Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued**

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#251

wow dude its damn awesome
double dose loved it
but plz update regularly
u knw na how much i love dis story
thnx for the pm honey
update soon

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Oh so Hot was the ending!!
Manik's dual behaviour is nice at times..
But the protective Manik is the best..
We love theur Tom n Jerry vali fights!!
Great work!!
:D
Hope your exams went well :)

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starflee

@starflee

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

It was amazing finally the fire is equal on both sides and their first kiss happened yippe waiting for more

love loads
Amna

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Angel

@asangel

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

Thnks yr... awsm stry.. cnt wait fr nxt post...

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

awesome update... They kissed.. Yehhh

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lissy16

@lissy16

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#256

nice update... finally both realize their feeling...
continue soon...

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#257

wow...double dose...loved both parts a lot
loving this protective manik a lot
manan scenes especially their cute fights was awesome
last part was so passionate...!!!
continue asap
eagerly waiting to read more
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

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aliyaangel

@aliyaangel

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#258

that was two awsme back to back updates..
thanq.. shez so in love with him..she went the tge party for him.. those boys were scary.. but thank god manik came up on time.. i thnk the vl take revenge.. lyked mananz teasing scene n evryone laughin..
mr. malhotra is being misguided by nyonika the evil.. wonder what has she done..
nandini comes to see him n that putting on shirt convo ws funny.. manik is such a tease..
they watchd a movie.. n nanduz 'nangu baby manik' was cute... n the tom n jerry fight leaves them romancing n kissing.. perfect timing nandiniz mom hs ... n she left.. wonder wat would be the after math of this encounter..
jus loving ur way of writing.. pllzz continue soon.. :)