MANAN-FF He is the storm of my life PART-31 updated pg110

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Nandini murthy a girl who has been a topper till class 8th yaa u may think 8th class tak kya rocket science hota hai nd al😃⭐️ lBut yaa nandini murthy- ⭐️famous among the teachers , seniors and all .what happened there comes boom!! Class 9th everything changed for the first time nandini saw a debacle in her subject that she loved MATHS🤢😳 its not she flung the exam but it was border pass ws the first time eva in her lyf .everything wat happened that it was lyk a shock to her and parentz were surprised and teachers also culdnot fig it out. There comes another blast she got transferred to delhi .after such disaster of xam she went to delhi to start fresh .to start again mingling wid ppl making frdns ,hell it was always lyk that.

Her knew school a quite popular one as it is delhi famous for cool and stylish city nd all. But

She was going in other zone she kept quite and mingled wid vey few ppl.and there she goes for her Sanskrit class it different class wid 10 children in it . as u know in delhi there were more migrants than a the Delhiwales.and here I found ma lingo ppl most of them were MADARASI yaa here everyone calls me that to top it my nickname here they kept i AIYOOO!!! Culd I can't even use AYIOOO😡

Her personality in delhi was like typical studious🤓 non talkative slient gal which was in true sense totally contrast to what she was.She maintained that imageas quite !!here comes again she had to change her section nd againbut foe her relief here she met her Sanskrit class frdns sso some how she managed to make a few frdns wee were termed as southiee gang. Rather sepecifically called as MADRASI GANG I mean how the think every southiee can be madrasi yaar leave it. Later she somehow managed o make friends they were Navya,mukti,alya, deeksha,and nivedha .i damn hated maths now i sort of had a phobia I say a gal who 100/100 in maths nw has phobia of it I say circumstances change ppl.9th and 10th was like usual she remained open to few ppl that's her gang other wise she reserved which was so not her. (Guess what that turned her lyk that ).

Aiyoo here it comes at end of class tenth ii get too here some one has crush😳. To be honest I was happy that after being soo slient nd reserve ppl notice me. Yya I was happydoing a happy dance lol that doesn't mean I lyk that guy okk.

Somehow due to my reserved personality he was scared to confess it to me thank god he iz scared because I hate to reject ppl yaar I don't lyk them to be sad just because of me but that doesn't mean I can say yes to any one passing by who likes me naa.

Here comes 11th culd u imagine even if having phobia of maths I took PCMB😕 and that goes wid my gang we all end up in same stream.happy moment.

THERE COMES THE MUCH AWIATED STROM ENTRY OF MY LIFE.

I found while going for tution my mom and dad talking wid an aunty and uncle . aunty called me "u have changed a lot from AGRA "yup iwas in agra during my play school I guess .she continues that he is still the same as childhood still notorious and naughty like thing.😕I was who HE?? Man and whoes tis Lady And my mom understood see my expression nd cleared it that uncle and papa were colleagues and they are thick friends their son is in same class nd wuld be going ma school. Ohhh like tat who cares I thought.who god damn will remember someone who u met during your play school yaar.

The next day at the school bus stop I saw uncle wid a boy it didn't took brain storming too identify tat he would be the soo called notorious son that aunty talked about uncle greeted me nd we ignored each other . I don't know but the moment I looked at him a sudden feeling of hate came who knew that I would be having million reasons to hate😡 him in future.

He came to my class and I must say at first day of school damn he made more friends than I had during ma 9th and 10th any I told my gang abut nd family connection that ws the stupidest thing ever to do giving them chance to godamn tease🥱me wid him how idiotic of me. OH yaa forgot to mention his name ya his name was MANIK MALHOTRA.

To be honest I was observing him all day and found him to be soo friendly wid gals such flirt I tell u. then shock!!! my friend alya be so extra friendly. Wid him irked😲 me soo see iam jealous hey wait don't get me wrong iam jealous for alya .they spending more time damn she is widhim most of the time than wid us . ahhh !! this guy .i warned her that stop talking to himand he iz a nice guys it seemed she ignored it completly.and then at bus stop I find them eating ice cream together here goes my mind blast . of that so called" kal ka aaya choraa " she is ignoring us culd u belive. I thought to control I will talk tommrow at skul to her.

IN BUS

Here he comes shouting that he talked to alya . I was what ws the big deal in that. I saw him telling this to cabir yaa he was my by TheTorntvs V10 1.1" style="border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; text-indent: 0px !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; text-decoration: underline !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;">ex tenth classmate nd also was in Sanskrit class . we talked but weren't sort friend types. I found there is something fishy.

Wokao what I found they were talking that "bet agar tune usey pataa liya in one weel toh dominos treat done '

And our over confident gadha says only 4 daysiz enough !!! wait what OUR itz only gadha ok.

I had sort of victory smile😈 lol as lyk beta ab toh tu gaya ruk pizza kahana haina ruk kal ka dhamaka.

I be the gossip queen called everyone of our gang nd told them here it goes our over senti alya starts crying that how could he.

GUESS WHAT HAPPENED IN THE SCHOOL

PRECAP - BIG TWIST TABLE TURNS TOWARDS NANDINI

ALYA AGAIN CRYING

ENTRY OF DHRUV

ND ALSO ENTRY OF 2 PEOPLE WHO U HATE THE MOST

Hit like if u liked its my first attempt plz ignore mistakes a I posted it in a hurry .hope I don't get tomato and egg splashed though this part is sort of intro of the lead characters next part izz going to be fun.

INDEX

part-1 - pg1

part2-pg1

part3- pg2

part4-pg5

part5-pg7

part6-pg9

part7a-pg12

part7b-pg15

part8-pg17

part9-pg20

part10-pg23

part-11-pg25

part12-pg28

part-13-pg33

part-14-pg35

part-15a-pg38

part-15b-pg41

part-16-pg43

part-17a-pg45

part-17b-pg49

part-18-pg52

part-19-pg55

part-20-pg58

part-21a-pg60

part-21b-pg63

part-22a-pg68

part-22b-pg70

part-23-pg76

part-24a-pg79

part-24b-pg83

part-25-pg86

part-26-pg89

part-27-pg93

part-28-pg96

part-29-pg 100

part-30a-pg102

part-30b-pg107

part-31-pg-110

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Really good one... N very interesting... PLz update soon...
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Originally posted by: BriNi

Really good one... N very interesting... PLz update soon...


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Yup the reaction from alya was u were right iam really sorry yaar tomorrow I am gonna kill him .

The next day at bus stop I constantly had that evil smile plastered on my face .

He observed it nd gave a look that tiz gal iz mad . And during classes going on alya completely ignored him nd I guess he understood the reason. Too that's why he cleverly escaped during lunch break I said to alya lets go to cabir nd confront it and went to his class( was in different section) . here I noticed both cabir and manik coming together I thought y r they smiing when they gonna get blast from alya. There she goes

ALYA's screeching sound "you idoit u bet on patoaying me how culd u do that haan u monkey luking face you too be wid him on this plan iam gonna seriously goo nd complaint that u r here keeping betting nd all nd wat nd wat u said only four days u need . "

All the 11th students gathered seeing the tamasha .and the jokers after the bashan starts laughing I was lyk wat the!!! Wat r they !!. AND here comes manik nd says who said this BS to u .alya points me out .he says nd u believed it she making joker out u theres nthng lyk that iam not interested in u lyk that I lyk somone else but I can't say her name .

NANDINI-( got damn angry and said )u just shut up okay I clearly heard u r convo wid cabir okay don't try to fool her okay.

MANIK- and what exactly u heard culd u tell us.

NANDINI- I heard that u had bet on impressing her in one week otherwise u gota give dominoz treat to cabir.

And u said I toh only need 4 days hai naa don't u say that tumne yee nhi bola.

MANIK- its the half story gal and where did u hear alya's name in here haan say did u hear alya's name.

NANDINI(shit I didn't. bloody hell)-( SILENCE)

MANIK- see I told she making u a laughing stock pity u alya.

Alya was in tears now I was lyk shit hw culd he be such aaa

NANDINI-wait a minute I heard u shouting in the bus that I talked alya what is there to celebrate about that.

MANIK- (shit this girl)

Cabir quickly came for rescue

CABIR-He said that to tease the person who lyks her.

NANdini-acha I heard him telling it to u soo u lyk her

CABIR- nooo way .!!! hey lady calm down there was someone else too there it was aman

ALYA - aman who ???

TRINGGG!!!!!! Bell we went too our seats then I saw again alya talking to him I was ye ladki ka mai kya karoon then I saw her coming to me said u idot it was SOHA on who they kept bet I was lyk no way it was u they r tricking u

NANDINI-agar aisa hai toh who tujhse kyun hi baat kar ta why didn't he talk to her

MANIK- ye u miss buri nazar!! Itz becoz cabir told me that alya iz pretty friendly so she can help me in it.

NANDINI -lyk kuch bhi miss buri nazar!!! haan kuch bhi hoo kisi bhi ladki pe bet lagna galat hi hota wwoh alya hoo yaa SOHA. PLz

MANIK- Arey she iz hot so wanted to be friends wid her isme kya buriy hai haan

NANDINI- go to hell.Alya plz ask u r friend to not talk to me haan I hate such boys.

MANIK- ohoo as if iam dying to talk to u.i too hate girls lyk u soo narrow minded.

Convo ended

Next day he had come for dinner at my house a his entry I tell u he finger got pressed between the doors.

I be such a sadist I was happy wait I didn't do anything ohh he only got him hurt ny ways I was dancing in joy that dinner we completely ignored each .

AT SCHOOL DURING BREAK

Our gang was together .i asked

NANDINI-alya do u like him .i mean manik.

ALYA- what noo yaar we r just friends . I toh lyk someone else .

ALL GANG - kaun hai chupi rustum batana humse chupayegi

NAVYA- arey aman toh nhi phir dono side se haan hai

MUKTI- nhi yaar cabir I guess

NANDINI- I know

Our lab attender haina alya who toh tujhe practicals mein kitna help karta!1

ALYA- what cheee!! Nandini

Ok I lyk lyk DHRUV

ALL GANG-DHRUV!!!!!

ALYA- yaa guys aur tenth classmate jo abhi cabir ke section mein hai

and we were talking there comes the guy who had crush on me coming from opposite everyone started teasing esp alya I warned stop okay otherwise

NANDINI-stop okay nhi toh alya aaj tera banda phut jayega I ll go nd tell dhruv ki u lyk haan.

ALYA- acha u giving me dhamki jaa tu bol tere mai guts nhi hai okay jaa bol ke dekha

Damn alya u didn't u kno nandini u challenged shit .

HERE SHE GOES

Dhruv was standing infornt of the class.

NANDINI -dhruv I wan't to tell u something

Mukti comes running from other side of corridor

DHRUV- yaa what

NANDINI-(closes her eyes)-ALYA LIKES YOU

DHRUV- OH!! Okay

NANDINI-okay???(what iz he okay what answer is that)

MUKTI- shit u told told him

NANDINI looked at mukti

DHRUV- turned before going into class- asked- waise who was it ARYA

NANDINI-no its ALYA 10th class u remember

DHRUV-

Mukti pulled me nd took me to our class . rumours spread so fast here I say.

I went to alya here I see her angry face she started shouting

ALYA-who god damn needs an enemy when I have a friend like I mean u seriously told him what he would be thinking of me haan

NANDINI- he thinks OKAY

ALYA- what

NANDINI- sorry yaar but I thought he should know u r feelings

MANIK- u r so called friends loves create public insult of u naa she having entertainment on u r cost I tell what a gal she iz

NANDINI-u just stop it okay.

CABIR-(comes running)-news sunaa aaj ka news lol ooopsserious situation I guess

NANDINI- cabir apne ye khambe jaise friend ko idar se le jao nhi toh kuch bura ho jayega

MANIK-ahaaan aahaan damki nd all what will u do sweetie!!

ALYA(shit idoit nandini ko challenge gaya aab tuuu)

BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nandini punched him shit soo much tamasha today .

PRECAP-

HARSHAD's ENTRY and ALYA-DHRUV INTERACTION and AS usual MANAN FIGHT.

Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Liked dhruv and alya and wow the famous nandu puch comes
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U r such a swthrt... thnx for update... plz continue soon
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NYC UPDATE... KEEP WRITING... 😊
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😆Nice ff.. Liked it a lot
Keep writing😉
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Nandini punched him ya manik yup .

Manik couldn't figure only what happened with him after a second of blank out he came back to sense and was fuming with anger he was bleeding .

Nandini stomped out of the class as it was games period for them girls gossiping about the incident and boys were teasing manik saying u got punched by a girl...

AT NANDINI's HOUSE

The phone rang and nandini was on full panick mode thinking that if he complained or something and all

Yup it was his mom's call and she was talking to my mom

MANIK's MOM- pta nhi aaj kya hua jab se aaya hai chup chap baitha hai aur ussey chot bhi lagi kuch toh hua i guess i just called to ask NANDINI

NANDINI's MOM- acha ruko mai useyy bulati hoon NANDINIii

Nandini here was thinking-shit he complained is he a nusery kid or wat shit ab mai mom ko kya bolungi it was first tym ki aise koi complaint mili hogi unko

NANDINI-haan mom maine kuch nhi kiya woh

NANDINI's MOM- tune kya kiya mai toh manik ke bare mai pouch rahi thi dekh aunty se ko bata

MANIK's MOM-beta kya issne koi ladai kiya kya kisi ke ladko ke pitai ki hai kya uss face kaisa neela pad gaya hai bolo

NANDINI- aunty woh woh

Sudden call cut hogaya

Thank god bachgaye

MANIK's HOUSE

Maa aap ko kya problem mai ne bola na ki mai gir gaya that oh phir kyun call kar rahe hoo usey leave it. I said naa

NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL-

Class was quite nd people were observing us as if we were some aliens we ignored each other

LUNCH BREAK

As usual we all were together our group chit chatting teasing each other

AS our maths teacher was absent soo we having our free period as it was a block period

We decided to play TRUTH AND DARE

At start it was us only the MADRASI gang

I kept condition that no dare on boys plzz

There comes soha saying I tooo wanna join

And our idiot friend alya who recently took the job of match making called manik tooo join

MANIK is he mad or he said fine with his chuddy buddies also came yaa cabir ,aman and abhi

Cabir(never attends class bunks his class was sitting wid us)

NANDINI- guys what about my condition??? HAAN

ALYA-chuck it yaar kitna maza yega saath kehlne mai

The bottle spins

Mukti and abhi

MUKTI-truth or dare

ABHI- TRUTH

MUKTI -arey ladki anyways have you ever dreamt about any girl of our class in that way u knoo biology ways??

MANIK- woa mukti haan !!

ABHI- lol yaa I have

NANDINI AND NAVYA- cheee very bad

MANIK- oh plz as u don't

Ok noo fights

NAVYA AND CABIR

CABIR-truth or dare

NAVYA-hum toh humesha truth

CABIR- ohhk have you seen Ashli pictures ( I mean nude)

NAVYA- woh who nhi dekhi humne

CABIR-jhoothi acha toh phir tum kaunsa biology padte jaan human reproductive system kapde phenke hote hai kya diagram bolo

NAVYA-arey who toh

CABIR- bas ab punishment guys

ALL- haann navya u have to

NAVYA-kya hai bolo

CABIR-kuch nhi sweety who huma raha lab attender haina ussey prop karna hai

NAVYA- ye hum nhi karsakte nhiii plz

CABIR- ok fine bas ye" kaho cabir aap mahan hai hai hum aap se shaama chahte hai humari befokufi ke liya "shoot jaldi

NAVYA- wat then after so much irrattion navya says the sentence

AND aLL were laughing

SOHA AND ALYA

ALYA-TRUTH or DARE

SOHA-DARE

ALYA- wat truth kyun nhi

SOHA- I want dare ok iam fine with truth too

ALYA- ok wat do you think of manik ??

Everyone serious

MANIK WAS DRINKING WATER SUDDENLY Spat out

SOHA- he is hot I like his personality

MANIK SMIRKING LISTENING THAT signaling nandini that he iz smart

SOHA- but like a friend only

NANDINI started laughing lol

ALYA- but y u kno he likes u naa

SOHA - because I have a bf

ALL-wattt kaun!!!

SOHA- HARSHAD

MANIK AND CABIR- kaun woh zombie

SOHA- stop discussion on me and continue

NANDINI AND ALYA-

ALYA- me dare

NANDINI- was thinking say she says dance on chittyan kaliya we will sing

Alya starts dancing

DHRUV -just comes to handover notebook and watches alya dancing as we all so dhruv but alya didn't notice dhruv nd came forward for giving notes to nandini manik pushed alya

She fell in dhruvs arm alya s eyes were closed and she got shocked see dhruv holding her and they came back to senses.

Dhruv rushed out and ALYA was blush and we kept teasing

ONLY 5 minutes guys last round

AS EXPECTED

MANIK AND NANDINI

ALL - hooo

CABIR- truth or dare haan

MANIK- cabir truth hi legi ussey toh bus logon punch kar na aata hai other wise she is a chicken (manik knew by challenging her she would take dare and as expected )

NANDINI-I chose DARE ok

MANIK- great so miss murthy your dare is tooo

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KISS ME WHERE YOU PUNCHED

ALL WENT SILENT AND even those who weren't playing came to see what is going to happen

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great update . continue soon

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