonderful hota hain,and that feeling can never b explained,hw protected u feel under him,he cared abt me,he luved me,unhone mujhe chalna sikhya,pehli baar school leke gaye,mera har b'day unhone grant celebration banaya...i was worlds most happiest daughter...aur achanak ek din sab kuch khatam...kuch baaki nahi raha...mujhe aur rishu ko chod ke voh dono chale gaye...

Tears started rolling down my cheeks which then fell on maniks forhead,he got up and cupped my face

Manik: nahi nandu...pls stop crying.

But I cudnt...he hugged me tightly...

Manik: nandu...ok go for it...bol do sab kuch jo bolna hai.kitne saal tum apne yeh dard chupake rakhogi,today let it flow...u ll feel better ,

(I rested my head on his chest,I cried till hw much I wanted)

(After sometime I broke the hug)

Me: manik tumhe pata hain? Nandini murthy pehle aise brave aur strong nahi thi,I was simple girl,jho dar ke bed sheet ke andar chip jaati thi,kisine mujhe daanta toh din bar roti thi par tab mujhe sambhalne keliye mere parents thein...par phir koi nahi...i had to b strong for rishab,ams ,chacha ,chachi...agar mein toot jaati toh voh bhiii...

Manik: calm down nandini...

Me: phir dekho mujhe tum mile,manik har ladki apne boyfriend ya pati mein apne dad ki parchaayi doondti hai,par mujhe mere husband mein appa dikhe jo mujhe har waqt protect karte hain,ek ma mili,jab mein bimar hoti meri care karti hain,ek dost mila jisse mein apne saare dukh sukh share kar sakti hoon,aur ek lover aur boy friend mila jo mujhe hamesha pyaar karegaa...

Manik:nandini ...sacch toh yeh hain,yeh sab tumhari vajah se hua tumahare pyaar ke vajah se..nahi humhare pyaar ke ...ab dekho vahaan upar(he showed me two stars)voh tumhare appa aur maa hain ,voh hume dekheke twinkle kar rahe hain that means they are happy...agar tum aise rone lagogi kya unhe acha lagega kya?

Me: ( I nodded my head in a meaning of no and wiped my tears

I hugged him tightly,he reciprocated with same intensity

Manik: I love you nandini,I cant evn imagine my life without u even for a moment..and now smile

Me: (I smiled) I also cant...manik

(we stayed there for some time hugging each other then he was trying to change my mood)

Manik: so miss nandini murthy aaj poori rat yahaan baitane ka irada hain kya?mujhe toh jaana hain

Me: kyun? Itni bhi kya jaldi hain?

Manik: voh kya hain na aaj meri wife ne kuch offer kiya tha ..

Me :( I knew wat he meant) kya kiya tha?

Manik: so tumhe yaad nahi hain?c and d all?

Me: mujhe ??wats dat? C ? D?

Manik: are u sure?

Me: ya

Manik : its ok...mein tumhe yaad dila doonga,and don't blame me for this

(He took me in his arms and started walking towards the car,I smiled shyly and wrapped my hands around his neck)

Manik: nandini...idhar dekho...he turned my head...tumhare jhumke kahan gaye?

Me: ( I just touched my ear) meine toh pehna tha..lagta hain gum ho gaya...

Manik: oh not again nandini...tumhe pata hain na I luv them,aur tumne ghuma diya phirse

Me: are jaan poochke thodi na gum kiya hain...ab jyaada baatein mat karo aur doondo

Manik: no I ll not

Me: manik.plsss ...dekho..jhumko wali memories tumhari hain...mere paas toh mere fireflies hain...

Manik: so you are blackmailing me?

Me: a kind of...ab voh sab chodo aur dhoondoo

Manik: last tym... ok?

Me: ok...

(We started searching every were near the lake,under the bench , in the grass and finally)

Manik: oh yaa...i got it...

(We both were so happy,bcs its not just a jwellery,humaari pehli mulakaat ki saari yaadein use judi huyi hain)

Me: lao do mujhe.

Manik:achaa meine dhundke diya aur tumhe lagta hain ki mein itni assani se de doonga

Me: ab zyaada bhav mat khao...

Manik: ok baba teek hain...lo mein pehna deta hoon( he made me wear it and kissed my earlobes,I was simply blushing)

Manik: chalee...(We started walking)nandu us din...

Me: kis din?

Manik: 10 july 2014,hum mile,our hands touched each other,we felt each other,aur tum keh rahi thi na ki tab tumhare fireflies glow kar rahe the...

Me:haan voh bohot bohot brightly glow kar rahe the,par tum toh chale gaye,pata how badly I wanted to see your face,par you monster ek baar piche mudke bhi nahi dekha...

Manik: ha ha ...tumse se kitni baar meine kaha hain ki meine mudke dekha tha,pata hain kyun wen I touched you ,it was something like an electric shock ,mere andar ajeeb si feeling aane lagi as if I hav touched my own soul

Me: haan baki story mujhe pata hain ,jab tumne mudke dekha toh mein bus mein chad chukki thi,tumne sirf mera haath aur jhumke dekheee

Manik: haan haan,and u knw jab hum phir colg mein mile,mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tha tumhi voh ladki ho,phir bhi tumhare yeh haath(he started moving his fingers from my palm to shoulders)aur yeh jhumke.humesha mujhe tumhari aur laate thein

Me: haan haan voh toh mujhe bhi pata hain,din bar ladthe rehte thein,aur phir kahin na kahin se tapak jate kiss karne ke liye...

Manik: haan ab sari galtiyaan mujpe daaldo...voh ladki tumhari bhoot thi jo humesha mere upar gir jaati thi,mere saath store room lock ho jaati thi,mere saath shower lene mere ghar aa jati thi,aur Diwali ke din hot and sexy kapade pehenke mere kamre ke andar aakar mere upar jaan poochke giri ke...aur tum keh rahi ho ki mein kiss karne athaa hoon

Me: dekho...mein jaanpoochke nahi girt hi,it was an accident

Manik: achaa ,vaise bhi yeh kissing series ki shuruwat tum hi ne kit hi yaad hein ? us din audi mein harshad ki fight,aur tumne mujhe sab ke saamne kiss kiya tha.chiii chiii nandu tumhe sharam nahi...ayiii

(Now I was completely irritated and started hitting him ,he ran towards our car I started chasing him )

Me: ab bas mein thak gayi,chalo ghar chalte hain...

We both got into the car,manik was about to start the car

Manik: chii chiii nandu ...

Me: maaanikkk...(I held his collar pulled him towards me and kissed him ,he was shocked...after I few minutes I pulled my self back,)

Me: ab jaan poochke kiya...tumhe koi problem??

Manik: no...not at all...infact I loved it...

Me: ab gaadi chaloo...

(I hid my blush by looking the other side ,I opened the glass and started enjoying the cool breeze I didn't turn to look him

Manik: nandu gussa ho?

I didn't reply...

Manik: gussa ho darling and he started tickling me with his one hand

Me: manik noo...no..pls stop...bas gussa nahi hoon...

Manik: sure

Me : hmmm...

I leaned towards his shoulders and rested my head..manik just kissed my head and h e drove to our home sweet home

(sometimes words have nothing to do with feelings we don't always need words to express true love all we feel can be transferred as our eyes speak or as we hold hands and wen we hug it feels so comfortable that we never want to let it go...

Love isn't about one day its abt falling in love everday , every moment with the same person,and I m falling for this monster evry second...)

Manik : I luv u too nandu...

(I was not shocked bcz I knew he has done masters in reading my mind,heart and soul..)

(I gav him a smile and clutched his shoulders more tightly)

(So here comes the end of my story..thank u guys for supporting me😊😊.After Arnav and Khushi,Manik and Nandini are the only couple who have made me fall in love with them...They are truly made for each other ..in this era of use and throw kind of relationships,they hav redefined the meaning of love and I love NITI TAYLOR...)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
wow lovely update
very nicely written
loved it

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