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first of all ...sorry sorry sorry for such a huge delay ...i am so so so sorry ...i was stuck in a mess 😭...but now i am back ...thanks for all ur lovely comments 😊...here is the update for u all hope u like it ...hit like and do comment 😉


PART 18




MANIKS POV


Hahaha ...I can't stop laughing ...oh my god ...what all is happening ...cabir helping his dear madhubala ...wow ...now it will be fun ...he always tease me na..now its his turn

I went near cabir and of course navya ...who were walking close to each other hand in hand ...cabir and madhubala sounds crazy na ...

"Cabir ... Kya chal raha h "I asked teasing him ...

"Kuch nai ...wo yeh gir gai thi. ...so I was just helping her to walk till her tent ...that's it "cabir said give me a 'I will kill u 'look

"Ohhh ...accha accha ...par tu kab se itna helpful ho gaya ...I mean suddenly u and madhu ...oops sorry navya ...what's cooking "I asked still teasing him as ...his glares can't stop me from teasing him...

"Cooking ...par hum sub ne khaya tha na Maggie ...ab kya cook Karna h..."asked navya with a stupid look on her face ...

"W-h-a-t?!"me and cabir said in unison and started laughing...

"Kya ...tum Dono pagal ho ...aur humare samaj ke bahar ho "said navya giving weird looks to us ...

"Yeah that's why u r not nandini"me and cabir againsaid in unison ...

"Kyaaa ...nandu...uska aur tum dono ka kya connection"asked navya confused ...

Cabir gave me a smile ...in this two months of her presence in our life ...cabir also have started being open to nandini ...they talked like friends and he have started respecting her ... nandini have started understanding him well...they jell up now well

"Kuch nai madhubala ji tussi na samjhoge ...aap jao aur so jao OK. ...aur Hume bhi sone do ...good night"cabir said carelessly

"Haa haa jao so jao...cabir tent tak chod de usse jaa"i again started pulling his leg...

"Stop pulling my leg man ..."cabir said rolling his eyes

"Pulling leg?...par cabir usne tho tumhare pair ko haat bhi nai lagaya ..."said miss.tubelight madhubala

"Haha ha...she is a perfect partner for u"i said in cabir's ears just to get a light punch on my stomach

"Chodo ...hum khud chale jayenge ...yehi pe h humara tent "navya said and left cabir hand and went towards tent which was just 4-5 steps close to us ...

Navya turned and said "good night cabir ..."to which cabir replied "yeah good night "..

I was trying hard to control my laughter ...navya then went towards her tent ..

"Haa haa aa haa its so funny man ...what a perfect match "I burst out laughing hard...

"Shut up ...Kuch bhi na "cabir said ignoring my laughs ...

"Kya Kuch bhi..I mean tujhko kya ishq wala love ho gaya h ...bol."I said and again I got a slight punch on my stomach..

"Cabir ...cabir"navya came out of tent calling him

"Lo phir aa gai "I said smirking

"Ab kya hua ..."cabir asked irritated

"Cabir ..manik vo nandini "she said ..looking worried

Listening to her name I came near her ...i was worried and tensed and asked "Kya hua usse "

"Vo tent mein nai h"navya said

"What?"we both yelled

I went near and checked just to assure myself ...and she was not there ...

"How is this possible,... She was here some time ago"I said tensed ...I felt my heartbeats faster ...

"Manik let's not waste time ,...let's find her "cabir said ...to which I agreed and I went ahead to find her..

"Tum yehi raho ...and don't tell anyone raghav ko pata chala tho it will be a big problem...we will find her soon"said kabir to navya who was equally worried ...she just nodded her head ...

"Cabir chal "I almost yelled as I found him talking to navya and I didn't wanted to waste any time here ...
He came and we started looking for her ...
Its all my fault ...I shouldn't have yelled at her ...
She must be hurt and this jungle is so vast... What if some thing happen to her ...on what am I even thinking .. ...

We went near church and she was not there ...with each passing second I felt my heart stopping ...i was thinking about things which I never want to happen to us ...
"No manik she is not here in this side ...let's find near that jungle ...may be she is there chal"cabir said breaking my thoughts

"Cabir ...she will be fine na "I asked him

"Manik ...Kuch nai hoga usse ...clam down and let's find her "cabir assured me

"Its all my fault ...I am such a jerk ...I yelled at her with no reason...I just don't deserve her "I said ...I felt my knees weak and my hands shivering and cheeks getting wet and my eyes weld up with tears which never happen to stop ...I felt the darkness getting back in my life ...

"Manik ...shut up ...kuch bhi mat soch yaar...let's not waste time ...let's find in near jungle side ..."said cabir patting my shoulder ..."we will find her"he added

"Par agar usse Kuch hogaya tho"I again said and that mere thought made me shiver in fear...

"No yaar manik"cabir said and hugged me ...

"I can't live without her "I said ...I felt lost ...

"U don't have to live without her "he said assuring me and we went near the jungle side to find her...

Nandinis pov

I was crying ...crying hard ...the loneliness I was going through right now was just tearing my heart ...I was near a Clift sitting near the edge of the Clift ...but I was least bother about it...I was crying. ...how could she say that ...how could she ...

Manik will never do this ...I have seen the love he have for me in his eyes ...love ...



"He is just physically attracted to u nandini "I remember alya saying this ...

Was she right ...is he just physically attracted to me...I remembered our kisses...the way he kiss me ...chase my waist ...from the start of our relationship we had kisses ...I still remember before the relationship started he always tried kissing me ...no how can I even think like that ...he has always been there for me ...

He get tensed when I cry ,he get jealous seeing me with dhruv ,he take care of me and my family ...no he is not just attracted to me ,I kept my hand on my head and cried more ...how could I think like that ...

And revenge ...he can't be so heartless ...just for a punch he can't be with me and den break my heart ...I am so confused ...

I cried more loudly ...I wanted to kill myself ...

...MANIKS POV...

"NANDINI"I yelled running in the jungle ...

With every second I felt my life moving away from me ...

"Nandini "I yelled again ...

"Nandini "my voice was getting weaker ...

...cabir and I reached near the Clift ...and I saw a small petite figure sitting near Clift ...

"Nandini "I murmured ...
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Precap

Manan confrontation...
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guys i know this chapter is boring ...so sorry ...hit like and do comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please clear all the misunderstanding between manan in the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
woaah
finally dey atleast found her
i hope all doubts iof nandani get clear soon
cant see dem away for long
and dat alya should have a good lesson for wat she did
poor nandu
plz update soon will be waiting
n plz pm me nxt tm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Please clear all the misunderstanding between manan in the next update

yes babes😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apps33

woaah

finally dey atleast found her
i hope all doubts iof nandani get clear soon
cant see dem away for long
and dat alya should have a good lesson for wat she did
poor nandu
plz update soon will be waiting
n plz pm me nxt tm

yes dear
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Plz clear their misunderstanding in next part itself
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank god u posted..
I thought u forgot ke u have an ff to post...
Ok now coming to the update... cabir navya part was fun...
But feeling bad for manik...
Cabir is the jaan of ky2 in show as well as in your ff
Plz clear their misunderstandings...
But it was too short.. plz make it a bit longer plz...

Thanx for pm...
Continue soon...
Plz dont take that much tym...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
i want next part now
i can wait more
cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc update
But eagerly waiting for their confrontation... so tht they cn sort out all their misunderstanding...
Update soon...thnk uh for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Nyc update

But eagerly waiting for their confrontation... so tht they cn sort out all their misunderstanding...
Update soon...thnk uh for pm

thanks dear
Will update soon 😊

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