Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
i just lvoe it
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
what i m feeling right now after reading this one is impossible for me to explain.

the emotions of them that u show to us by ur writing reaches my heart everytime

its very hard for me to read all that insult of nandini but still I read that bcoz i know that manik will come at any moment to ease her pain

I cried bcoz of u twinkle.


but ur last part make me happy again


ur story is genuinely beautiful
I really don't have any issue with this emotional storyline

one thing m again saying that u can publish ur own novel
n u know what it will be one of biggest hits or bestseller


luv u❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
I didnt expected this i was expecting a cute romantic proposal but this was need and that girl(i jont remember the name) oh god how can she compare her with Our Nandu like seriously ...Oh god some people are really disgusting they were laughing on our nandu manik should have bashed her and make sure that she was jobless in few seconds ...
Oh God nandu had this nightmare i am feeling bad for her i can imagine this as it happened with me when i got a fracture and i fell down it was really embarrasing (sorry for sharing mu personal incidents in this reply)...but she should not worry as manik is always there for her
I just loved the proposal it was a different situation but it was too good yaar every word has his meaning loved it just have one word for that it was simply beautiful...
And twinkle u wrote it so well i could feel the emotions when that girl spoke to nandini like that,when she fell down,when manik worried for her,when he was proping her just beacause of your beatiful peice of writting i loved it you r a package of talent u r such a brilliant writter
cont soon
Dhariya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Erm so I didn't read the previous chapter so I did both in one hit!!! This was just wow, slayed me as always!! The depth you go into, as I read it I feel like I'm watching them. Not sure that even makes sense but hopefully you'll catch my drift. I loved both chapters, amazing as always!
So you gave us a glimpse of what happened to Nandini, like talk about teasing us. Just as I thought we were getting the answer to what happened she wakes up from her dream, Not fair 😔 How long until we know what fully happened? I'm
getting so impatient 😆
Manik's guilt is really deep but I still have full faith in our Nandini, she always makes the impossible happen!!
Where is my mafia gang at? I need to go punch this Parissa. I know she's a character but this girl needs a tight slap. Who the hell does she think she is!!!! Talking down to Nandini like that, grrr!!!!! Protective Manik is just everything, loved how he put her in her place! Your whole paragraph that he says to her before the proposal is just love
he proposed.. MANIK PROPOSED... WHAAAT... GAHHH 🥳
You spoiled us on this chapter, loved it and I cannot wait to see how their holiday goes!

Love always
Preesha aka Your Soheesha 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aminahin

how on earth can smeone write so well good job girl take a bow that bloody witch if i was there i would have given her a tight slap how dare she she is comparing herselr with NANDINI has she gone nuts???stupid girl n n n the way u peened the whole conversation oh my my it was just outstanding loved it to the core n proposing in airport is one of my fav sight to see n u fulfilled it love u dear love u so much for the update u updated after long time n its worth for the delay fantabulous update n thnx for the pm dear


Thankyou so much dearie!!! I'm so glad you liked the chapter... I know even though I came up with Parissa's character... Trust me, I hate her just as much as you guys do lol but I wanted to make it as realistic as possible and the harsh truth of our society is that such shallow-minded people do exist.
Once again.. I'm really glad you love the update... All the praises mean a lot! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanha

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Thankyou so much!! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaroge

ok now this the most heart touching
love story ever just loved ever bit of it
love should not only being with someone in happy times
love is always strong one u be with the person u love
in their pain
loved it


So true! Pain brings two lovers closer. It makes them realise of their absolute needs of each other and I guess that's what MaNan are all about for me... They don't want to be together, they've always felt the need to be with each other.

Thankyou so much for your kind appraises and love-filled support! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love this... the proposal was so sweet, such a nice way to balance out the hatred behind the girls' actions and words...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I dont know if i told you earlier, but i love that your FF is more about the emotions.. This part has to be my fav, not because it has proposal but because you depicted fear of nandini , her helplessness to walk, her feeling of undeserving, esp the reaction she would get whenever she would be next to the perfect body that maanik malhotra has.. Because isnt that what people notice the first thing.. Thats just how society works.. They dont see dynamics, or strength, beauty that lies beneath.. They just see the outer beauty and nandini with her paralysis should be feeling this.. (btw have they never traveled anywhere in these 3 years? did she not feel anything like this then)
Anyways loved how some you showed immature girls eyeing that beauty and making fun of her weakness, while her insecurities make it even worse.. How maanik handles all this and it leads up to the proposal.. I think this is best proposal ever.. I dont know if you have realised yet or not, i am all about having organic progression to confession/proposal.. Dont believe in this specially planned events to do these things.. They can be done but i think these emotional organic ones touch me more.. Loved Loved it.. It was best BREAK ever for me from those crappy episodes i was watching..
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz update na
plz plz plz

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