**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
manik teaching swimming to manan like a typical father
I am really excited for the next update
Cont soon
Plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very awesome one..
waiting to see manik reaction on manan calling him dad..
update the next soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!! Its amazing I am loving ur update awesome plzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love ur update...
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guyzz I m really sorry
I can't update till 4may...
Plzz
In compensation I will write 2parts for u
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Posted: 10 years ago
its ok but do surely post 2 parts bcoz im eagerly waiting for it 😃
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thanks for the note
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No problem dear...your writing is simply amazing and I know when ever u ill update the next part u r gonna rock so take ur time 😊 btw loving the bonding of manan and manik And thanx for d pm.. stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyy its 4th may today plesase its such a cute story please update soon ...waiting😊
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Sry for delay...
Here it is
Part 6d
It's almost midnight
Everyone heard Mukti shouting...(as she's pregnant)
Mukti's room
Mukti: Now...i want it now...go get it
Abhi: Baby abhi...
Mukti: Yes...
Abhi: How I'll get it here ...
Mukti:I don't..ur baby wants it
(cavya and dhrulya enter and Manik)
Dhruv: Mukti r u fine ?
Alya and Navya sit beside her
Mukti:no I m not I want it now...
Cabir: Guyzz chalo..every thing is fine..abhi dedega..ussey they need some privacy dude...chalo
Abhi: Yaar..plzz chup...main nahi de sakta..
Cabir: Toh hum bhi nahi de saktey..
Manik:stop it yaar
Mukti: I want papaya yaar...
Everyone: Papaya
Manik: Wait...i think so there's one in refrigerator
Mukti: Manik plzz..
(they run and bring it)
Nandini arrives when they left
Manik: Here u go ..
Nandini: Manik!! R u out of ur mind (snatching bowl)
Manik:Nandini ussey papaya khana hai...that's it (snatching bowl from her again)
Nandini: No!!
Manik gives it Mukti and again she takes it
Nandini: Manik!!pregnancy main papaya nahi khatey..don't u know
Manik: How do u know?
Nandini:(in one breath frustratingly)bcoz manan ke waqt I also wanted it but sujata Said no..coz it can cause it can cause miscarriage..do u get it..(takes bowl from him) ...
Everyone is gazing at her
Manik: Manan ke waqt u...(she realizes what she said)
Nandini: I mean...manan ke waqt sujata ko Maine suggest kiya tha...
Cabir: And how did u know?
Nandini: Cabir.!!! Main hospital main work karte Hu...get it...
Abhi: I can't risk it...sleep Mukti..
Nandini and everyone walk out...
Manik:she took away my breath...
Cabir: Jab sach pata chaleyga...she'll definitely take it..
Manik: Kuch kaha tumney
Cabir: Nahi...chal ..

In morning,
Everyone is sitting in living room as as servants r loading their luggage
Alya: Nandini hey manan aur Sameer ka report day so lets go together Navya we'll join us too
Navya: Ha...
Manan: Mom don't worry this time again I'll top and report se pehley prize distribution ceremony bhi hai...
Nandini: Actually..i can't...woh main bhaut chuttiya le hai..i have to check in hospital also...sry
Manan:(gets angry) mom!! U always do this..last time bhi kahi aye thi...i hate for this...
Nandini:manan...baby listen na..mom ko work hai na bacha...
Manan: No mom...aap humesha work ko jyada importance dete Ho...kasha dad hotey..yeh kabhi nahi Hota ...i hate u..i seriously hate u
Nandini: Manan!!(he walks upstairs)
Alya: Nandini. U should go and talk
Nandini:no alya...ussey samaj na hoga..maon humesha uske baat nahi sunogi he shoul adjust
Manik: Wait...let me talk(and he goes upstairs)

In manan's room,
Manik:hey buddy..kya hua(hitting him by shoulder)
Manan: Tum ne dekha na..
Manik: Mom ko kaam hai...but she tries to give you time..u should understand (manan look towards him) and and...i have a solution I'll come as guardian..what say..
Manan:really... I love u Manik..u r superb...fine
Manik: So lets walk downstairs..(and he walk towards the door)
Manan: Dad!!!
Manik:(feels some kind of string attached) hmm..and turns..
Manan: U will come as my dad...
Manik: Fine (to himself) aeysa kyu lag raha hai I have been waiting for it..ki manan call me dad(a smile appears

They reach home
Manan: I ll wait Manik..bye..mom..
Nandini: Hmm
Manan: Manik is coming as my dad...(she look at him) aur I m sry(they hug)

Manbir
Cabir: Manik
Manik: Hmm..
Cabir: Look at Sameer and Dhruv ..
Manik: Kya ..toh
Cabir: I mean...children resemble their parents..jaise sameer and cavya..too voh hai Harshad type thodi se..but I just imagine manan ke dad kaisey hogaey..means just dekh yaar..voh jaldi gussa hota hai..apne friends Ki kitne care Karta hai ...possessive about Nandini...bully Karta hai...i mean bilkul tere jaise..
Manik: What??? U know.. Na
Cabir: I do but just...aur vaisey bhi don't take tension tere aur Nandini ke bich thodi kuch Hua tha..i mean like vih pregnant Ho...agar kuch hota she should have told u aur why she'll lie.. walks out leaving him to think
Manik: Remembers abt their past..shit Nandini kahi ...
Manan: Bye Manik...
Manik: Bye..buddy what's ur age?
Nandini: 5yrs..
Manan: Mom it's six..
Nandini: Lets go ..
Manik: Wait..kahi manan mera beta toh nahi...
Precap: Manik meets Nandini 's doctor and truth is revealed and Manik confronts her...

Sry guys for late update...here it is...it's too late so I can't update nxt part now but..but surely tomorrow actually I returned from my konkan trip today..lots of things to do unpacking and all also I was bit tied so I woke up at 3pm and then work and tutions ...and again homework so plzz...
Extremely sorry...but pakkka wala promise tomorrow...2parts...

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