BEST FRIENDS FOREVER.. MaNanBir FF ( UPDATED PART 37 /pg143) 8/5

Dhariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

plz cont yaar

itni jaldi yeh ff khatam mat karo I toh want to know ki confession ke baad kya hoga

Plz itni jaldi khatam mat karo

Plz

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amrutha.shetty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

ya mee tooo agree ...wanna see all their frnds reaction ...nd after confession u can continue on how their frndship turns into relationship...😊nd even there is navya who is having crush on cabir😆

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ishika1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Hey plzzz dont end this story...make alya the vamp...and hurt nandini bcoz of her...n make manik angry..on alya thn cnfession.plzzz...n u can add more dhruni scenes

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susmitha.s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

No yaar u should nt complete just with manan confession bcoz its a story of 3 frnds yoi.should consider cabir alsoo.

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Eymane Goulamabasse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

The FF is so awesome I just love it! And in my opinion I think you should drag it a bit and make them confess after the performance...or maybe you can do something like in the performance alya tries to get close Manik and she confronts him that she loves him and he loves her too and then Manik gets angry and he confesses that he dosnt love Her but Nanidni..you know how it happend with the soha and Fire scent...that would be good...and also you can add cabir into this that he fills alya's ears that Manik loves her but it's his plan so that MaNan can come close and confess...if you get what I'm trying to say...I think I wrote too much...but this is just my opinion...😊

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zaroge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: musicialtie
GUY'S THANKS A LOT FOR LIKING AND APPRICIATING MY STORY.
ACTUALLY I AM DILEMMA THAT SHOULD I MAKE MANAN CONFESS AND END THE STORY OR YOU NEED SOME MORE ANGLES AND MORE PARTS. PLZ LET ME KNOW WHAT YOUR WISH.

With love ashu aka musicialtie

i think they u should make them confess really want that to happen

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

hey dear please dont make them confess so soon but yes please take that fake aliya out of the equation

do write some fun parts

please do continue

bye sumi

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Niya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: musicialtie
GUY'S THANKS A LOT FOR LIKING AND APPRICIATING MY STORY.
ACTUALLY I AM DILEMMA THAT SHOULD I MAKE MANAN CONFESS AND END THE STORY OR YOU NEED SOME MORE ANGLES AND MORE PARTS. PLZ LET ME KNOW WHAT YOUR WISH.

With love ashu aka musicialtie

angles can be brought up later na! first let them confess.. love u abi agar na b bolpaaye but they can b together for now!

update kab aayega!.. waiting waiting..

Edited by N_Niya - 10 years ago

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