Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40

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Tanvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

This ws soo gud.. Beautiful

Painful yet beautiful in its own way.. N tht last innocent ques.. Cn u sleep wth me ..

Aww.. Manan too scared to leave each other..

Pls cont soon.. This is amazing work

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moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Awesome update!!!

Babies are just so beautiful!!!

His guilt, his hurt broke my heart. Nandini is truly his star!!! She smiled, teased, pouted just to see that ghost of smile on his face.

Babies playing in rain, Nandini drying Manik's hair!! Can they show a similar scene on the show please...

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BornInFire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Uff!!! This made me cry.

He's in so much pain and she wants to take it all within herself. How can someone be so so beautiful.

I love it.. I want to see them just like before. All happy happy. Babies be in so much pain. 😔

Beautiful update 🤗

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Ur ff is just awesome i m loving it more n more n more i just loved it so perfectly written n the concept is just fabulous update soon dear n if possible plz plz plz plz n plz pm me i m really liking it good going take a bow 👏

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Witcher

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

This is reAllY beautiful
Your Writing is amazing 👏
I hope you will write about the fb soon

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blazingflame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

twinkle u r amazing writer i had tears while reading all the 3 parts update soon

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piyu008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

as always awesome n emotional..

update soon😊

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twinkle10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: manan58
This ws soo gud.. Beautiful
Painful yet beautiful in its own way.. N tht last innocent ques.. Cn u sleep wth me ..
Aww.. Manan too scared to leave each other..
Pls cont soon.. This is amazing work

Thankyou so much for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the read! <3