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lavanya

@Lovelylav7

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#391

Nadini will leave manik?.. I know it won't b happen... Waiting for another update

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kunwar amarholic.. !! ðŸ˜‰

@ndcdance

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#392

res /unres

tks for the update ...

Nandini and her innocence...

waiting for how Manik convinces Nandini that she is not wrong..😛

update soon..😆

Edited by ndcdance - 10 years ago

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#393

I am very happy with nandu, she behaved like a good girl and thought how this kind of behaviour would effect other people

Manik didn't need any explenation, he knows her 😆

No words needed between manan

Adding your own pov in between is not a good idea but thats my opinion, i am not suggesting you to stop or anything like that

Why i dont like it, its when i read something, i try to understand why the characters are behaving like this, what could be the motive of the writer, why did he choose this and that

It interrupts the story, Your pov was good and i agree with what you wrote but it just doesn't fit in the middle of the story

Again its only my opinion, dont take any offense (PLEASE)

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#394

GIRL U REALLY TEST MY PATIENCE ITS SOO GUD ALIYA ARGHHH SHE ONLY WANT MANIK CAUSE OF HIS MONEY SHE DONT LOVE MANIK.WEN THERE IS TRUST LOVE WILL BE AUTOMATICALLY

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#395

ohhhooo double dose...

superb... my MaNanBir...

i can understand nandu's situation...

and i m happy that manik is in full mood to get back her again...

today i loved ur povs... superb... natural... reality.

keep it up my harry potter starter...

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: musicialtie
ohhhooo double dose...
superb... my MaNanBir...

i can understand nandu's situation...

and i m happy that manik is in full mood to get back her again...

today i loved ur povs... superb... natural... reality.

keep it up my harry potter starter...

tum dono ko bolti hu I want kiss in front of alya don't knw how but I want

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Shree

@CrazyMe_04

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#397

Firstly, thank you for the scraps and sorry for not replying from so long. Had exams going on so couldn't come to the forum very regularly and for long. BUT. I just read all the parts right now and OH MY GOD! I am absolutely speechless! The way you have made the storyline, it just keeps getting better and better! I have nothing to say, everything's been said already but this FF is just

SUPER-CALA-FRAGILISTIC-EX-PIALI-DOCIOUS!

P.s...sorry the spell check didn't allow me to write the big word altogether...

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Dhariya

@Dhariya_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#398

res

Plz remind me if I forget to unres...

unres

this alia how dare she spy on manik seriously yaar dont u trust him

aur jaldi se manan ko milao

i am waiting for that...

i need a confession soon

cont soon

thanks for reminding...

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#399

First a big thanks for the regular update, it makes us more interested, now aliya is gonna do something, which is going to show her true colors to everyone esp manik, and he wil be free from her, i want him to get rid of her soon, no offence, just hate this aliya, not in real story, waiting eagerly for next update.

sorry yaar, no prediction this time, one thing i knew well is, aliya gonna do something that wil hurt nandini, which wil also hurt manik, so waiting for that. But the thing, whose that person who sent that note to manik and tried to kil him, wil u give any clue in next part abt it.