Under the Mistletoe Manan SS: Part 5 P.24 (Mar.14th) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so damn cute plzzzxx continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
This one's a great story, I loved how you have showed Manik and Nandini's characters here.. You write pretty good..
The instant connection between Manik and Nandini and their progressing story is interesting to read so please update soon.. 😳👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: appy111

U r good... Vvery good... Pls give regular updates


Thank you!! Will try to post the next part very soon! 😊

Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was lovely really
I so loved it


Keep smiling


Awwh, thank you!! :D
I'm glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Hey Hinal! I loved this part too! You have a way with words. The setting and the flow gets to the reader quite naturally. I feel so comfortable reading your story...
You sported a smile while writing this? I did too!
I hope you update the next one soon! :D


Hey!!
Awwh, thank you so muchh 😃😳
Your comment honestly means so much to me <3
Really appreciate it!
I'm working on the next part as of now.
It should be up by later tonight :)
Thanks once again 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really good... Please update soon and give us more of manan!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanshita171

That was such a cute update! Do continue soon :-)

Thanks for the pm :-)


Hey! Thaank you :D
Glad you liked it!!
Will try to post the next part very soon :)
And my pleasure for the pm! 😳

Originally posted by: aishu3003

woww i love d style of ur writing😳

and d last line😳

Trust me Nandini; you're anything but an intrusion."



awesome❤️
continue soonish😊


Awwh, thank you so much! 😳
I'm really glad you liked that line! I purposely ended it there because I feel that sentence has such an impact 😃 So I'm glad you thought so as well <3

Will try to post the next one very soon 😃
Thank you once again!

Originally posted by: kresham

This was a cute update...


Hey! Thaank you!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Ambylicious

wow Hinal.. I am a big FAN of urs and u r my shinning ⭐️⭐️⭐️

u r really a gifted writer. the way you describe even the lil details actually helps the reader imagine the whole scene. 👏👏👏
I love the way they both compliment each other ☺️☺️

please please continue soon. and keep writing more we need ur stories especially during these trying times.

love u loads
Amby


Ambyyy
Honestly your compliments make me blush ☺️
Thank you so so sooo much <3
Your comments always inspire me to keep writing 😳🤗
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Will definitely try to write more frequently!! 😃

Lots of loveee <3
And thank you once again ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey!
No problem for the pm!! :)
I'm glad you liked it :D 😳
Will be posting the next part very soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

lovely update...such a sweet and cute story...pls continue soon...take care😊


Awwh, thank you so much!!
Glad you enjoyed it :D
Next part will be up by later on tonight or early tomorrow for sure 😃

Originally posted by: AARMAY1

awesome update... loved it...
Last line was amazing...😊
for next update...
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Hey!!
Thank youuu :D 😳
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
Hopefully you think the same of the next part as well 😳

Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm update

loved it
very nicely written
continue soon


Heyy!
Thank you so much :D
Feels nice to read such nice comments :)
Will definitely put up the next part very soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mananpani

hey hianl!
First of all thanks for d pm :)
and coming to this part
it is just awesome..messed nandu and cute manik.
There are many girls(including me) who are so like the nandu in your story..though i didn't had any encounter like this ever..(cause iam too young maybe) but..i can connect to this nandu completely.
And regarding this story.. I always had a thing for these kind of stories where the girl is so embarrased of herself and her encounter with her crush.. So im just loving it ..
Do continue soon :)


Heyy :D
My pleasure for the pm :)
Awwh, I'm so glad you felt connected to her character!
I think one of the reason I had to write this out is because I'm in the middle of such an encounter so her emotions are literally the mirror of mine, which is probably why I feel most of us can connect to her character in this story 😆
Thank you so much <3
Will definitely try to update soon 😳

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