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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay peoples you changed my mind I will continue this soon as fan fic.
please suggest titles.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Course man.. Cont this n tht too soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rab18

Okay peoples you changed my mind I will continue this soon as fan fic.

please suggest titles.

glad to know u ll continue ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
SO sorry for late update and it's short , Routinue is very tough these days.
you can think manyia as her.


part 3
He picked her up.
"Daddy when is mukti aunty coming"
"You want to meet mukti"
Surprisingly maniya was very close to mukti.
"So I will call her and ask her to take you out."
Nandani was collecting manyia's toys she got confused manik never ask mukti to take care of her other than the time they want to spend alone.
She turned back to see him who was now calling mukti .
"Hi "
"Yep"
"Can you look after manyia "
"Sure I am waiting"
Than he hanged up.
"Manik do we have some plan today"
"Yes we do!!!"
She can bet he was angry right now but he didn't to show his anger in front of his daughter.Because last time he screamed in front of nyeonika manyia copied his words for servant .
Manyia have dark brown eyes just like her dad but physically she was small little baby girl and her height was just like her mom.Her nature was just like her dad . She love putting condition After all she was daughter of manik malhotra.
...
Nandani dressed manyia into pink frock with matching sandals . She was brushing her hairs just than she heard mukti .
"Manyia! Manyia"
Mukti come in calling her.
"Manyia !!"
Nandani said turning her face towards her.
"Act like a good girl"
"Okay"
She said nodding her face and squeezing her nose inside.
Nandani placed her finger on her nose and smiled .
"Time to go"
She ran into mukti.
"I will take care of her"
"Thanks mukti"
Nandani said smiling.
"No more thanks nandani , after all you are my sister in law and I enjoy being out with manyia."
"Just call us when ever you get tired ."
"Sure I will "
"See you later"
"Bye"
Just than she called servant to clean mess and ran into her own room.
She found frustrating manik strolling impatiently and changing tv channels.
"Can't they play something else"
He said annoyingly.
She snatched remote from his hand and push the red button on remote.
With flicker light disappear on LCD.
She turned to see him still in same position.
"Do you wanna talk?"
"NO... maybe yes"
God he is still same. Always torturing himself .
"Manik"
She said taking his hand.
"If you will keep it to yourself it would burn"
He raised his heads towards her . She was very concerned .
"I know"
"So speak up"
"19 years of my life I tried to search someone for me until I found you , but my mom no she is not my mom she is a cruel lady name nyeonika malhotra. WHY??? She is so ..."
Than he stopped and walked out .
She knew he need some space right now so she went to check on him .
He had occupied himself in office files for distraction.
She made tea for him and placed a not beside.
Talk to me whenever you feel like talking.
I will always be there for you.
Than she asked servant to give it to him.
...
After an hour he realized he can't keep this any more . So he walked towards their room.
She was standing in front of mirror brushing her wet hairs and water droplets fall from it absorbing in to carpet.
She turned back and saw him standing in front of door.
She smiled broadly. He gave her questioning look.
"Feel like talking "
"Yep"
She can see dreamy look on his face.
"Manik"
"Hmmm..."
He shoved his hands in pocket and move towards her.
"You look beautiful with wet hairs"
She smiled and her cheeks flushed red with his fingers on it.
"Not in mood of romance"
She said crossing her eyes.
"When will you stop spoiling"
"Manik you are tensed right now we need to talk "
"yes we do" He said reluctantly trying to speak out.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update...am so enjoying reading this ff!
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
lovely story

update soon
pm me plzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Guys I am sorry I don't reply thanks to everyone of you , but thanks for liking it and your comments value alot to me.
thanks everyone.
Please suggest tittle for this fan fic
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Sum thng relate to Maniya.. Our love our lifeline
Our love Maniya.. Something of tht sorts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Part 4
"Okay"
They both settled on to couch . Manik was holding his head with both hands. Nandani take both of them and said
"Manik"
He frowned.
"I think so we should get new house"
"New house??"
She gave him curios look.
"Manik I think so we are perfectly fine here ..."
"No we are not"
"Manik I know it's all about nyeonika"
"Yes it is nandani"
He said with rough and angry tone.
"Manik she is your mother..."
"No she is not she might have given birth to me but she don't care about me she don't love me . I was brought in to world not for happiness but for inheritance transfer . They needed heirs for their properties and nothing else. I was brought up by care takers , baby sitters . My mom just made sure I was under international highly paid maids . Nandani I am nothing to her just a source of money and fame. I had always seen her like this when I was 2 till today when I am 25 !!!!
His anger was boiling up and she thanked he spoke up .
"Nandani you know what it feels like when there is no one for you and when you get them someone try to snatch from you"
She did not interrupted him .
"You and manyia are very important me . You know what I don't want manyia to suffer like me without parents , I had parents but still I was alone I want manyia to have everything not just expensive toys and money but love of her parents as well"
Now he was looking at her trying to speak out his feelings his love and care for both of them.
"Nandani it feels like she is snatching both of you from me"
She know his fear is never going to end.
"Manik "
She hugged him.
"I promise we all will be together forever just like happy family nothing can break us, I love you , manyia is our daughter yours mine someone we share some one only ours so why you are so worried"
She was now looking at him with her one finger below his chin.
"Yeah but I am afraid"
"Manik we are together this is what matters , Manyia have really great dad who cares about her , and yeah if you are not comfortable here we can shift"
"Hmm.."
He was relaxed now and rested his head on the back of couch.
"Well at last Mr manik malhotra is afraid of something"
She said playfully.
"Nandani..."
"Hmm..."
She said with adorable face.
"Well at last Mrs Manik malhotra confessed"
"Manik"
"Now what ...
You started it right "
She grab the cushion and threw on his face .
"Nice..."
He said taking the cushion.
"Manik you have to take me for grocery shopping"
"Not again"
"Manik please..."
"Is this some kinda punishment for me "
"I can't send driver you know what happened last time"
"Yeah that last time is three and half years back , when you first time stepped into kitchen after our wedding and find out everything out of order"
"Yep and I send driver to bring the things which I have listed instead he brought of his own choice"
"And I had to spend entire afternoon in that boring super market"
" If You don't want to send entire evening today in super market ...so get up right now"
"Yeah sweaty"
"Mani!!!!"
"Okay fine "
...
It was 6 pm when manik got message from fab 5 to join them at Dhryla's house.
"Hi guys"
"Hi "
They all said in union.
"Where is manyia???"
"Dhruv she is with mukti"
Cabir:" Where is mukti???"
"I am here guys"
They all turned back .
"Daddy!!!!"
She first come and hugged manik.
"They all take over their seats"
"By the way what's the occasion to get us here"
Alya"manik It has been long time we spend some time toghter "
Dhruv:"So we decided dinner"
Cabir:"Well dhruv I know you are very sweet but for god sake stop being girly sweet like alya"
They all smiled
Dhruv:"Cabir I think so you should get married to know the reason"
Alya:"Dhruv!!!"
"Sorry babe"
Mukti:"Alya I am hungry food"
"Yeah sure"
With that alya got up and nadani went to help her.
While putting bottles on dining table she looked at manyia who was playing on carpet when she suddenly started closing her eyes.
Nandani got curious and looked at her and then manik.
"What??"
Manik give nandani confusing look.
Manyia suddenly felt down.
She ran towards her .
"Manyia!!!"
"Manyia"
Every one was around her.
"Daddy "
She said with half open eyes.
"Manyia open your eyes!!!"
He screamed with tensed tone.
Manyia started breathing heavily
"We need to take her to hospital"
Cabir ran to get car out of parking .
They both ran outside manyia was now fainted in maniks lap.
...
Manik was strolling tensed and worried .
Nandani was crying.
Cabir was standing there taking prescription from nurse to get medicine.
"Manyia malhotra"
Doctor came out manik ran towards him.
"Is my princess okay??"
"Yeah she is fine"
He took deep breathes .
"You are his father , Manik malhotra'
"Yeah"
"Your daughter is fine right now but I can't say any thing you have to get her checked up by senior doctor"
"What is it??"
Nandani asked
"As I told Mrs malhotra I can't say any thing it was sudden minor stroke"
"What stroke??"
"Yeah !!! That's what I can conclude"
"Okay "
Manik said frustratingly as he can't bear any more .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Aww.. So sweet.. Wht happened to Maniya..
Oh pls dnt do anything to tht lil grl
Continue soon
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