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Posted: 10 years ago
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oho...wht hapnd to maniya?????😲
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Wooo that's shocking cont... Soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nothing should happen to her, i love her

The picture is adorable
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
plz cont soon.. it was lovely and a lil scary..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome one,...
Waiting to see what happens to maniya...
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Part 5 Doctor left both of them worried. Tears rolled down her cheeks.
"Manik , our daughter"
He was under the same situations.
Cabir was standing behind both of them trying to absorb what happened.
"She will be fine"
He wiped her tears.
"Yeah she will be fine"
She said trying to convince her self .
"Nandani"
They turned back to see mukti , Alya and dhruv.
"Is she okay??"
"Yeah"
Just then they heard nurse.
"Manyia Malhotra"
"You are allowed to visit"
"Only parents"
She informed seeing all of them proceeding in.
"It's okay you guys go see her we are waiting"
Cabir told them .
They both rushed in and saw most important person of their lives under oxygen mask and syringes .
Nandani was numb to see angel of her life like this .
He ran and kissed manyia's forehead.
"Daddy's princess please get well soon , I can't see you like this."
He turned back on hearing sobbing voice.
He moved towards nandani .
She buried her face in his chest.
"If you will get weak who will give me hope??"
"Manik I can't see her like this it hurts"
Her face was now in his hands
"I know it does but as you said in morning we will stay together, Nothing can happen to her "
She nodded .
They both turned to see her.
"Be with her , I will ask rest of them to leave they can't stay entire night here"
"Yeah"
...
As manik left she sat down beside manyia and stroke her hairs.
She was symbol of their love nothing should happen to her.
Just than manyia opened her eyes.
"Mama"
"Manyia"
Smile spread over her face.
Manyia was trying to remove mask.
"No "
She placed it back.
Manyia didn't resist she felt like she is weak to talk .
"Try to sleep back"
Manyia remained in same position .
"Want to hear story?"
She could see her eyes lighten up.
"Okay than bunny bear one"
Manyia opened her eyes .
"Once up a time there was a little bunny bear , who was youngest and naughtiest among his siblings ----------------------------------------"
...
When he pushed open the door he saw most beautiful relation .
Nandani was stroking manyia 's hairs and narrating her a story and manyia was trying to concentrate with her sleepy eyes.
He closed the door and walked towards them and take place in front of nandani , who so on her story.
Manyia smiled at him and then her eyes closed and she slept.
Nandani adjusted her blanket and looked at manik.
"They will shift her to the private room in morning and I have taken appointment of Dr Waleed, child cardiologist."
"Okay and have every body left???"
"Except for cabir"
They both looked at manyia laying beside them.
"She will be fine".
He said taking her hand .
"Yeah "
She have to we can't live without her.
...
Morning light fell on the loving family.
Nandani opened her eyes she found her self sleeping on the hospital couch.
Manyia was still sleeping she look around for manik.
Just then door opened .
His eyes were red from lack of sleeping , messy hairs and creased shirt . Last time she saw him like this when she was in hospital when manyia was born.
She looked at him.
"Awake"
"Yeah , you were awake whole night???"
"It doesn't matter"
" Manik you could have awake me"
"No way"
"Manik"
Just then they heard knock.
"Come in"
Nurse entered in
"Good morning sir"
Passed some files in his hand.
He ignored greetings and look over files .
"They are shifting to private ward "
"Right now"
"Yeah"
He signed papers and pass them to nurse who was now taking of mask and needles from manyia.
...
Just then manyia was shifted.
"I will get you coffee."
He turned to move she pulled his hands.
"Manik it's okay , just try to rest for a while I will be here."
"I can't nadani just look at manyia "
"You told me last night not to loose hope then why are you "
They heard cracking sound of door and saw Cabir, alya, dhruv and mukti entered with loads of gift in their hands.
"How is manyia???"
"Okay"
Cabir:"When doctor is going to visit ??"
Manik:"2 pm"
Cabir:"Till then you guys should go home we will be here"
Manik:"No I am not leaving"
Dhruv:"Manik you were here whole night "
Nandani:"No it's okay we can't leave her:
Mukti:"Nandani and manik I know you two are very worried but please for manyia's sake get rest for while than you can spend whole day with her"
Alya:"Yeah she will be fine"
Nandani:"Manik you have n't slept whole night lets go"
Manik:"No "
"Yes"
All of them said in unison.
Manik:"okay"
He was convinced .
He picked car keys and both of them left.
"Manik I will drive"
"Okay"
He was so tired that he willingly pass car keys to her.
...
Manik was sleeping on his head rested on nadani.
Rrr
Manik cell phone ring .
She hurriedly picked up before manik can get disturb.
"Manik"
"It's nandani cabir"
"Glad you picked "
"Is everything okay"
"Yeah just manyia is awake asking for both of you"
"I will come "
"No It's okay mukti is now playing with her so she is fine"
"Can I talk to her??"
"Yeah sure"
After a while she heard voice.
"Mama"
"How is my child??"
"Good , I want daddy"
"Daddy is coming in while Do you want something??"
"Mama I don't like this place please take me from here"
"Yeah we will you are here just for few days"
"No I don't like this place"
"I know manyia act like a good girl okay"
"Can you bring my bear white and pink one...and doll "
"Okay I will"
"And my i pad as well"
"Okay any thing else"
"Nooo"
"Good now be good girl"
After a second she heard cabir.
"Nandani I heard doctor last night"
"I know for manik it's getting very hard "
"Yeah "
"Manyia , Manyia !!!"
She heard him screaming in sleep.
"Cabir I have to go , bye"
She ran in .
"Where is manyia??"
"Hospital"
"Is she okay???'
"Yes"
He was so frightened she took a glass of water and pressed it against his lips.
After a while he was bit relaxed.
"I am afraid nandani it was worst nightmare I have seen she was in pain screaming and I can't save her"
"Manik she is fine"
"Nandani lets go "
"Where??"
"Hospital"
She know stopping him right now is no use.
"Manik okay but just get relax than we will go"
"No come on"
"Manik I talked to manyia she want her toys I will pack them till you can get fresh okay"
"Okay "
...
Edited by rab18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
SUPERB...
ITS THAT KIND OF STORY WHICH I WISH WOULD NEVER END...
TRUST ME I TOTALLY FEEL THIS SS.
. I FEEL MANIK THE FATHER OF A PRINIESS NAMED MANIYA..
PLS DNT DO ANYTHING WRONG WITH HER,, THAT ANGEL. ITS A REQUEST
PLZ DO UPDATE PARTS ASAP.. I AM WAITING

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: musicialtie

SUPERB...

ITS THAT KIND OF STORY WHICH I WISH WOULD NEVER END...
TRUST ME I TOTALLY FEEL THIS SS.
. I FEEL MANIK THE FATHER OF A PRINIESS NAMED MANIYA..
PLS DNT DO ANYTHING WRONG WITH HER,, THAT ANGEL. ITS A REQUEST
PLZ DO UPDATE PARTS ASAP.. I AM WAITING

Hi I can understand your feeling I want to keep suspense but as I can see emotions so I would declaresome the part something might happen to manyia but I promise no one will DIE !
ending would surely be happily ever after.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Dude super nice but at the same time hard to read at in this situation... Hope she get well soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
awesome yaar..
nvr imagind our monster manik can be such a loving father so thnx for giving this story...

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