Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
me me me..
the font is too small, sexy chicken..can't read even with my specs on..lol
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Okies..here i am. Starting with this because i figured this was the reply you are awaiting the most.
Ohhh twinkie bear, amazing amazing amazing..seriously A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.👏👏 👏
Beautifully written and high on emotions..absolutely loved it
Damn..such a emotional chapter this one was..this is Manan at their best, where they exist simply for each other. their own pain, it ceases to exist. their better half's pain..that's the one that aches their heart. Lovely job throughout the entire chapter, but especially the part where Nandini wants to be able to move, to able to get to manik so he can't hurt himself..her helplessness, struck a chord and ached my heart 🥺
I sense heavy guilt from Manik's side, wondering if he feels guilty somewhere for being responsible for Nandini's injury..oh the mystery..may it unfold very slowwllyyy...in other words, can you tell me now please ? lol. no, i joke ( well sorta kinda )
You have written this chapter really well..showcasing their relationship and their selflessness when it comes to each other. Manik is in agony of his own, how he wishes he had a magic wand so he could heal his Nandu ( i really hope for a Manik POV chapter..please). Another part of this chapter i loved was the comfort Nandini found in Manik, how his touch seems to heal her in its own..absolutely beautiful it was.You write Manan so well..so true to their character that i feel as thou i am watching an episode..Manik's anger, his tucking her hair behind her ear, his bear hugs. It's was all just utter perfection ( sorry, my vocab is just limited to beautiful and perfection, still waiting on that thesaurus btw..lol)
And we have been left hanging ! and that means more of the mystery shall be unfolded..whys shall be answered.
I hope you come back really soon with new chapter and more of your twinkie awesome-ness.
Loads of love as always,
- Reya aka Your Sunny <3