MaNan FF : Fusion Concert (Part 18-pg38)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

So... Im just gonna start it with the day before the concert !

Manik is sitting behind the music wing

Manik : what the hell ... Iss Pandit ki to main ( boiling with anger & thinking bout how he couldn't do anything as it would create more probls btwn him n Dhruv if he did anything to remove him )
Nandini came there ... Thinking bout how she will win back Manik if he's not there in the concert with her!
She didn't notice him and sat on the stair just below his...
Manik was bout to say smthg but she started talkin the herself..
Nandini : Aiyooi Aiyappa.. Ky kru mai! Matlab ye Manik bhi na kya pdi thi isko Pandit ji se panga lene ki ab ek din bacha h n Dhruv ko bhi ni nikal skte .. Uske aur Manik k bich mei already itni problems chal rhi h... What bout my Hope... Jab Manik hi ni hga to kse mai jeet paungi n how will we get back together...

By then Manik had already came down n sat beside her and was admiring how concerned she was for him...
A drop of tear fell down ...
Nandini : ab Manik nhi maanega na Aiyappa
Manik wiping the tear said , " Hope karti rho, maan jaega"
And she looked at him.. First with a shocking expression thinking for how long he had been there and suddenly changing to the awe-ing one... Seeing how much he cared for her and how much he also wanted to be with her!
Nandini : tum... Tum kan aye.!??
Looking away.. Here and there..
Manik : Giving his famous smirk said ,"bas abhi !"
Nandini : Manik ab kya kre? I want to perform with you tomorrow.. i want US to win..
She held his hand and gave him her million dollar smile for which he could do anything..
Manik coming out of the trance of the beautiful image infront of him said, "Don't worry we'll figure out "
Saying that he went away,
Thinking to himself , " ab to sach mei kuch karna hi pdga"
So.. I tried giving justification to the current track as much as possible..
Tell me how is it? SHOULD I CONTINUE??
Part 1 - Pg 1
Part 2&3 - pg 4
Part 4 - pg 6
Part 5- pg 9
Part 6 - pg 10
Part 7 - pg 12
Part 8 - pg 15
Part 9 - pg 17
Part 10 - pg 19
Part 11 & 12 - pg 21
Part 13 - pg 24
Part 14 - pg 27
Part 15 - pg 29
Part 16- pg 32
Part 17 - pg 35
Part 18 - pg 38
Edited by manya_189 - 10 years ago

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_Naina15_ thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res.. will unress aftr reading.. :)

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Unress.. 😆


Wowwiiee.. It's amazing..
Poor Nandu.. She shud notice things..
It's totally amazing.. :)


Pls pls pls X10000 continue.. 😃

Really luvn the story..
Cn u pm me too? 😳


Thanks a lot.. 😃
Edited by _Naina15_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update soon and nice written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Naina15_

Res.. will unress aftr reading.. :)


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Unress..😆


Wowwiiee.. It's amazing..
Poor Nandu.. She shud notice things..
It's totally amazing.. :)


Pls pls pls X10000 continue..😃

Really luvn the story..
Cn u pm me too?😳


Thanks a lot..😃



Ya i'll pm u :D and thanks !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ofc u should continue, the most awaited concert so far, so eagerly anticipatin to read more...plz do continue , congrats ! 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice loved it
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon dear... and pm me too... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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He came down and sat beside her and boosted her mote to keep hoping..

It was so. Cute :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yean plz plz cont it
seems intersting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys i'll update in a day or two cz i have my maths exam day after tomorrow so :> .. Stay tuned :)

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