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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Thanks for continuing! Loved it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
awww...so cute...loving this manan a lot...pls continue soon...take cr...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
lovely update
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
oh my god..
it was so magical and mesmerizing chapter..
u potraited it very beautifully..
in love with it..
please cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Adorable chachi
Loving your updates.
Thanks for writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
How sweet.


Keep writing



Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
want to kick Nyonika's ass...
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loving this FF very much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik seated in car " it was never so difficult to say bye ever in life, he hit the wheel, " i know you didn't want me to go " he recollected how firmly she clutch his shirt in both hand when he lean forward to kiss her forehead ,as he fried himself he could feel her shiver." fixed his Bluetooth and dialed her number


At Nandini placed " Ayyapapa you know na i didnot wanted him to go , but i can't stop him . he will not sleep on bed and try to adjust himself in that small couch "she weep and cough , her cell started ringing , she wiped her face and picked it "can you come back ?" she without listening him said

He smiled "then why you let me go at first place ?" he teased her

"woh " she held her cell tight "ok talk to me till i am asleep " she very easily give up

"what you want to talk ?" he asked in flirty mood

"mmm" she started thinking


Chachi came upstairs to check her , she heard her talking to Ayyapapa and crying before she could enter room she heard her talking to Manik " how he knew she was crying ?" Chachi asked a silly question to herself and smiled she didnot disturbed her walk back


" i will call you after 10 mins i am putting it on charging " he said as he reached home

" you will call na " she asked her in sleepy voice

" yes i will " he smiled at her innocent question



"hope you are passing your time with her ends soon " Nyonika said as she saw him going upstairs in hurry , he stopped and look back at her , " stop staring at me like this " she took a sip from her glass

He walked back down to the living room

"i am not passing time with her , i " he paused

" you are using her then " she cunning smiled , he moved forward close to her

" i love her " he emphasize on each and every word

" love hmmm for how long this love will last "she asked him,but he didn't replied " let's bet " she said as he turn to walk away

" bet " he look back at her

"yes bet that " she wanted to say he lean forward

" she is love of my life , and dont bet on her " he very loud and clear said it

" what is Love Manik ?" she asked sarcastic asked

"Love is even you give cold shoulder that person tries to be with you , if you are hurt , that pain is visible in her eyes , you smile that person smile " he was lost , she look at him" hold down you are asking from me about Love haaan " he asked her

" Manik i am your mother " Nyonika felt insulted as she saw his eyes has hate for her

" i wish i was born in a middle class family , at least they had time and love for me, they dont feel shy to shower love , or may be they are not scared of sharing their feeling " he sadly said

" what you said come again ?" she asked him

" how many time i hurt myself did you ever bother to ask me did i had medicine ?" he asked her directly

" i have train you like that , you had servant to remind you " she clear her throat and said

" no it is duty of a mother to ask ,and remind , ever as here you never notice " he said sadly few tears which he had hide from her had flow down his eyes

"oh sorry you are not my mother " he corrected ,he recollected how chachi kissed his forehead , he smiled

" now what " Nyonika asked

" i wish i had a mom who had daily kissed my forehead and said good night " he closed his eyes and said
"what is wrong with you " she felt very uneasy

" nothing i can't stay here , this place makes me depress , as if i am alone and no one loves me " he without looking at her ran up , he quickly packed his bag and walk down

"Where are you going ?" she asked him

"at Cabir place " he without looking back walked out , he drives straight to Cabir place as he parked his car " oh shit , i can't stay her Navya too stay here " he bang his head with the wheel " i can't go to her home either " he grin his teeth " i can sleep in car out side her home " he made up his mind and drives straight to her home , like always he parked the car at front . he was dead tired . he look at his cell "no charging oh God " he look at the window ,there was no light " she must be asleep " he push the seat and rested his head , he was dead tired , he with in few mins drowse off



Nandini was continuously coughing in her sleep Chachi heard her , she came to check her, as she passed the window she saw Manik car " Manik " she hurriedly walked down to check as she could not see him , as she peep in she saw him sleeping on the seat

"why he is here ?and why he didn't came in ?" she became worried , she knocked at the window , he was fast a sleep " Manik "she knocked louder and this time he got up

"what are you doing here ?" she asked ,he roll down the window and said

" Chachi i didn't came in " he embarrassingly said

" why you are sleeping in car ?" she asked him, he was not getting what to say

"get out " she opened the door and pull him out

" Chachi i will not come in before dawn i promised you " he innocently said

" are you coming with me or i " she raised her hand to slap him . he obediently walked with her " why you are sleeping in car ?" she asked , he look here and there "Manik if you will not tell me i will not let you see Nandini in morning " as she completed her sentence he held her both hands

" please no " he made face

" then like a good boy tell me " she cupped his face and asked

"i like your home , my home haunt , i was feeling sick there that is why i came here " he said in a very low voice , she tried to read his face and eyes , he had pain and loneliness in it

"Rishab or Nandini " she without asking him further asked him , he didnot answer

" ok come with me " she pull him with her , she gave him a mattress and a pillow and ask him to follow her ,he stand like a statue as Chachi fixed his mattress in Nandini room next to her bed" you go to sleep i will talk to you in morning" she asked him to lay down

"Chachi " as he lie down

" you go to sleep ,i will talk to you in morning " she run her hand in his hair , he closed his eyes "this not just Nandini home , it is your's too " she said in low voice , he opened his eyes and look at her " you know why God didn't gave me kids " she asked him ,he gave a blank look " because He wanted me to take care of you 3 " she pointed at Nandini " you need a good sleep " she lend down and kissed his forehead , his eyes became moist ,to hide his tears he closed his eyes ,she pat his cheek , he acted like he was asleep , she carefully got up and walked out as she left he opened his eyes " i wish she was my mom " he said bit loud , Chachi who was out said over heard him , she felt like running in hugging him , want to ask him to call her mom but she step back and with heavy heart walk to her bedroom


Manik wanted to put his cell on charging he tried to find her charger in bed , he saw her holding her cell tight in her fist ,he smiled , he was dead tired , he didn't disturbed her and went to sleep



Next morning at 9

Nandini woke up ,she look at her cell " i am sure i missed Manik 'scall " she checked but was surprised not to receive any call from his side " he didnot call me once " she worriedly dialed his number but it was switched off " i hope he is fine " she jump out of bed , she step on him lost her balance and directly fall on him

"Aah " he cried in sleep , his face was covered with comforter

"Manik " Nandini pull the comforter away from his face "when he came here ?" she tried to recollect he moved his head in sleep his lips brush with her's ,she moved away "he came back that is why he didn't called me " she tried to figure out ,he was fast a sleep ,sun rays was bothering him he was moving his head here and there , she closed the curtain properly " i will not wake him " she lie flat on bed to wait, she started starring at him a naughty smile appear on her lips



,,,,,,,,, to be cont

Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
incredible emotional update
love it
So manik left his house
Awww chachi found out and brought him inside house
How lovingly she caresses his hair and asks him to sleep
So will manik live at Nandu house??
Chachi kisses his forhead and mani wishing her to be his mom
Even chachi feels connected with him
ahhh so Nandu falls on mani next morning
Let's see what naughty thing she does
Awww I am going all Awww and drooling
manik is craving for his mom attention and love but that selfish lady grrr
Hope she doesn't harm Nandu or family
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Aawww! That is such an adorable part!!
Please keep writing! Makes me feel so happy when I read this :))

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