MANAN-FF He is the storm of my life PART-31 updated pg110 - Page 63

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update!!
Wat Nandu did to dishank too good..
Twists omggg can't wait no heart attacks plss
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Posted: 10 years ago
yipeee u r back
m sooo happpy
d update was sooo goooddd
bt wt is d twis cmn up
plss continue ssooon waitinf fr it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..
cont. soon😃
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Manik was waiting for nandini impatiently in the class continuously looking at the door

AND there she comes in hurry settling her things in the bag

Her entry maniks expression was like 100watt bulb glowing with her presence

Nandini in a hurry didn't notice manik nd went nd sat on the parallel bench

Manik got irriate wen he saw that she didn't notice him

Manik called out -nandini

Nandini-turned looked at manik-hey hiii

Manik-hii ??? idar aao with u r bag

Nandini-kya hai manik udar se bolo .

Manik-nhi bol sakta idar aaoo

Nandini -fine gets up nd goes towards his seat -ab bolo bhi

Nd manik suddenly pulls nandini down to the seat next him

Nandini- by sudden jerk-shouts -aaah

Nd everyone turned back .

Manik was smiling

Nd nandini was fuming

Nd all the other nerds went back to their work tat was mugging up the book

Nandini-turned towards manik nd-wat the manik

Manik-I thought paralleling dekh dekh ke gardhan akad jaati so this position iss

Nandini-achaaa manik ye koi kich ke shock karta hai kya

Nd manik pulled nandini close by her waist -nothing darling kyun shock sirf tum de sakti hoo

Nandini-kya haath hataoo kyo dekh lega

Manik-achaaa ye baat then listen if I love someone I can't hold baack soo get used to it nandini murthy

Nandini blushes -nd arey waah mera dialogue mujh pe hi . I like it

Nd veebha mam enter nd manik removes his hand from nandini's waist

Veebha -starts teaching

Nd nandni was listenining nd writing notes

Manik was irritating nandini whole class

Manik was just looking at his angel tucking her hair behind her ers she was looking cute nd beautiful at the same time

Veebha mam was facing the blackboard

Manik gave a quick peck on nandini's cheek nd smirked

Nandini-in shock *hiccups*

Nd veebha -turned seeing the sound she asked what happened nandini

Nandini-aaa got tensed

Manik was controlling his laughter

The guy sitting behind gave her water bottle nd said-mam hiccups pani peloo nandini

Nandini-smiled at the guys -saying thank u

Veebha-ohh fine drink water nd turned nd continued teaching

Manik-patted the guy nd said-thanx bro !!

Nd turned nd found fuming nandini

Nandini took the bag nd kept it between them -nd made a angry smilie on maniks note

Manik-oops border haan

Somehow the classes finished

Navya was waiting for dishank to come out of his classes

He came out nd navy and dishank were talking

Cabir saw them talking-aaah ye ladki ko samjh hi nhi aata kya baad mai jaaye

Dishank asked tumarah mobile hai

Navya smiled -kyun no. chahiye

Dishank smirk-nhi mobile chahiye

Navya -kyaaa

Dishank -who mere mobile mai balance nhi soo call karnaa tha

Navya-ohh nd gave mobile

Dishank transferred the video of manan to navya's phone

Navya-dishank I wanted to tell u something

Dishank-actually who veebha mam talent hunt walon ke parents ke no. pooch rahi thi

Tum apna ur nandini parents ka no. dedo I will go nd sumbit

Navya-achaa ohhk phone me hoga manik ke neeche

Dishank smiled nd sent the mms to their parents through navya's phone .

Dishank-arey mere phone mai network aagaya chaloo phone no. sumbit karke aate hai

MANAN

Were chatting in the canteen

Nandini-was kal maine papa ko call kiya than d told him bring sujata's parents with him nd told them bhot bada surprise hai

Manik-really sach how happy would be they maine bhi call kar diya kal we will be back in delhi

Nandini-hmmm

Manik noticed nandini's tensed face -nd cupped her face -everything will be fine

Nandini-hold manik's hand tight-I hope.

Cabir-*cough* cough* love birds public u kno

Manan-aagayee aap

Cabir-aab chale

Nandini-arey navya kaha rehgayi

Cabir-who nhi aayegi chaloo

Mananbir left to their hostel

IT was night 8 PM

OUTSIDE GIRLS hostel

Nandini-yeee finally sujata u r back ab tumare saath kuch galt nhi hoga

Sujata from behind comes nd wishper -I knoo

Nandini gets scared - r u mad sujata idiot heart attack agaya tha

Sujata-hugs nandini-tight finally Iam home nandini thanks yaar

Nandini-idiot thanks mujhse chal andar chalte hai koodna aata hai naa

Sujata-koodna my work was tat only choriii but wat about him ye girls hostel mai rehta hai kya nd pointed towards manik who was hiding behind the tree

Nandini-turn him kaun nd sees manik tum kyaa kar rahe hooo

Manik-wohh ok fine I was concerned akele raat road pe wait karna safe nhi hai aur agar tumse kehta ki I will wait wid u ten u would give me lecture soo issilye mai jaa raha hoon

Nandini-haan fine goo now

Sujata-smiles -aaahaa wat a concern bhai hoo isske

MANAN -together shouted never

Sujata-ohk fine

Sujata jumped first

Nandini was about to jump too

Manik -calls -oyeee sunoo friend aagayi hai toh iss bechare ko maat bhul jaana ok

Nandini smiles

Sujata-bhul gayii who kab kaa ab rote rahooo concern concern hogaya toh aap utregi madam

Nandini-jumps

They both enter the room nd

Nandini-arey navya kahaan gayi nd sees a note on the dressing table

Hum aaj tumare room main hi soo rahe toh manage kar lena iam with Anjali in her room

Sujata-kya hua

Nandini-arey waha kya luck hai aapka madam navya kisi aur ke saath room share kar rahi issliye u got a bed haan

Sujata kept her stuffs

Nandini -jaake freshen up hoo jaa aur see kahana me I order for paas wala dhabha abhi aata hoga peeche wale gaate se leke aati hoon tab tak

Sujata goes

Nandini while going thinks to thanks navya for shifting nd goes into Anjali's room

IN BOYS HOSTEL

Cabir ,sunny ,manik were watching flim FAST ND FURIOUS 7

Though manik was least interested as he was in tension thinking about tommrow his parents

Sunny -yaar urgent hai abhi jaake aata hoon

Cabir rushes nd gets into the washroom- sorry broom era toh waterfall ho raha hai

Sunny-cabirrr kutte ab apne room mai jaana padega

Sunny was passing by nd sees navya in dishank;s room nd rushes back

Cabir-say kyu be raaste mai nikal gayiii

Sunny-ohho wait nd goes into washroom nd comes nd says phew- navya in dishank's room guys

MANBIR-what

Sunny-chal show dekhne chalte its hot there

Cabir-gets angry just shut up sunny he is trapping her its trouble

Manik -I too think the same chaloo guys

Manbir knocks the door nd gets in

Dishank -is all tensed tum log kya kar rahe hoo yaha

Cabir-kyun kuch interrupt kardiya navya bahar nikalooo

Navya- comes out

Cabir goes nd takes her out of the room

Cabir-asks her go into his room nd he nd sunny will stay in maniks room

Navya-hum hostel chale jayengaye

Cabir-r u nuts abhi iss waqt warden cooridoor rounds maarti hai soo latch lagake soo jaao aur kal subah 3 clock nikal jaana

NEXT DAY

Navya enters the room

Nandini-kaha thi tum haan

Navya-bola thanaa Anjali ke saath

Nandini-jhoot mat bol mujhse

Sujata-says chodnaa koi personal kaam hoga leave it

Navya goes into washroom

Nandini -but she

Sujata-says iam tensed nandini

Nandini-says jo bhi hoga acha everything will be fine

Sujata-smiles -iam sorry

Nandini-sorry kyun

Sujata-bhut saare reasons hai .waise tune aapne mr. concern ke bare mai kuch nhi bataya mujhe haan

Nandini-wohh who fine nd closed her eyes nd saw his face smiling nd started saying-

I love him . he is the one everything . my super support system. The one who presence makes me feel everything will be alright. MANIK a part my life

Sujata-woaa kya I mean tu itni sure about someone .tu toh har cheez ke liye confused rehti hai ten how so sure ki u love him .he is the one I mean he must that gud it seems .

Nandini-yup he is tat gud ki my parents too trust him with me . I told them everything.

Sujata-gals u r not even 18 yet or u soo sure about him

Nandini-sujata I trust him more than myself . he too loves me the same way aur kya chahiye proof ke liye he got me u .tum mere paas ho tats only becoz him. har bar har problem mai he was with mee.

Sujata-I declare officially ab se he is manik jeeju

Nandini-yeee pagal sshh

Nandini -navya lets go nd sujata stay here mai mom dad ke saath yaha se tumhe pick up karungi warden se bachke rehna

Manik -all tensed roaming around

Nandini comes from behind nd shouts -booo

Manik-gets scared -pagal hogayi hoo kya daara diya

Nandini -arey manik u scared itne tensed kyu hoo

Manik-papa yaar yahan se jaate hi boards ,ten iit-jee entrance ooh god bhut saare tension

Nandini- sees around nd pulls manik into corner

Manik-kya hai nandini

Nandini-hugs manik tightly-nd says abhi tension ho rahi hai

Manik-no

Nandini then kisses on his chest -ab

Manik-smiles -nd hugs nandini back-how can I love someone soo much

finally todays kiss did wonders to mee updating both my ff .

enjoy guys will give next update wen i come back to earth . now iam in hell uff soo much hotness yeeeks again kiss kiss

EDITED GUYS-


i have gone mad pagal hogayi hoon

Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ufff!! Such a long update... thanku
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oye ek hi cheez ko 3 baar Kyu likha hai
aur pm Kyu nahi bheja
iss dishank ki toh mein
Ayye class room romance
And hug and kiss hayeee
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.loved it
u posted the same thing 3 time
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

Oye ek hi cheez ko 3 baar Kyu likha hai

aur pm Kyu nahi bheja
iss dishank ki toh mein
Ayye class room romance
And hug and kiss hayeee
Loved it
Cont soon

thanks yaar for telling edited now wohi toh sochoon kuch zayada lambha nhi hogay 😆
pm nhi aaya oops my computer problem khatara it is shayad nhi gaya hoga i need through both the stupid net nd tis computer nd get the new ones nyways glad u liked the class room romance😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryapk1997

thanks yaar for telling edited now wohi toh sochoon kuch zayada lambha nhi hogay 😆
pm nhi aaya oops my computer problem khatara it is shayad nhi gaya hoga i need through both the stupid net nd tis computer nd get the new ones nyways glad u liked the class room romance😳

tere update toh vaise hi bahut ache hote hai air acha hai edit kar diya mein tin baar padh ke Pagal ho gayi thi😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...yaar...!!!!! awesome part...loved it
continue soon...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...😊

3 times...repeated...!!! but its ok...!!!! loved it😊
Edited by aavani - 10 years ago

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