Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73

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aryapk1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: zaroge
God man this is super funny
Pity manik

thanx od i thought i left touch in writing funny update thanx for relief

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

I'll fall off laughing 🤣

Really waiting for the next rofling part 😊

Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago

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Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

hayeee tune dil khush kr ditaaa waise hi subah se mood off tha but love u bas bol diaaa

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AAVANI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

wow..yaar..finally u r back with a bang...!!!!
missed u a lot...

update...OMG..!!!! mind blowing...!!!! nandini killed it...!!!! ha ha ha..!!!! superb...
poor manik...sandwiched b/w nandu and aliya...poor boy...

master piece scene ...was nandu talking with vikas...!!!!!...dialogues...!!! u penned it so beautifully...
its funny...loved it...

pls continue soon...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...

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aryapk1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: Natashaaa
hayeee tune dil khush kr ditaaa waise hi subah se mood off tha but love u bas bol diaaa

dekh chutti gayi thi phir bhi tera demand yaad hai dekh 😳

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aryapk1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: aavani
wow..yaar..finally u r back with a bang...!!!!
missed u a lot...

update...OMG..!!!! mind blowing...!!!! nandini killed it...!!!! ha ha ha..!!!! superb...
poor manik...sandwiched b/w nandu and aliya...poor boy...

master piece scene ...was nandu talking with vikas...!!!!!...dialogues...!!! u penned it so beautifully...
its funny...loved it...

pls continue soon...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...

thanx yaa i missed reading ur comments .glad u liked it

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Aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

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aryapk1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: cute-aly

thanx yaar for such cute appreciation 😃

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Niya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

nhi nhi nhiii! 😭
iss chudaiyl alya ko bhaga writer mere nandu ki Manik pe line maarrhi hai!
kaha romantic scene horaha tha, sab bigaad dia issne..
Manik b na..isski chhutti karrne k bajaay room me third base karrne chala gaya!!!
😭
1st half of d update was pretty hot writer well done! 😳

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aryapk1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: N_Niya
nhi nhi nhiii! 😭
iss chudaiyl alya ko bhaga writer mere nandu ki Manik pe line maarrhi hai!
kaha romantic scene horaha tha, sab bigaad dia issne..
Manik b na..isski chhutti karrne k bajaay room me third base karrne chala gaya!!!
😭
1st half of d update was pretty hot writer well done! 😳

don't worry next update would be a dhamaka alya -nandu scene dekhnaa alyaa iss going shout in full pitch

aur nyonika-nandu scenes iss going to be damn funny

manan toh hai hiii