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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
this is one if the best story I have read
its a request don't do anything to manyia
plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Dnt do anything to Maniya
Awesome ff..
Cot. Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Awesome...loved manik's care and love for his child...
plzz don let anything happen to maniya...
update soon and PM me plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
What a lovely update... Loving the family relationship... so sweet. Looking forward to the next update.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
amazing story...loving this a lot...u penned the emotions of manan so beautifully...pls continue soon dear...eagerly waiting to read more...thanks a lot for the pm...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
wow awsm update
lovd it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
sorry I am super late
wow just wow plz don't end this ff
U penned the emotions so well I can fell the pain of manan while reading it I loved it and plz nothing should happen to manyia plz
And plz pm me when U update the next part
Cont soon
Waiting waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
PART 6
After half an hour they were at hospital.
"Dadddy"
Manyia's voice filled with joy , as she saw manik stepping in with loads of bags .
He placed things and move towards manyia
"How is my princess??"
"Okay"
"Feeling better???"
"Yeah"
She nodded .
"Daddy I want to go home."
She demanded again.
"I know but once you will get fine I will take you home"
"No I want to go"
"I have an idea "
"Idea???"
She asked interestingly.
"If you will have your medicine on time and would act like a good girl I will ask doctor to let you go home and will get you new bear and books as well"
"Promise"
Excited smile spread over her.
"Yeah promise"
"Stop acting cute you father and daughter"
Mukti said enjoying their cuteness.
Nandani was talking to Alya and side by side looking at manik and his princess.
"Sorry bro but I have to go now"
"Oh it's okay "
"Thanks cabir"
Nadani said seeing him leaving.
"No problem any ways see you guys later "
With that he left.
Nandani kissed manyia 's forehead.
"My things"
She asked once she realized .
"I remember"
She placed her toys beside her .
"I pad??"
She demand .
"Oh I forget it in car"
"I will get it"
Manik got up to leave.
"No daddy you have to stay with me"
"Princess I will just get it"
"No!!! I want i pad and daddy both"
"She is just like you buddy"
Said dhruv.
"It's okay I will get it"
"Dhruv No it's okay"
"Stop it give me your car keys"
Dhruv left to get manyia's i pad.
Manik's cell phone started ringing.
"Hi"
"Nyeonika hold on"
"Princess I will be back"
He said in low voice and left before she could resist.
Mukti and manyia started playing some puzzle.
...
"Speak up nyeonika"
He said in rough and angry tone.
"You have to attend meetings by your self"
"No I can't manyia is in hospital"
"And I don't care about your god damn deals right now"
He screamed angrily on phone.
Hearing this nadani rushed outside.
"Nyeonika why do you keep forgetting I can throw you out whenever I want so..."
She quietly take his cell phone and swipe red sign and phone line was cut.
"Nadani!!"
"Please not right now "
"Nandani what was about that ??"
"Manik why were you screaming on her??"
"Seriously "
"Mani ..."
"Mr and Mrs manik malhotra"
They both turned to see man in late 40's wearing lap court and stethoscope around his neck.
"I am Dr waleed"
He said moving his hands forward.
"Manik malhotra"
Manik said shaking hands.
"I come to know about your daughter's sudden attack can you give me more detail ?"
"Sure"
"Okay than first check on her than I will talk to you"
They proceeded in. Manyia was playing on her i pad and dhruv was sitting with her .
Mukti and alya were no where to be seen , maybe they left for brunch.
Dhruv got up from seat .
"Manik I will leave know I have some meeting"
"Sure and thanks "
"It's okay and do tell me what doctor says"
"Yeah"
Mean while doctor look over manyia's file and then turned towards manyia.
"So manyia what are you playing?"
"Fruit ninja I score 600 points"
"Oh that's good points I never got that much score"
"Than you should concentrate while playing "
She give advise innocently .
Smile spread over their faces.
"Manyia what game like you to play most??"
"Playing throw ball with daddy"
"Oh so you play throw ball with daddy , While playing do you feel pain"
"No!! But yesterday I felt pain "
"Oh where??"
She placed her hand on left side.
"Okay , did you played throw ball yesterday ??"
"No I went to mall yesterday with mukti aunty "
"Okay "
"I can't play throw ball here"
"No you can't but you can watch cartoons and I can see many toys here you can enjoy with them "
"Okay"
"You are good girl I will ask nurse to play barbie cartoon for you"
"I don't like barbie"
"Oh then which one??"
"Mickey mouse"
"Okay "
He smiled and called manik and nadani in his office.
...
"Can you tell me what happened to manyia last night?"
Nadani repeated whole account.
"It was first time or it had happened before??"
"No it was first time"
Manik said.
"You noticed nothing?"
"Nope"
Manik said.
"But she is use to breath heavily after running up stairs or while playing"
"okay apart from it any pain"
"No "
"Can you guys tell me more detail of her birth ??"
They both looked at each other and confusingly replied.
"It was premature birth"
"I see... Did you had a lot of pains while giving birth?"
"Yeah "
"After that doctors didn't told any thing ??"
"No"
"Can I ask you personal thing?"
"Sure"
Manik replied hesitantly.
"Usually premature babies suffer diseases mothers condition affect unborn baby so... there was any thing tensing you at that time Mrs malhotra???"
Nandani confusingly looked at manik.
"If you don't to share it's okay but answer yes or no ??"
They was silent for a moment than manik replied.
"Yes we were...having a conflict"
"I see ... Now there is some thing I will tell it might be worse but you should be ready for" Nadani got worried , Manik hold his hand tightly and looked at the doctor. "She is suffering from Congenital heart defect"
...
Send me request for pm.
and as I told you guys something might happen to manyia but I promise no one will DIE !
ending would surely be happily ever after.
Don't forget to comment and like .
one more thing pm me fan fics on ky2 if you are writing one or you like some fanfic I would love to read.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Have You considered making an index?
The story is good 👏
PLEASE reveal their "old problems" which YOU mentioned in the last chapter
I am very curious 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: chair1992

Have You considered making an index?

The story is good 👏
PLEASE reveal their "old problems" which YOU mentioned in the last chapter
I am very curious 😃

so sorry for not making index I will make in a while😊

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