Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73 - Page 32

Originally posted by: cute-aly

awesome update..so funny 😊 loved the selection of songs...suprabhadam was so unexpected
👏 😊
But had a doubt whether nandu was referring to c***** or smthn else 😕 😳

Love this... so funny... can't wait to see what else she reveals...

Originally posted by: angelrj

awesome update..so funny 😊 loved the selection of songs...suprabhadam was so unexpected
👏 😊
But had a doubt whether nandu was referring to c***** or smthn else 😕 😳

update soon. its really awesome

Update soon!! And great Manan FF!!! Please PM me the next part!! 👍🏼

Nandini-mujhe akela rehna pasand nhi hai u kno mai aur rishabh

Manik-rishabh ???

Nandini-rishabh mera bhai cute saa toda naughty hai but cute hai .i love him

Manik-smiles -seeing her happy while saying about her brother

Nandini-u kno how happy I was mom ,dad nd rishabh my family my world.sab khatam hoo gaya

Kuch nhi bachaaa

Manik-asked kya hua

Nandini-woh woh sab khatam hogaya sab chale gaye rishabh aur mujhe chodke

Manik-tumhe toh kush honaa chahiye who log jab tak the tab tak tumhe bhut pyaar karte the

Mere maa baap ke saath hone ke bawajhod who mujhse pyaar nhi karte nd becomes sad

Nandini looks at manik nd goes near him nd cups his face-nooo sad I hateee dukh I mean sadness nd nd goes near nd kisses his forehead nd then cheeks

manik -bass aur nhi seh paunga plzz problem hojayegi

suddenly phone rings nd

Nandini-phoneee bhar reh gaya nd gets up nd runs outside

Manik-to gets up from bed nd goes nd wears a shirt nd comes out of the room nd sees phone on the table nd nandini missing

Samandar mai gir gayiii bachaooo mai maar jaungiii. Koi toh bachoaaa

Manik runs towards poolside nd sees nandini trying to drown in 4feet pool

Manik-yee ladki kya kar rahi hai

Nandini-yee idiot dekh nhi raha mai akhir saanse lee rahi hoon bachaooo mmujhe nhi toh ye samundar mujhe keech ke lejaayega .

Manik jumps into the pool nd hold nandini

nd she clung on him nd manik keeps looking at her cute innocent face nd water droplets running through her face was turning him on nd her hand holding him close that he can feel her lips touching shoulders

manik selfcontrol rings -control control manik she is drunk u have to be sane atleast

Manik-pehli baat ye samundar nhi hai pool hai aur dusri baat really ek 4feet ke pool mai 5.4feet ki tumhe doobke ke maarne ke liye bhut talent chahiye hoga tumara kab utrega

Nandini-ohhh yee pool thaaa

issilye mai sochoo beach wale police kaha hai . raat ko beach rukne nhi dete u kno

Manik-hopeless u r

Nandini-sees her dress-arey yee pool haina phir mujhe bikini chahiye

Manik's eyes popped out wat -tumhe kya chahiye

Nandini-says smiling -arey pool mai toh swimming suit pehante hai naaa sooo mujhe bikini pehanani hai

Manik-gets all flustered it isn't tat he hasn't seen girls in bikni but seeing nandini in those would be not even be in his fantasy list .

Nandini-areyyy laoo naaa nd pushes manik out the pool

Manik -nooo ways I want to live

Nandini-ayippa see he is not getting me bikni .

Manik-areyyy ye tum ayippa se kyun hayee ram ayippa se bikni ki baate

Nandini-ayippa tell him to shut up if he wants to talk ten ask him to get bikin for mee

Manik-logic toh lagao mere paas bikni kaise hogi mai todina pehenta hoon bikni

Nandini-ohzz tum pehana bhiii mat achee nhi lagoge .yee uss chudail kaa bhi ghar hai rite nyonika who toh pakka pehnti hogi uska leke aao

Manik-isne daaru pee hai par logic abhi aa raha hai-it won't fit u

Nandini-leke toh aaoo we will see

Manik-u kno tum mujhse meri maaa ki bikni pooch rahiii hoo

Nandini"hwww very bad naa

Manik-very very very bad

Nandini-ok tik hai aab jao leke aao tab tak mai kya karoon gaana gaati hoon AAJ BLUEE HAI PANI PANI PANI

Hwww blue toh kuch aur bhi hainaa manik

Manik-gets out of the -by god peke ye itne non veg joke maarne lag gayii hai kuch karna padega nhi toh beta ye bikni mai aur tu uparwale ke paas parcel hojayega

Manik goes into hall nd sees alya entering

Manik-shouts -ayipppaaa nooo

Alya-wat!!!!!

Manik-I mean alyaa wat a surprise

Alya-haina I came here to surprise u

Manik-heartattack surprise diya hai tumne

Alya"kyaa

Manik-kuch kuch nhiii

IN POOL

Nandini was singing- aaj blue hai blue sab kuch sab kuch

*Tring* tring*

Nandini-arey wah automatic background music

Aaj blue hai sab sab kuch

*Tring*tring*

Nandini-sahi hai wait yee toh yaha see aa rahi hai nd sees maniks phone on the edge of the pool nd looks at it nd sees VIKAS MANAGER

Nandini-arey kutta no.1 ka call hai maza aayega nd picks up

Vikas-manik be ready tommrow evening we will leave to meet MR. MALHOTRA

Nandini-nhi aaunga toh kya karlogee

Vikas-hello whose this

Nandini-u r death .u will die in hell keede padee tujhe .dokheebaaz .chuchundar jaise shakal wala .idiot

Heartless scoundrel ,baarbad hoga tu aande padte tujhe

Vikas-who the hell is this

Nandini-yeee chup dekhta nhi iam talking oops sorry dekhega kaise phone pe haina soo sunaayi nhi deta mai baat kar rahi hoon where was I haan aande .tu virgin maarjaye aur kuch yaad nhi aa raha . but . I swear yee sab tere saath hoga and I will make sure u cry

Vikas-lets see naam tak toh baatne ki himmat nhi hai. Agar aisa hi hai toh naam baatake dekhaoo

Nandini-achaa jaa baata diya autowali hai naaam mera jaa jo ukhaadna hai ukhadle.

Vikas-wat autowali???

Nandini-smilies - maza aagaya ruku akela yee nhi iski darling ko bhi toh sunana padega

IN HALL

Alya-baby I need to tell u

Manik-hum kal college mai baat kar lenge now u goo

Alya-manik y r u avoiding

Manik -iam not avoiding matalb itni raat hogayi haina baby iam just concerned about u

Alya-really manik .i have been here even at more late tyms soo don't give me tat reason

Manik-who who iam not feeling well

Alya-stop it u kno we haven't even kissed since we r dating

Manik-hain abhi doo din hi toh hue hai

Alya-manik doo din hogaye u r not even letting me come near .i toh now seriously doubt ki tum gay hoo

Manik-hello iam not gay .

Alya-ten I have decided lets do it

Manik-wat !!

Manik murmurs to himself-aaj ladikyon ko kya hogaya hai ek ko bikni pehani hai dusri toh direct third base .i cant handle tis wat to do.

Alya-haan kaha hai room chaloo

Manik-alya sunoo

Alya remove her jacket nd pulls manik into room

Nandini here gets out nd goes into garden nd sees watchman parking the car -nd ask kaun aaya hai

Watchman-wohi aapki sautan .

Nandini-hain sautan !!! kaunsi waliii

WATCHman-wohi alya

Nandini-woh areyy waha entertainment khud chalke aaya hai

Nandini goes to maniks bedroom window nd opens it

Nandini-hwww blueflim nhiii nd she bends down the window

Manik was on bed nd alya was about to remove her clothe hearing the voice

Alya-koi hai manik

Manik-shouts haan koi hai tum joaa plzzz its risky

PRECAP

Manik about kiss alya

Nyonika nd drunk nandu scene

Total drama coming up

guys regular update from monday onwards .i missed u all sooo much .finally updating my stories

sorry for keeping u guys waiting

enjoy reading nd do comment nd like

nd natashaa u r demand in next part

Wow yaar!!!
Missed u and your updates!!!
Awesome part!!
Loved it!!!
Waiting for d next part!!!
Continue Soon!!!

God man this is super funny