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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
dude trust me this is the sweets story i have ever read just loving it i just wish could see it in the show just loving this caring manik ... ur writing is amazing i can imagine each n every scene in front of eyes while reading just loved it ...
plzzz ad me to ur buddy list and pm me next part plzzz
Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
this is so so amazing!!!!
loving it so so much!!!

please add me to your pm list :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
great one loved this part
hopefully fab 5 will accept manik and nandini relation very soon
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

writer note


i was thinking to end it here and start with a new one , but you all request and asked me to continue so i am continuing ,

and my apologies for my mistakes which i make while typing , few of the reads pointed it . i admit it is my weak point i do silly mistakes , sorry


i am so much fond of Manan that daily till 3am i type a part . they have really made me crazy


in advance sorry for mistakes



Music room

They all were chitchatting and pulling each other leg , they waited for Pandit in the Music room but he didn't appear ,


Navya " when your Pandit jiwill come ?" she poke Nandini who was resting her head on Manik shoulder


Aliya and Cabir was trying to play Veena "stop it ! you guys will break its string "Mukti shouted who was lying in Navya lap



"5 pm. it is height of irresponsibility "Manik check the time

" let me return this Veena you guys take Nandini to my car " he said and made her sit as she was falling down

" your Pandit ji is so stupid , he knew you were not feeling well , he should have inform anyone of you " Navya was pissed off ,he and Manik helped Nandini to get up


Each and everyone was pissed off ,Manik went to return the Veena ,they all were waiting for him in car park

" i will go home " Nandini said

" you want him to kill us "Mukti murmur

"he asked ten times to be with you " Cabir rub his chin and said

" stop teasing her "Navya scold him

"see there Pandit " Nandini asked them to see in the direction

"when he was in college why he didnot came in class ?" Dhruv murmur

" he is scared of Manik " Nandini smiled as she saw him coming out towards them

"why you all are smiling ?" Manik said as he walked closed to them


" Pandit ji was in college , as we all were there he didnot came in class " Navya said


Manik phone started ringing " ha Chachi i am coming with Nandini " he said without listening from other end

" i can go myself " Nandini was feeling shy as everyone whistle


"Chachi my friends are with me " he said as she asked him who whistle " Chachi " he look at all of them and made face

"kya " Nandini asked him

"Chachi is saying ask all of them to come home and have dinner there " he said sadly

"home made dinner " Cabir excitedly asked

Manik run his hand in his hairs "Nandini do you have any problem ?" Navya asked and winked at other

"No "she shakes her head in a big no , Manik stared at her in anger

"ok then we all are going to have dinner at your place " Cabir said excitedly


"you guys go and help chachi , i am taking her to hospital ,caught you in hour" Manik without give her time pull her with him


They all had a laughter , he didnot bother he drove away



"Manik it is just a flu " she said angrily

" remember my hand was cut . and i didnot pay any attention and I" he tired to made her realized .he look at her , her face changed the color ,that day was toughest day of her life , it still make her shiver in her spin

"do as you feel like ?" she whisper and rested her head with the back of the seat

Manik had already taken appointment with his Dr , he made sure she has full check up

" who is she to you ?" Dr asked with a smile as he checked her

" friend " Manik said without looking at the dr

"just a friend " Dr tried to read his face as he taken out thermometer from her mouth

"she is having temperature right " Manik asked Dr nod and seated on his chair ,

"anything serious ?" Manik asked

"yes very serious " Dr look at him from his glasses and said , he read his face ,it turn all pale ."it is sign of loveira " he could not hold his laughter

"what " Manik at first didnot get Nandini press his hand

" since last night you have text me over 50 time , you haven't slept your self or let her sleep " he smiled

"she was asleep " Manik at once said , he bites his lips

" in precaution i should write stay away from each other and sleep tight " he pull his leg

"Dr please " Manik who never give up had to give up


Dr became serious he gave Nandini medicine and asked Manik to make sure she have it properly as she was still having temperature , They thank Dr and walked out


Nyonika saw them going out of hospital , Manik was holding Nandini ,she was putting all her weight on him "he is again with this downtown girl " she became angry and walked in


"congrats Mrs Malhorta your son is finally in love "Dr said as he saw her

"what ?" Nyonika asked him in surprise

" Manik is in love " he smiled " she is sick and Manik acted like a responsible guy " he said

Nyonika grind her teeth , she without talking to Dr walk out of hospital




"i like you concern but don't over think please " she lean forward and placed her head on his shoulder "why you are so serious ?" she look at his straight face and asked

" can i again stay night at your place ?" he didnot look at her and asked her

"chachi will not like it ?" Nandini said

"you forget about chachi i will convince her , you tell me about yourself , do you want ?" he asked at the same time his cell rang , Nandini check

"Nyonika " she said

"cancel" Manik asked her ,Nandini helplessly look at him she silent it


"Manik you have cancel my call , i will make sure i kick out this girl from your life for ever " Nyonika throw her cell on the back of the seat



At Nandini place

Cabir was exaggerating and telling Chachi about Manik and Nandini , Chachi was drooling over his stories

Aliay Mukti and Navya find hard to hold their laughter ,Dhurv quickly finish the dinner and left the place , they didnot stop him as they all were happy he came at Nandini place with them .

"shhh they are here " Mukti asked them to be quiet

" what dr said ?" Chachi asked as she saw their long face ,he placed medicines on the table
"Dr said rest and take her to a peaceful place so she relax " he sank in chair

Nandini look at him in surprise

"why peaceful place ?" Chachi caress Nandini face and asked

" here there is so much pollution " he said sadly

"where i take her ?" Chachi sank in chair in front of him

"it is weekend if you allow we can take her to a peaceful place " he made baby face and said

"but " chachi started thinking

"Chachi " Nandini tried to speak

"Chachi its about your Nandu health " he said seriously

"stop doing drama Manik " Nandini step ahead and scold him

"Chachi dr had asked me to rest , and Manik know you will kick him out of your home tonight that is why he is doing all this drama " Nandini without full stop said

"Manik" chachi hold his ear

"Aah " he shouted

"Chachi arama se " Nandini came to rescue him

everyone had a laughter including Manik as he was acting and Chachi had not hurt him at all

Nandini blushed ,she ran upstairs without looking back

"go and say her good night " Chachi asked Manik

Cabir and girls hide their smile


"Chachi i should stay here if you need car " he made an excuse

"you came faster than ambulance ,so dont worry " she pat his cheek ,Manik made face

"you have 10 mins , dont waste it " Chachi said and walked to kitchen


Manik look at his friends and ran upstairs Nandini was looking out of the window , he walk to her before he made her realized his presence she turn back and hug him

"What " he in surprise hug her back and asked

"i dont want you to go , but you should go and rest " she placed her head on his heart

"then why you speak in middle ?" he kissed her head ,she didnot said a word and hold him more tight

"what " he tried to see her face

"will you call me ?" she asked in low voice

"yes " he said at once ,she sneezed next to his chest

"ok go and change i will bring you medicine and milk have it in front of me and sleep " he without looking at her push her away and walked out of room , why this good bye has become so hard for them , he ran down

"you still have 8 mins " chachi said

" milk and medicine " he taken out medicine from bag

Navya gave him glass of milk he went back

"kya yeh hamasha se aise tha " chachi asked his friends , they all shakes their heads

Cabir and girls look at each other ,they all thank Chachi and left the place




Nandini was sitting in her bed waiting for him , she look at him as he passed her milk and medicine ,she without argument had half and passed him ,he finished the remaining

" now you sleep " he fix her pillow and made her rest ,he sat next to her

"Oh " she jump out of bed and stand in front of her Ayyappan ,she pray ,he look at her and mesmerize her innocent face ,he tried to read her lips , he notice she took his name couple of time ,he smiled as she walk to bed

" you daily pray for me " he asked and again fixed her blanket

"yes i pray for all those who are close to my heart " she lay down , he lean forward and kissed her forehead ,he was about to get up she held his hand , he look at her , he was trying avoiding eye contact with her "only 6 hours " she tried to smile,he nod,she free his hand he without looking at her walked out


"Good " Chachi said as she saw him coming down

" i will come after 6 hours " he quickly hug and said good bye

"you will come back here before that " she smiled and saw him going away , he was in hurry to go as he has to come back .

Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
beautiful update once again
Manik has changed so much
Very concerned about Nandu
Poor dr. Haha he didn't leave even dr..
And dr...joking around and understood manik baba is in love
Grrr one more villan Nyonika she won't let ManNan peaceful
Let's what happens about it
Awww chachi doesn't let Manik stay there over night
poor souls both want to stay with each other but agree Manik needs rest
Hope he also takes rest and come next day all freshen
chachi so knows manik that he would be back before 6 hours haha
thanks for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Nice story i love manan romance
Plz next part post...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Super cute as always really worried what this neyonika Gona do now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Aww.. Super cute...awesome cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
too cute yaar..
wish to see this happnin in show
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Nice update..
Manik has changed so much for Nandu..
Even Dr. got to know that Manik is crazily in love with Nandu..
I hope Nyonika don't do anything stupid..
I don't know why i felt Nandu was sad before Manik came to say bye.
Is something bothering her?
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