MaNan : Love Birds (updated part 38 pg40)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

ITS OK

THANKS FOR UPDATEING IT

I JUST LOVE IT

PLZZZ MAKE THE NEXT PART LONGER

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Chapter 32

as soon as the kiss ended Manik took Nandini to the bed and laid her down

Nandini : Manik.

Manik just hmmed.

Nandini : tum na ab humesha mere ho agar tumne kisi aur ladki ki taraf dhyaan diya na toh me tumko maar dogi!

Manik wanted to tell her that he won't even think of it but Nandini was drunk and she was blabbering so he took it for granted.

Manik : Nandini tum so jao abhi!

Nandini : but Manik muje to aaj raat tumhare saath...

before Nandini could continue Manik spoke to control the situation.

Manik : Nandini tum so jao verna shimla me bhi bohut zada hot girls hai!

Nandini : Manik!

she ran up to him n got hold of his waist.

Nandini pleading : tum agar room k bahar gaye toh achha nhi hoga.

Manik was more than happy that Nandini was so much possessive about him.

Manik smirking : tum muje chodo aur vaha ja ker so jao!

Nandini : nhi m not gonna leave u tum bhi chalo!

Manik : tum jao m just coming!

Nandini : no!

Manik finally giving up : okay chalo.

Manik took her in his arms like he was carring a baby and took her to the washroom he made her stand under the hot shower till she behaved normal.

Nandini : Manik kya ker rahe ho!

Manik : ab tum toh muje chod nhi rahi thi toh muje nahana tha toh i took u with me.

While Manik was talking Nandini's whole attention was on his lips.As soon as he finished speaking she crashed her lips on his. Manik did'nt wanted this to happen that too when Nandini was drunk he tried to stop but Nandini being Nandini a stubborn girl just did'nt give up she bit his lips n any way got in his mouth. she left scratches on his shoulder and just did'nt stop!

To Manik's surprise he found her hands making way into his shirt but he just broke the kiss and hugged her so that she stays still.

Manik : Nandini.

Nandini did'nt reply.

Manik broke the hug and found that she passed out. He took her in his arms and laid her on the couch. he dried her hairs and changed her in his tshirt.

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Mukti and Abhi were in the room.

Abhi : Mukti i don't think ki me is couch me bhi fit hone wal hoon!

Mukti : ya dude even i think so! so humare pass ek hi option hai.

she took a pillow and kept in middle of her bed.

Mukti : i'll sleep at the right side tum left pe so jao.

Abhi : are u sure. if not i'll manage on this couch.

Mukti : relax i can trust u Nandini k bachpan k frnd ho so chill.

Abhi : oh i see.

Mukti : night!

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CaVya is busy lets not disturb them! 😕

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Alya and Dhruv were on bed cuddling each other.

Alya : Dhruv tum kabse muje pasand kerte ho?

Dhruv : jabse i met u!

Alya : tumne muje bola kyu nhi?

Dhruv : i thought k m not ur type!

Alya : kuch bhi tum mere dost pehle ho!

Dhruv : okay lets make a deal! waise toh i won't let this happen but if any chance humare beech differences ho toh we still remain friends like before. okay?

Alya : okay deal!

And the shook hands!

i'm so sorry guys i was'nt able to post but here it is and will post some more soon!

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: fireroad99
plzzz update soon

next part will be out soon😉

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Chapter 33

It was a breezy morning in Shimla cold to cuddle and natural romantic set.

Everyone still a sleep. Manik was the first to get up. He saw his life sleeping beside him like a part of him. He wanted his first morning with him to beautiful. He saw the beautiful weather outside and wrapped Nandini in the blanket. He took her out in the open barn of the garden. As soon as Nandini felt cold she opened her eyes and looked at the most important person in her life or I must say her life.

Nandini : good morning.

Manik : good morning Nandu. and we r here.

He made her stand and when she saw the beauty around her there was a big beautiful smile on her face. That smile was just the biggest achievement in Manik's life he always wanted to see that smile on her face. He wanted his every morning to start with that beautiful smile.

Manik just could'nt resist and gave a peck on her lips. It was the best start of a day for Nandini.

Nandini : Manik, I love you!

Manik : I love you too Nandu.

And thw hugged each other.

Nandini : And i'm sorry!

Manik : why?

Nandini : yesterday i again got drunk na!

Manik teasingly : toh tum sorry kyu bol rahi ho. tum drunk thi isiliye toh hum dono k beech... you know na!

Nandini's eyes opened up wide : hum dono k beech kya...? what do you mean?

Manik nautanki : Nandini tum bhi na aisa kyu pooch rahi ho tumne hi toh start kiya tha dekho!

He made her see the scratches she left on his body.

Nandini did'nt wanted her first night with Manik to be like this!

Nandini : Manik hum dono k beech aisa kuch nhi hua hoga! Cause i trust u tumne aisa nhi hone diya hoga!

The words i trust you were still heard by Manik!

Manik : thank you Nandu n don't worry kuch nhi hua. I want our first night to be special.

Nandini blushed hearing Manik!

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Cabir screaming and knocking on doors : guys open up! open up! open up!

Dhruv : ye tum logo ko ho kya gaya hai? kal voh bevdi(nandini) kam thi jo aaj tu?

Mukti : shut up yaar Dhruv! Aur Cabir tere pass better koi achha reason ho uthane ka verna tera murder ker dogi!

Cabir : Shaant Manik aur Nandini kaha hai?

Manik : present bol.

Cabir : guys kal i uploaded our song on youtube and some sights.

Everyone got exited.

Cabir : aur har jagah se positive replies hai people are loving it!

Alya : that's great news!

Nandini : now this calls for celebration!

Alya : girls let's cook n enjoy our own food! kal pura din bahar ka khaya tha i'm gonna get sick!

Navya : ya she is right meko bhi ghar ka ban khana hai!

Mukti : okay then let's get started!

here it is guys enjoy next part comming soon and plz do let me know ur views through comments!

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

You guys are not posting replies here and that is why i'm not feeling excited to post!!!! 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago

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badgarlriri

@badgarlriri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: macy99
You guys are not posting replies here and that is why i'm not feeling excited to post!!!! 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

hi soo sorry😭😭

u know I was reading ur story from start only

but😕 some were I missed it😒

just finished reading 😊

last 4parts 😛

Really they r awesome👍🏼

I like druv here like u have made Jim some what like manik

like spending money on it friends and girlfriend 😳😳

Really looking forward to next chapter

loved it all update🥳

And yaa I really like love shimla it is a nice place I have lived there a couple of years back for some time really come and green green place 😃

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Poonam

@Cutiepari97

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

-Nice update🥳 just send next update quick

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: ritikasingh_85

hi soo sorry😭😭
u know I was reading ur story from start only
but😕 some were I missed it😒
just finished reading😊
last 4parts😛
Really they r awesome👍🏼
I like druv here like u have made Jim some what like manik
like spending money on it friends and girlfriend😳😳
Really looking forward to next chapter
loved it all update🥳
And yaa I really like love shimla it is a nice place I have lived there a couple of years back for some time really come and green green place😃

ohh that's okay dear n m so so glad that u liked my ff
Thanks n will try to keep it fun like this 😊

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Chapter 34

They were still deciding what to cook.

Nandini : guys what u all wanna eat?

Cabir : Nandu kuch bhi bana abhi k liye.

Nandini : i know how to make pan cakes for now do u wanna eat?

Cabir : okay n i need hot chocolate.

Alya : i'll make hot chococlate.

Mukti : i'll make coffee.

Abhi : black coffee for me.

Navya : tum log sab banao i'll serve.

The ladies moved into the kitchen when boys started to make fun n started pulling legs of each other.

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kitchen

Nandini : guys lets start. Navya can u get me a glass bowl.

Navya : sure.

Nandini, Alya, Mukti started to do their jobs when Manik came in.

Mukti to Nandini : ye le aa gaya tera romeo.

Manik : guys u have got to see the living room's condition.

Nandini turned the stove off and everyone went to see what have they done.

Girls eyes popped open when they saw the living area. They room which was looking like a hotel lounge was now looking like garbage.The cotton of the pillows was all on the floor and Abhi was literally hanging on the curtain pole whereas Cabir and Dhruv were on standing on the couch.

Nandini laughing : Abhi what are u doing there like that.

Manik laughing : wait i'll tell u.

He took out his phone and told the girls to look at the video.

As soon as they saw the video they started laughing like hell.

The video actually showed that how the guys feaked out when they saw a rat under the couch.

Manik : i was actually taking this video to remember our trip but this happened.

Alya : i'm glad this happened.

She took the video and just uploaded it to youtube.

Nandini : this will get more like than our song.

Everyone one Laughed while Abhi came down and Cabir and Dhruv were looking down in embarrassment .

Mukti : guys u all settle down on the dinning table we will be there in a minute.

Everyone settled in the dinning area when Navya n Nandini brought Pancakes and looked at the boys they were almost sleeping keeping there heads on the table.

Nandini : Navya don't wake them up.

Nandini went in and brought Mukti and Alya.

they held steel plates in their hands and started banging them with spoons.Guys woke up with a jerk almost shouting.

Girls were laughing their hearts out and boys got annoyed but concentrated on the food. They finished there break fast and went to the garden are to take some pictures.

i'm stopping here.

And guys important announcement don't forget to checkout this new MaNan ff written by me and my friend Dhingli44

MaNan ff : Anything for you <3

comment your views on both the ffs and buddylist my friend Dhingli44. 😛

really exited 😆

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago