MaNan FF : Fusion Concert (Part 18-pg38) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
awesome...👏
u penned it beautifully...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Awesome part
Jst loved it.. Hot
Cont soon😃😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Finally Manik confessed to his nandini
Your writings are really awesome plz keep continuing and pm me if u can
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Awesome update...cont soon...
Waiting for more romance between Manan...
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loved it..
cont. soon😃
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#76
Awesome 😃
Update soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
why u stopped?? 😔 yaar like mera heartbeat stop ho gaya...
plsss next update asap.. and long one plzz... loved it much as it is.😳
a big 🤗 for you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicialtie

why u stopped?? 😔yaar like mera heartbeat stop ho gaya...

plsss next update asap.. and long one plzz... loved it much as it is.😳
a big🤗for you...



Actually mood ni tha .. Sorry ..! But kal pka a long update :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a cute update... loved her confession... looking forward to the next part. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 9

Nandini was just overwhelmed by her feelings... She just wasn't able to control herself.. She just wanted to go to Manik and tell him how she felt...
She decided that she would do it but in his style..
So she changed into a white shirt and pair of shorts and went down to confess her feelings.. 😳

Manik ( shirtless and just wearing his boxers ) was sitting in the hall and playing Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki...

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri..

(remembering all what had happened from yesterday night till today's morning)

Main tenu samjhava ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Nandini on hearing the music descended from the stairs.. only to be mesmerized by her monster smiling and singing so beautifully...


She came from behind and started singing ..

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
Tere dil diyaan raahan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta

He looked at her so lovingly..She looked so beautiful singing for him..

turpe meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hoye
Hun hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera...

Taking his hand into hers and sitting in his lap..kissed his forehead
Both smiled looking at each other and started singing..

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan kee
Na tere bina lagda jee...

She looked at him... Caressed his face with a soft fingers... Went close .. And whispered in his ears.. Close your eyes..
Manik : what? But why??
Nandini making her cute lil pout face which he can't resist ...
Manik : ok baba! Fine .. He closes his eyes..
Nandini makes him sit down on the couch and then kneels down and takes his hand in hers and asked him to open his eyes..
Manik : 😲 Nandini ye..
Nandini : Shhh... Kept her finger on his lips and said,"Manik Monster Monkey Malhotra..remember on our first official date i asked you bout that Mangalore-Mumbai highway and then you asked me ki mjhe kse pta?...
Manik nodded ...
Nandini : well that's because if you remember.. Tum kisi se takraye the n jar grne vala tha but you saved it and handed over to her..
Manik trying to remember and said ,"Yes .. par.. 😲 how do u know... Then trying hard to solve the puzzle.. ohhh to vo tum thi... And jar mei fireflies thi right? Saying happily.. "
Nandini : Yes! :D
Manik : oh my god.. I can't believe it.. That was our first meeting...smiling like a fool and remembering the scene.. 😳
Nandini : yes Mr.Malhotra and you know tbse hi mjhe pta lg gya tha ki vo jo bhi tha uske saath kch to conncetion tha and u know how? Bcz when u saved my jar from falling and as soon as u handed over to me ... Fireflies started glowing..
Manik interrupted and said : so? U said na fireflies spread love.. To usse tmhe kse .. Now confused!
Nandini : vo maine jhuth bola tha... And then she tells him bout what Mr.Khurana told her and Manik became sad on hearing that she was going to leave him but was glad that she didnt and Nandini gave him a iiss pn his cheeks then he asked..,"But fir jhuth kya bola tmne isme?"
Nandini : My mom used to say that fireflies glow where there is True Love and remember Manik our Kiss on the opening night of Musicana? How fireflies were glowing ( and they both blushed rememberinf the night) ...tabse hi mjhe pta lg gya tha that you are my true love Manik and i was gonna tell u this the next day but...
Manik remembered how he broke her heart that day ," aur maine tmhra jar todd dia ,I'm sorry again" and kissed her forehead.. 🥱
Nandini : clenching his hand more tightly said,"it was our past.. Let's stay in the present.. So where was I?.. Haan to tbse i knew ki we were meant to be and Manik after that my belief in US only grew stronger.. I was able to bring the best side of you.. You shared every worry of yours with me.. What was imp to u became imp to me..I didn't realise when I went head over heels for you Monster but I did...
Then standing and sitting his laps.. Wirh a naughty smile she said,"So Mr.Monster.. yes you might have hurt me made me cry... Aur mai aj tk itna gussa kisipe nhi hui houngi jtna tmpe hui but (blushing a bit) Aj tak kbhi Itna puaar bhi kisi se ni kia.. I Love you Manik...I'm hopelessness and Irrational in LOVE WITH YOU..❤️...and I promise.. From now on.. I won't let anybody.. Come in between us.. main Humesha tumpe Trust krngi .. humesha tmhe apni Prayers mei rakhungi.. hamesha..tumse ldhti rhngi and fir hmsha tmpe gussa krke and punch krke maan jaungi..(both of them had tears in their eyes but hearing this giggled a bit 😆 ) ... ayiappa...I Love him... And she hugged him tightly and Said ,"I love you,Humesha krti rhngi"
Manik : God! nandini... I love you so so so much...I'm never letting you go Nandu.. Tumhre bina mai jee nhi paungaa...
They both look at each other
In the bg..
Aasman Mila Zameen Ko Meri
Aadhe-Aadhe pure h hum..
Tere naam pe Meri Zindagi..
Likh di mere humdum..
Oh.. Sikha maine Jeena Jeena..

Manik : Now nobody can In between us and he pulls her close..
Nandini : Manik koi ajaega..
Manik : na! Koi ni aega.. servants ko chutti de di .. And Nyonika oit of town.. Baki sb busy h aj so... Its you n Me ...
😆 😉
With that he Kisses her.. She responded back with the same passion...
Clenching his hair and pushing herself against him..
...his hands slowly made their way upto her thighs.. Then to her hips...

She could feel the heat inside her.. Hormones jumping and asking for more...

They broke the kiss .. Panting heavily looking at each other.. She tried to move but he wouldn't let her..
Nandini : Manik ... Leave me na..
Manik : No...
Manik with his evil smirk said,"tonight you will be mine...
Nandini : But Manik chachi wait kr rhi houngi..
Manik : don't worry Navya ko call krke maine smjha dia tha to usne bat krli h chachi se and she has given permission for night stay so..
Nandini quickly got up and ran way sayin,"han to first u have catch me to make me yours Monsted"
Manik : hmm Nandini its gonna be so much fun and he went ahead to catch HIS SHINING STAR ⭐️

So guys.. Hope you like... i know thda lamba hgya ye confession ka scene but it'll be over soon and finally there will be alot more happening btwn Manik n Dhruv and also stay tuned to find out that who will perform in The Fusion Concert !
Edited by manya_189 - 10 years ago

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