Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
res. for once, i am not gonna make you wait forever with my unresing

Ohhh my heart. There are just too many Pheels right...just too many freaking PHEELS..Twinkie, you gotta stop playing with my heart this way, you gotta stop making me feel all these emotions. My poor heart, it can't stand it. This excellence at making your readers feel all these emotions, such power, such talent ! seriously 👏👏👏 You are my talent powerhouse 👏👏👏
I am going to be honest and say I was excepting a really happy types, romantic proposal at the airport but this, i was not excepting. Some people in this world are so disgusting, so sick minded that my heart breaks to know that such people such as Parissa actually exist in this world. And they thrive, they thrive on people's weakness 😭 My heart broke for Nandini, it just freakin broke so hard. I was literally talking to my screen and say no no when Nandini figured she could just wheeled herself to the gate and wait for Manik cause I had a eerie feeling that something bad was about to go down. And it does :( How can people be so cruel ? How could those girls hurt Nandini so badly ? She is a person who is paralyzed, her self-esteem is a all time low, she already feels unworthy of Manik and being in a public place and this ! this just makes her sink even lower. To read how Nandini has come to think of herself, like she was apologizing for her own tears ! My heart just broke for this girl 💔 (I will be saying that alot cause the chapter did really break my heart thou you patched it together again at the end) Your words today, Twinkie, how you expressed both Manik and Nandini's emotions today, you broke my heart with your words today, your seriously did. As much as that scene broke my heart, i am glad that you highlighted it. Because thou i am sure Manik understands how she feels, maybe now he will understand her issues with her impairment a little more, he will find a way for her to see herself through his eyes. How he still loves that Nandini that he fell in love with years ago, with or without a impairment. It's her heart he truly loves, outer beauty is the first to fade anyway. Manik wants to grow old with Nandini, and even when they are old and wrinkly, he will still love her just as much, if not more. And his anger ! his anger was so so so justified today. He will always be Nandini's alpha protector, he can't ever stop protecting her but i love how you always manage to show how Nandu is still his calm, fighting against his anger all the time, making sure it doesn't consume him, making sure it doesn't hurt him. Like 👏👏👏

There is an instant while reading that my heart suddenly stopped beating for a second and then started back up. And no it wasn't the proposal which was absolutely beautiful. But MY beautiful moment of the chapter was when he captured her tears in his palm, how her tears belonged to him, today and tomorrow and forever. How he vows to be her Humdard for life. How he wishes that she never has to shed one of her precious tears but he even if she does, he promises to catch those tears of hers and gift her smiles and happiness instead. I cannot express how beautiful you made that moment.
His proposal You Manik Maltorta is simply too amazing to be put into words, like i run out of words. I am all out of words to praise your excellence, your flair of words. There was raw emotion in his words, how he no longer belongs to himself, he belongs to her, every part of him belongs to her now. So freaking B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
And she says yes !!! there was never any doubt in my mind that she wouldn't say yes. They already belong to each other but i am glad that you didn't leave it as a cliffhanger.
Maldivesss...oh i got my wish for a place with gorgeous blue water and white sand ! Now i am so excited for their romance *Sunny starts daydreaming*

You writing was absolute perfection today, and i hope that i was able to express myself well enough for you. Seriously epicness went down in this chapter. Take a bow please 👏

I will forever love you for starting this beautiful story and gifting us such beautiful words to read.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle10


AHAHAHA... That moment when my sunny gets too excited and posts before the chapter is even posted :P

haha..shut up 😆 thou i did get too excited..lol..and i thought u meant the res as the chapters 😆😳
- Reya aka Your Sunny <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely update

loved it
cont soon


Thankyou babe <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
how on earth can smeone write so well good job girl take a bow that bloody witch if i was there i would have given her a tight slap how dare she she is comparing herselr with NANDINI has she gone nuts???stupid girl n n n the way u peened the whole conversation oh my my it was just outstanding loved it to the core n proposing in airport is one of my fav sight to see n u fulfilled it love u dear love u so much for the update u updated after long time n its worth for the delay fantabulous update n thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok now this the most heart touching
love story ever just loved ever bit of it
love should not only being with someone in happy times
love is always strong one u be with the person u love
in their pain
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG...!!! I mean seriously what an update...
I was feeling like crying on Nandini's state but our hero nailed it man...ufff hottie...
And those yukhiii girls..how dare they hufff..I want to slap that badtmz girl our nandu cried bcz of her...but no worries when manik is here...
Thnxx a lot for the pm..loving it...
Update ASAP...
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is such a beautiful story, I am really attached to it. Really well-written Twinkle :)
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow such a great update
each & everything was sooo
beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is the heart touching update.
I am a fan of ur this ss.
Really loved.
The pov ...the plot ...the emotions. ...

SUPERB. OUTSTANDING

U deserve a standing ovation for the fF.

I really love manik... manik'S care. .. unconditional love towards nandu.

And the proposal. ... my god tears fell down from my eyes.

Love it. ... its an extra ordinary ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all sorry for not reading the teaser (again!) but i just couldn't. i can't sleep at night after reading one of your teasers and am waiting for your update so desperately and from the looks of it thank god i didn't read it because i could have died...
coming to the oh so amazing chapter i have just one word MAGICAL! i mean i could see that shameless girl clearly😡 in front of me and that made me hate her even more! i know she is just a character but i just wish i could slap her😆 and the other who were making fun of our nandu!
but the main point is our knight in shining armor manik!!!!!!😳 loved how he protects her from the cruel world and the way he just so different with nandani and everyone else (so much like our manan) and then nandani just rescues him back by not letting him hurt himself. oh my god i am falling in love with these two all over again because of you😃

now the big one the proposal was one of the most romantic once i have ever read... trust me i have read a lot of books but no proposal has ever made me cry like yours did... i was just completely lost in that moment not able to breath till i finally reached the answer and yipppeee she said yes you deserve an standing ovation for this one because it was the best for me till now👏
i mean i have loved each and every chapter but this was just taking it to a whole new level. you have a gift of hypnotizing your readers. i was in their world the whole time i was reading. their bond and love, just perfect, serene and divine.


and as i always say update soon plsss😃


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