res. for once, i am not gonna make you wait forever with my unresing
Ohhh my heart. There are just too many Pheels right...just too many freaking PHEELS..Twinkie, you gotta stop playing with my heart this way, you gotta stop making me feel all these emotions. My poor heart, it can't stand it. This excellence at making your readers feel all these emotions, such power, such talent ! seriously 👏👏👏 You are my talent powerhouse 👏👏👏
I am going to be honest and say I was excepting a really happy types, romantic proposal at the airport but this, i was not excepting. Some people in this world are so disgusting, so sick minded that my heart breaks to know that such people such as Parissa actually exist in this world. And they thrive, they thrive on people's weakness 😭 My heart broke for Nandini, it just freakin broke so hard. I was literally talking to my screen and say no no when Nandini figured she could just wheeled herself to the gate and wait for Manik cause I had a eerie feeling that something bad was about to go down. And it does :( How can people be so cruel ? How could those girls hurt Nandini so badly ? She is a person who is paralyzed, her self-esteem is a all time low, she already feels unworthy of Manik and being in a public place and this ! this just makes her sink even lower. To read how Nandini has come to think of herself, like she was apologizing for her own tears ! My heart just broke for this girl 💔 (I will be saying that alot cause the chapter did really break my heart thou you patched it together again at the end) Your words today, Twinkie, how you expressed both Manik and Nandini's emotions today, you broke my heart with your words today, your seriously did. As much as that scene broke my heart, i am glad that you highlighted it. Because thou i am sure Manik understands how she feels, maybe now he will understand her issues with her impairment a little more, he will find a way for her to see herself through his eyes. How he still loves that Nandini that he fell in love with years ago, with or without a impairment. It's her heart he truly loves, outer beauty is the first to fade anyway. Manik wants to grow old with Nandini, and even when they are old and wrinkly, he will still love her just as much, if not more. And his anger ! his anger was so so so justified today. He will always be Nandini's alpha protector, he can't ever stop protecting her but i love how you always manage to show how Nandu is still his calm, fighting against his anger all the time, making sure it doesn't consume him, making sure it doesn't hurt him. Like 👏👏👏
There is an instant while reading that my heart suddenly stopped beating for a second and then started back up. And no it wasn't the proposal which was absolutely beautiful. But MY beautiful moment of the chapter was when he captured her tears in his palm, how her tears belonged to him, today and tomorrow and forever. How he vows to be her Humdard for life. How he wishes that she never has to shed one of her precious tears but he even if she does, he promises to catch those tears of hers and gift her smiles and happiness instead. I cannot express how beautiful you made that moment.
His proposal You Manik Maltorta is simply too amazing to be put into words, like i run out of words. I am all out of words to praise your excellence, your flair of words. There was raw emotion in his words, how he no longer belongs to himself, he belongs to her, every part of him belongs to her now. So freaking B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
And she says yes !!! there was never any doubt in my mind that she wouldn't say yes. They already belong to each other but i am glad that you didn't leave it as a cliffhanger.
Maldivesss...oh i got my wish for a place with gorgeous blue water and white sand ! Now i am so excited for their romance *Sunny starts daydreaming*
You writing was absolute perfection today, and i hope that i was able to express myself well enough for you. Seriously epicness went down in this chapter. Take a bow please 👏
I will forever love you for starting this beautiful story and gifting us such beautiful words to read.
- Reya aka Your Sunny <3
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 10 years ago