Under the Mistletoe Manan SS: Part 5 P.24 (Mar.14th)

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Ambylicious

@Ambylicious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

wow Hinal.. I am a big FAN of urs and u r my shinning ⭐️⭐️⭐️

u r really a gifted writer. the way you describe even the lil details actually helps the reader imagine the whole scene. 👏👏👏

I love the way they both compliment each other ☺️☺️

please please continue soon. and keep writing more we need ur stories especially during these trying times.

love u loads

Amby

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

lovely update...such a sweet and cute story...pls continue soon...take care😊

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AARMAY1

@AARMAY1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

awesome update... loved it...
Last line was amazing...😊
for next update....

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

awsm update

loved it

very nicely written

continue soon

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TheWhiteHole

@TheWhiteHole

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

hey hianl!
First of all thanks for d pm :)
and coming to this part
it is just awesome..messed nandu and cute manik.
There are many girls(including me) who are so like the nandu in your story..though i didn't had any encounter like this ever..(cause iam too young maybe) but..i can connect to this nandu completely.
And regarding this story.. I always had a thing for these kind of stories where the girl is so embarrased of herself and her encounter with her crush.. So im just loving it ..
Do continue soon :)

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@navk

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Awesome update

Poor nandini

Arre pehle usse kuch kane ko dedo lol

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Really very cute update like nandu's sweater..

Update soon...

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Arshirox97

@Arshirox97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

AWESOME!!!! Imaging what would happen under the mistletoe! ;)
Loving the story!!! Update soon!!

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Amekha

@Amekha

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Aww really cute story and really sweet manik

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nawshi

@nawshi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

wow this story is going great!!!! Loved it when Manik just straight out asks Nandu y she stares at him, what guts!!!! Poor thing was shocked!!! And the fact that her stomach keeps on grumbling, thats so cute but embarassing!!! I'm loving the small details ur putting into it. Eagerly waiting to read the next part soon!!!!!!

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